高考英语写作专题指导人物描写介绍市公开课一等奖百校联赛获奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,高考英语写作专题指导,人物描写,1.be born in a poor family出生贫穷家庭,2.attend school 上學,3.at the age of 在岁時,4.during his childhood在他童年時,5.sense of humour風趣感,重點短語,6.be always ready to總是乐于,7.modest and honest谦虚诚实,8.be regarded as被认為是,9.have a gift for在方面有天赋,10.work hard at致力于,11.devote ones life to致力于,12.graduate from 從毕业,13.take an active part in积极参与,14.open-minded and optimistic乐观開朗,15.be admitted to被录取;考入,16.go abroad for further studies出国深造,17.be honored for因而受到尊敬,18.dream of being a writer梦想成為作家,19.make contributions to對做出奉献,20.have a strong interest in對有浓厚愛好,1.When he was a boy,he showed a great interest in maths.他小時候就對数學非常感愛好。,2.Born in a small town in 1812,Charles Dickens was able to attend school for only two years owing to his poor family.查尔斯狄更斯于18出生在壹种小镇,由于家裏穷,只上了两年的學。,有关句式,3.As a teacher,she is kind,helpful and patient,so all of us like her.作為壹名教師,她善良、助人而有耐心,因此我們都喜欢她。,4.Wang Ping,an 18-year-old girl from Class 3,Senior 3,loves reading books.王萍,来自高三三班的壹种拾八岁女孩,热愛讀書。,5.She is always ready to help her fellow classmates improve their reading.她總是,乐于协助同學提高他們的阅讀。,6.She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country.她為科研献出了壹切,對国家作出了巨大奉献。,7.He is considered to be one of the greatest scientists in China.他被认為是中国最伟大的科學家之壹。,8.She was awarded the Nobel prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievement.她因在化學方面的科研成就被授予了诺贝尔奖。,技巧点拨,1.简介人物特性時,多使用壹般目前時。若描,述人物详细的過去行為,则使用壹般過去時。,2.积累常用的人物外貌描写和性格描写的語汇。,3.描写人物性格特性時,可使用如下句型构造,丰富人物形象。1)“so+adj./adv.+that”,例：Mary is so diligent that she always comes first in her study.,(2)adj.+enough to do sth.,例：,Bob was,confident enough,to solve all the problems by himself.,(3)“a person with+n.”,例：,John,a person with imagination,is able to make up many new stories.,4.可使用副詞或“with+n.”的状語构造深入描写人物行為動作。例：,(1)David carefully positioned the cup on the edge of the shelf.,(2)David positioned the cup on the edge of the shelf with care.,5.使用同位語、定語從句、非谓語丰富人物信息。例：,(1)Mr.Smiths,an experienced professor,is willing to help and therefore is thought highly of by all his students.,(2)Chen Ming,who was once the champion of the English Speech Contest,is glad to share his learning methods with us.,(3)Zhang Ming,furthering his study at Cambridge University,does a part-time job to earn extra money.,典型例题,你校将在假期组织部分學生赴英国學习。作為该项目的负责人,你需负责将两位赴英學生的状况简介給英方家庭。,写作内容,請根据如下表格内容,写信給英方家庭简介這两位學生的状况。,姓名,李华,陈伟,特点,开朗、乐观待人友善,.,有点害羞,爱好,体育活动、阅读、听音乐,与李华一样,担心的问题,饮食不习惯,沟通困难,期望,多了解英国的历史文化,多交朋友，提高英语水平,例題导写,1.弄清写作内容。考生需要對比、简介李华和陈伟两位學生特點、愛好、紧张的問題和期望這四方面的状况。有两种写作思绪供选择，思绪壹：先简介完李华的状况,再简介陈伟的状况。思绪二：對比地简介李华和陈伟在特點、愛好等四個方面的状况。學生可使用but,while,however,on the contrary等连詞和副詞(短語)承接句子。,2.确定全文時态。描写人物特性，应使用壹般目前時。陈說“期望”時,也可使用壹般未来時。,3.切忌生硬翻译表格内容。部分學生也許會根据表格直译,写成：The character of Li Hua is optimistic and active.Li Huas hobbies are sports,reading and listening to music.地道的体現应當是：Li Hua is(considered to be)optimistic and active.Li Hua is keen on sports,reading and listening to music.,4.本文波及人物在相似方面的描述,写作時要注意变换体現,增添語言色彩。請尝试使用多种体現翻译：,(1)愛好、喜欢like to do;like doing;be keen on;be fond of;enjoy(doing)sth.;be interested in,(2)紧张、胆怯,be worried about sth.;be worried that.;worry about sth.;be concerned about sth.;be afraid of sth.;be afraid that.;sb.fear that.,(3),习惯、适应,(3)adapt(oneself)to;accustom oneself to;be/get accustomed to;be/get used to,(4),做,有困难,(4)find it difficult to do;have difficulty/trouble in doing sth./with sth.,(5),期望,(5)look forward to(doing)sth.;hope/long/desire/expect to do sth.;be eager to do sth.,参照范文,Dear Mr.