英语读写训练记叙文市公开课一等奖百校联赛优质课金奖名师赛课获奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,读写任务写作指导,记叙文,Narration,1/40,Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.,Last Sunday I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod,（钓鱼竿）,with bait,（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff,（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.,Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约,150,字短文。,2/40,Suddenly,I understand what he said.I must learn to be patient.Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently.I felt a fish touch the bait,but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to,reel it in,（卷收钓鱼线）,.At last,I caught it.This made me very happy.In the following six hours,I caught over 10 fish.,On my way home,I thought what had happened on the bank.I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.,3/40,写作内容,1),以约,30,个词概括短文关键点；,2),然后以约,120,个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到,耐心主要性一次经历,，并包含以下关键点：,a),叙述你认识到耐心主要性一次真实或虚构经历；,（一定要有结果）,b),你是怎样认识到耐心主要性；,c),耐心对你生活、学习有什么影响。,写作要求,(1),能够参考阅读材料篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中句子；,(2),标题自定。,4/40,读,A narrative(,记叙文,).,写,A narrative(,记叙文,).,写作模板,四部曲,5/40,叙事类文章写作模板：,1.,Title(,题目）,1,分 有时不一定要求写标题,2,.,Summary,(,概要 约,30-40,个词,)5,分,3,.,Body,(,正文,)19,分,1)A transitional sentence,(,过渡句引出例子,),2)An example,and so on,(,举一个相同主题例子,再按题目要求谈感受或,发表看法等,),4.,Ending,(,结尾点题,),6/40,What should we pay attention to,when writing a title?,第一步,.Title,7/40,Suggestions:,What should we pay attention to,when writing a title?,We should use,a noun phrase or a sentence,as a title.,2.The,first letter,of every word in a title should be written in,a capital(,大写,)letter,except articles(,冠词,),prepositions(,介词,)and conjunctions(,连词,).,3.The number of a title had better not be more than,10,words.,8/40,写作内容,1),以约,30,个词概括短文关键点；,2),然后以约,120,个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到,耐心主要性一次经历,，并包含以下关键点：,a),叙述你认识到耐心主要性一次真实或虚构经历；,（一定要有结果）,b),你是怎样认识到耐心主要性；,c),耐心对你生活、学习有什么影响。,写作要求,(1),能够参考阅读材料篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中句子；,(2),标题自定,。,9/40,Whats the title that we should use?,1.Patience Is Important.,2 The Important of Patience.,3 How Importance Patience Is.,4 Patience Is the Secret of Success.,5 The Key to Success,Patience,10/40,summary,?,Writing,How to write a,第二步,summary,11/40,速读文章，找出要素：,When(,时间,),：,Where(,地点,),：,Who(,人物,),：,What(,事件,),How(,发展经过）,Result(,结果,),：,What to learn(,如篇末有点题语句，或升华主题，或点明给人们启示，或经念教训）,skills,12/40,Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.,Last Sunday I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod,（钓鱼竿）,with bait,（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff,（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.,Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to himwanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约,150,字短文。,13/40,Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.,Last Sunday,I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod,（钓鱼竿）,with bait,（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff,（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.,Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约,150,字短文。,14/40,Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.,Last Sunday,I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod,（钓鱼竿）,with bait,（鱼饵）,I sat down,on,the bank of the lake,.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff,（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.,Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约,150,字短文。,15/40,Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.,Last Sunday,I,went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod,（钓鱼竿）,with bait,（鱼饵）,I sat down,on,the bank of the lake,.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff,（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.,Just then,I saw,an old man,sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约,150,字短文。,16/40,Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.,Last Sunday,I went fishing,.After setting up my fishing rod,（钓鱼竿）,with bait,（鱼饵）,I sat down,on,the bank of the lake,.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff,（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.,Just then,I sawan old man,sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约,150,字短文。,17/40,Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.,Last Sunday,I went fishing,.After setting up my fishing rod,（钓鱼竿）,with bait,（鱼饵）,I sat down,on,the bank of the lake,.But two hours later,I,didnt catch any fish,.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff,（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.,Just then,I saw,an old man,sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约,150,字短文。,18/40,Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.,Last Sunday,I went fishing,.After setting up my fishing rod,（钓鱼竿）,with bait,（鱼饵）,I sat down,on,the bank of the lake,.But two hours later,I,didnt catch any fish,.I,got very angry,and began to pack up my stuff收拾东西）,preparing to go back home,.,Just then,I saw,an old man,sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约,150,字短文。