高三英语作文公开课.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,英语书面表达,English Composition Writing,一,.,Writing skills,How to improve your,writing,主要特点,记叙为主,稍加议论,旁带说明,What makes a good essay?,A topic paragraph,Some supporting paragraphs,A concluding paragraph,正确使用有关连接词,顺序：,first then later in the end eventually since then,to start with,转折：,but yet however while nevertheless on the contrary,递进：,whats more in addition furthermore,因果：,because as since as a result owing to thanks to,让步：,though even if even though as in spite of despite,条件：,if unless on condition that as long as suppose,列举：,for example such as as,follows take for,example,总结：,in short in conclusion in a word in brief on the whole,用适当的连接词填空,1.He was tired,he went to bed.,2.He made a promise,he didnt keep it,3.I agree to the plan.,the building of the factory will provide people with different jobs,it can save a lot of money,it wont do much harm to the environment,so,but,To begin with,Secondly,Finally,一个好的段落要有丰富的句式,1.,感叹句,2.,倒装句,3.,强调句,4.,省略句,5.With,结构,6.,定语从句,7.,各种名词性从句,8.,各种状语从句,利用不同的句式来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采,1.,感叹句,e.g.How disappointed he was!,2.,强调句,e.g.It was the young boy that helped the old,man.,3.,倒装句,e.g.Only in this way can we solve the,problem,.,4.,省略句,e.g.Come to me if necessary,5.,定语从句,e.g.The book which was borrowed from,the library,has been returned.,6.,名词性从句,e.g.Thats what I should do.,Practice,怎样使用丰富的句式和高级词汇,1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.(,使用名词性从句）,2.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(,使用倒装句,),3.If you work hard,you will make rapid progress.(,祈使句,+and,）,4.I wont believe what he says.(no matter what,状语从句）,5.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(,使用,V-ing,形式）,6.We all think he is a great man.(think highly of),What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things,.,Weak as I am,Ill make the effort,.,Work hard and you will make a rapid progress,.,No matter what he says,I wont believe.,Singing and laughing,they went back to school,We all think highly of him,书面表达例,1,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our village!,This,village is very small.It has nearly,100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since1978.,People here are richer than before,Now it is taking on a new look.,In the past,the school here was,very small.Now it has been,rebuilt.,The newly built teaching,building has 4 stories.It is the,most beautiful building in the,villageAll the school-age children,can study here.They enjoy,free education in it.,Thank you.,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our village!,This,village Is,a small one with/which,has,nearly 100 families and about,500 people.It used to be poor.,However,it has changed a lot,since 1978,and has been,developing very fast.,People here,live a much better life,than,before.Now It is taking on a new,look.,In the past,the school here was very,small,and most children couldnt,afford to go to school.,But,now it,has been rebuilt,and,the newly,built teaching building,which has,4 stories is the most beautiful one,inThe village.All the school-age,children study here.,whats more,they enjoy free education.,May you enjoy your stay here/May,you have a pleasant time here!,Thank you.,从什么方面来评价作文,structure,Is the essay divided into,parts?,Does each part have,a topic sentence?,content,Are,all the details,stated?,Is everything,to the point?,language,Does the writer use any,linking words?,Are there any,mistakes?,Is there any,advanced vocabulary?,Are there any,good sentence patterns?,二,.,书面表达六步法,审,抓,扩,连,改,抄,书面表达六步法,一,.,审题,认真读题然后找出基本要素,5W1H,何时何地何人为,何如何做了何事,书面表达六步法,二,.,抓要点,确定主要行为，配动词，注意时态，语态及搭配的副词，介词等。,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三,.,扩展成句,形成基本语义单位，把要点变成完整的句子，注意连词,.,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四,.,连句成文,词与词搭配 句与句相连,时间 空间 细节,连贯 呼应,书面表达六步法,五,.,查错改错,主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？语态正确吗？,有“半截话”吗？,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法,六,.,誊写,卷面整洁不一定加分,卷面潦草一定要扣分,!,书 信,方法指导,目前，随着对英语学习的实用性，生活性要求的加强，书信已经成了一,个热门题材的考查形式，常以提纲式要点作文的形式出现，话题内容也,紧紧围绕学生的生活实际，此类考查形式绝不是简单的对要点逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点科学合理的组织成通顺的语句，形成亮点鲜明的,高分作文。,常见的写作格式如下：第一段，文章开头：称呼（通常已给出）。第二,段，寒暄语句，引出写信的目的：寒暄句,+,主题句。第三段，根据提纲,扩展主题段落,:,主题句,+,扩展句,1+,扩展句,2+,扩展句,3.,第四段，表明自己的,观点，并结束书信主题段落：在最后要他谈自己的看法。第五段，寒暄,句,+,落款。,练习热点命题作文,假如你是李华，你的英国朋友来信向你咨询如何才,能学好中文，请你根据下列要点写回信。,要点：,1.,参加中文学习班；,2.,看中文书刊，电视；,3.,学唱中文歌曲；,4.,交中国朋友。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,3.,开头语已为你写好。,Topic,Dear,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on,.,/Im glad,to write the letter to you on,.Here are a few suggestions for your,reference.,First,it is important to,.,As you will,Then,it,also helps if you,.,Besides,it should be a good idea to,.,Because,.,You can,also,.,Im sure that,.,Please,next time/in the future.,Sincerely yours,Signature,结 论,审题，抓点,造句，成文,改错，誊写,背诵精彩范文,