&Mrs.Smith，,Thank you for your offer to host two of our students.The boys names are Li Hua and Chen Wei.Here is a little bit about them.,Li is an open-minded and optimistic boy and Chen Wei is very friendly but a little shy.Both boys love sports,especially basketball and football and they also enjoy reading and listening to music.As its the first trip to the U.K,they both feel a little anxious.,Li Hua is worried that he has trouble adjusting to British food while Chen Wei is more concerned about being able to communicate clearly with others.Li Hua is really looking forward to learning more about the history of UK and culture and Chen is eager to make some new friends and improve his English.,Once again thank you for your generosity.,Sincerely Yours,，,Secretary of the project,5.,连句成篇,能力提高,Li Hua is active and optimistic while,Chen Wei is friendly and a bit shy.However,they both enjoy playing sports,reading and listening to music.When it comes to what they worry about,Li Hua is concerned about(1)_ and Chen Wei is afraid of the situation(2)_,_.,in which he will have difficulty in,communicating with others,whether he will be accustomed to the diet,In terms of their expectations,Li Hua desires to(3)_,_.As for Chen Wei he wants to(4)_ _ and improve his English.,know more about the,culture and history of Britain,make more,friends,2.請尝试使用不壹样体現完毕句子翻译。,(1)他是個既聰颖又友好的人。,He is _,_.,(2)他是如此的诚信,以致所有认识他的人都夸奖他。,He is _those who know him all _him.,He is _those who know him all _ him.,both smart and friendly/clever as well as friendly/intelligent and nice(as well),such an honest person that,think highly of,so honest that,praise,(3)他的谦虚,給我們留下了很深刻的印象。,His _left us a deep _.,We were all _.,(4)每當我們向他求援時,他總是很耐心地协助我們。,Whenever we _,he will always help us _.,Every time we _,he will always _.,modesty,impression,deeply impressed by his modesty,ask him for help,patiently,give us a helping hand with patience,turn to him for help,课堂练习,你校同學李华刚被评為“广州三好學生(Merit Student of Guangzhou)”,如下是李华的個人资料：,姓名,李华,现任职务,学校学生会主席、班长,爱好,阅读、运动、登山,特长,演讲、英语口语、钢琴,曾获奖项,学校英语演讲比赛一等奖、校园才艺大赛第一名,师生评价,李华乐观开朗、多才多艺,(versatile),是一名深受师生喜爱的学生,写作内容,請根据以上表格内容,在校园博客上宣传简介李华,内容包括：,1.李华刚被评為“广州市三好學生”,呼吁大家向她學习；,2.李华現任职务、愛好、专長、曾获奖项;,3.師生對李华的评价。参照范文,Li Hua,who has just been awarded with the title of Merit Student of Guangzhou,is the model that we should learn from.Li Hua,the monitor and the chairman of the Students Union of our school,likes reading,sports and mountain climbing.,She is good at delivering speeches,oral English speaking and playing the piano as well.With her hard work,she once won the champion of the School English Speech Contest and came first in the talent show of our school.Li Hua,considered as optimistic and versatile,is liked by both students and teachers.,课外作业,参照范文,Charles Dickens,a famous novelist of England,was born in February,1812 and passed away in June,1870.When he was young,his family lived in poverty and therefore he was forced to work in the factory.,Later,he developed an interest in writing and came up with many novels which showed the poor situation of the inferior group.Deeply affected by his childhood experiences,his writings reflected the darkness and unfairness of the society of his time.Many of his works are still popular in the world.,