,19/40,Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.,Last Sunday,I went fishing,.After setting up my fishing rod,（钓鱼竿）,with bait,（鱼饵）,I sat down,on,the bank of the lake,.But two hours later,I,didnt catch any fish,.I,got very angry,and began to pack up my stuff,（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home,.,Just then,I saw,an old man,sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.,Its very important to be patient,”,the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约,150,字短文。,20/40,Suddenly,I understand what he said.I must learn to be patient.Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently.I felt a fish touch the bait,but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to,reel it in,（卷收钓鱼线）,.At last,I caught it.This made me very happy.In the following six hours,I caught over 10 fish.,On my way home,I thought what had happened on the bank.I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.,21/40,Suddenly,I understand what he said.I must learn to be patient.Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently.I felt a fish touch the bait,but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to,reel it in,（卷收钓鱼线）,.At last,I caught it.This made me very happy.In the following six hours,I,caught over 10 fish,.,On my way home,I thought what had happened on the bank.I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.,22/40,Suddenly,I understand what he said.I must learn to be patient.Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently.I felt a fish touch the bait,but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to,reel it in,（卷收钓鱼线）,.At last,I caught it.This made me very happy.In the following six hours,I,caught over 10 fish,.,On my way home,I thought what had happened on the bank.I gradually,realized that the secret of success was patience.,23/40,Summary,1.,Focus on main ideas and,omit,(,省去,)examples,details,.(,重视大意，省去详细例子、细节,),2.Do not include your own opinion,but be sure to,use your own words.,.(,不能添加自己见 解，不过要用自己语言概括,）,3.,Write it in the,third,person.,（第三人称）,4.Control the number of words about 30.(25-40,个字之内不会造成扣分,),5.,How to check the summary:,看关键点看人称看时态看语法看结构,24/40,2.How to summarize a story:,Skill:Combination of five elements,要素串联法,What,Who,When,Where,Result,What to learn,(,主题,),was taught a lesson by an old man,the writer and an old man,when going fishing last Sunday,on the bank of the lake,Patience is important.,Patience is the secret of success.,caught some fish,25/40,套用语句,记叙文摘要开头语,:,1The passage mainly tells us the writers,experience,of,2.The writer tells us his,experience of,3 The story/passage is about,4 The writer/author tells us about.,5 The story mainly tells us that,主题句,+,支撑句,故事写作目标,/,主题,（一句）,+,故事大意（两三句）,26/40,In this passage,the writer mainly tells,us his experience of,fishing and was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man.,He knew the importance of patience and finally got some fish.(33 words,）,my version for the summary,27/40,过渡句,+,经历,+,观点,观点：教育意义、故事告诉我们什么道理，务必要和材料一致。,第三步 正文,28/40,叙述类似经历过渡句,1,.,This story reminds me of,a similar,experience,of mine.,2,.,I had,a similar experience.,3,.,I once had,a similar experience,.,4,.,I also had the,same experience,as the writer.,5,.,This made me think of my,own,experience.,29/40,+,引出个人经历标志性句子：,.,Once,I,.,One day,.,On a Sunday morning last summer,.,Last year,30/40,第四步,Ending,（总结句，呼应主题）,总结句开头语：,1 To sum up/In short/In conclusion/All in all,总之,2.From the above two stories,we can see that+(,主题）,3.Now,whenever I,，,Ill think of+,4 From then on,I,31/40,All in all,patience is very important.,（点题）,Everyone should have patience to do everything.,My version,32/40,本文写作框架：,The passage mainly tells us the experience of,This story reminds me of a similar experience of mine.One day,I At first,I But just then,Finally,.And being patient is also important in my study and life.,From then on,I,.,Title,33/40,读写任务写作模模板,叙述类似经历过渡句,描写经历标志性句子,概括标志性句子和方法,记叙文结论句,Remember,Summing up,34/40,Homework,Finish the whole composition,using,the ways,we learned in this period.,35/40,Thanks!,36/40,Lets enjoy the possible version for the original passage!(Using the bus-waiting situation),37/40,In this passage,the writer mainly tells,us his experience of,fishing and was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man.,He knew the importance of patience and finally got some fish.(33 words,）,Patience Is the Secret of Success,38/40,I have a similar experience.,Once I,waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minutes,no bus came.I couldnt wait any longer and decided to walk to school.But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute,I would have caught it.If I wanted to take the next bus,I would have to wait for another 30 minutes.Only then did I realize the importance of patience.Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made.Patience also plays an important part in our study and work.With it we can achieve greater success.(110 words),39/40,Now,whenever I am to lose my patience,Ill think of the experience of waiting for a bus.,(18 words),(161 words),40/40,