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情,俗话说：“上有天堂，下有苏杭。”我很幸运，生长在苏州这块美丽而充满灵气的福地，而我的家乡,西山，更是天堂中的天堂。,文题二例文：,引用俗语，巧妙点出家乡“是天堂中的天堂”，激发读者的阅读兴趣。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,家乡的秋天是我最喜欢的季节，它就像一幅五彩斑斓的油画，在我的眼前慢慢展开，颜色是那么鲜明，线条是那么流畅。,而其间流动着的神韵，是那么让人陶醉。,家乡的秋天是丰收的季节。瞧！大片大片金黄色的稻谷，在阳光的照射下黄得发亮，直逼你的眼。那沉甸甸的稻穗在微风的吹拂下，如波浪一样，此,运用生动的比喻描绘家乡绚丽多彩的秋天，令人陶醉。,起彼伏，煞是好看。那满山遍野的橘树上结满了沉甸甸的果实，金黄的橘子在绿叶的衬托下显得更加艳丽，叫人垂涎欲滴。故乡的特产不只有橘子，更有那驰名中外的银杏、板栗等。,家乡的秋天是个美丽的季节。秋高气爽，阳光灿烂。站在山坡上，抬头仰望，是湛蓝湛蓝的天空；,紧扣“五彩斑斓的油画”，重点描绘了故乡“金黄色的稻谷、金黄的橘子”，展现出一幅丰收的美景图。,环顾四周，是俊俏秀气的西山；俯瞰脚下，是一望无垠的太湖，真是令人心旷神怡。山坡上的草，已经枯萎变黄，恰似给山穿上一件金黄色的外衣；红叶此时最为茂盛，它充满激情和活力，火红火红的，好像要燃烧起来，真可谓锦上添花；弯曲的小路旁盛开着点点金色的傲霜秋菊，更为西山增添了勃勃生机。,以山坡为立足点，多视角描写西山美景，突出家乡秋天的美丽。,家乡的夜是宁静的。金秋十月，丹桂飘香。皓月当空的夜晚不禁使我想起“每逢佳节倍思亲”的诗句，想起许多在外的朋友，肯定会和我一样，每到这时都想回家一趟，走一走乡间的小路，摸一摸弯弯的小桥，亲一亲悠悠的河水，那感觉有多惬意啊！,啊！家乡的秋天洋溢着果香，充满着诗意，让人深深地眷恋，这一切怎能不使我陶醉？,直接抒发自己对家乡的热爱之情，以反问作结，深化主旨，意味深长。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,【,名师点评,】,这篇不错的习作，亮点有三：一是抓住家乡秋天的特点来写，展现了家乡秋天“一幅五彩斑斓的油画”；二是语言优美，情感真挚。作品通篇洋溢着对家乡的热爱之情，语言生动细腻，令人陶醉；三是文中有直接抒情，也有间接抒情，二者结合运用，让抒情真挚自然，恰到好处。,文题三例文：,我的烦恼,学霸，学霸，考啥啥都成绩优秀，父母也就没有勉强要求我再去课外辅导补习了。在同学眼里，我是只快乐的“小天鹅”，殊不知我实际上是只烦恼的“丑小鸭”！,开篇破题立意，点明自己学霸的身份，点出“烦恼”的话题。,平时我考试总考得很好，令人有些小嫉妒。可那是因为我不敢考砸！像被饿狼追赶的兔子，若不全力奔跑，便丢了性命！,你看，这不，我的厄运来了,记得那是六年级上册的期中考试，一门数学考失利，将我从高山之巅摔进峡谷之底。课堂上，数学老师那失望的眼神；回到家，父母那低声的哀叹，都如钢针般扎痛我的心。课间，我本以为能听,说明自己烦恼的原因：不敢考砸。,到一两句同学安慰的话语，可等来的却是一句漫不经心的“考砸了哈”。一瞬间，心中脆弱的自尊崩塌，鼻子发酸，咽喉堵塞，两眼模糊，一股湿漉漉的东西盈满眼眶,“天哪，考砸了，就要这般下场！考砸了，我就不再是我？难道我就不能考砸一次吗？”,用一次数学的失利说明考砸的“下场”，“天哪”等词，直接抒发了内心的情感。,“人非圣贤，孰能无过？”天下没有常胜的将军呀！爸妈、老师、同学，你们为什么都这么苛刻地对待我？难道我就必须永远做班级的那个“,No.1”,吗？,一下子，我感到周遭有一股无形的压力从四面八方向我挤压过来，令我不知所措，令我呼吸困难,一连串的问句，展现出自己的烦恼，引人共鸣。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,其实，我也是一个贪玩的女孩。游戏是孩子的天性，课间，看着窗外飞跑而过的同学，听着身边好友嬉笑打闹的声音，我也想从座位上“呼”地站起来，加入他们的行列，可是另一个“我”告诫我：不，不行，你还是先完成上节课的作业吧，只有这样晚上才能做更多的课外练习。周末，当窗外的白云飘过，当枝头的鸟儿欢唱，当落叶翩翩飞舞,我都觉得它们是在向我招手，向我呼唤，我的心也随之飞出了窗外，飞向蓝天；和鸟儿一起歌唱，和叶子一块起舞；沐浴明媚的阳光，去聆听溪水的潺潺,写自己内心的真实想法，渴望自由欢快地玩耍。,“不，不，不行！你是,No.1,！你是老师心里的考神，你是同学眼中的学霸，你是其他家长口中的别人家的孩子！你的头顶上罩着一个灿烂的光环，你必须付出比别人更多的努力！”于是，我咬咬牙，收回那颗不安分的心，继续埋头书堆。,写自己的无奈之举，让人唏嘘。,唉，俗话说“家家有本难念的经”，学霸也有自己的烦恼,也许这就是成长的必然。关键在于我自己该如何摆脱“丑小鸭”的烦恼，蜕变成一只快乐的“小天鹅结尾回扣前文，再次点题，结构圆合，水到渠成。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,【,名师点评,】,这篇习作的亮点很多。一是选材很棒。面对“考神”“,NO.1”“,常胜将军”“别人家的孩子”这些灿烂的光环，竟然也有烦恼，让一般的人情何以堪？选材就出类拔萃。二是侧重心理描写，抒写内心的真实情感。小作者心神不宁、压力重重，在,题海与蓝天之间、在学习与游戏之间、在自由与约束之间抉择两难，矛盾斗争，有真情实感。三是寓情于事。小作者把抽象的“烦恼”寄寓于事件的叙述之中，让平实的叙事本身带上感情色彩。另外，作品语言生动，情理相融，也是作品的亮点。,中,考,真,题,（,2018,湖北咸宁）阅读下面文字，根据要求作文。,春天萌发、夏天繁荣秋天收获、冬天孕育，生命律动，需要发现；亲情醇厚、友情真挚、爱情甜蜜，弥足珍贵，需要发现；生命灵性、世事真相、人性善恶、人情冷暖，万象纷呈，需要发现,请以“发现”为题，写一篇文章。,要求：,诗歌除外，文体不限；,文章要有真情实感；,文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名；,不少于,600,字。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路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