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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,书面表示训练,怎样审题、怎样遣词造句,1/34,怎样审题,最近，你校师生帮助辍学李明同学返校。请依据下表提供信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍这一情况。,李明情况,师生情况,1、学习好；品德好；,2、父病故；母病重；,3、退学；,1、震惊；,2、捐款、募捐；,3、使李明返校学习；,注意：1、信开头已为你写好。,2、词数：100左右。,3、参考词汇：捐款 offer money;,募捐collect money,范例 1,2/34,如何审题？,1、审定体裁、题材；,2、审定人称；,3、审定时态；,4、审定关键点；,5、审定结构。,3/34,1.审定体裁,、,题材：,2.审定人称：,3.审定时态：,4.审定关键点：,5.审定结构：,书信、李明遭遇,第三和第一人称,现在时、过去时,李明1.2.3；师生1.2.3.,可分为两部分,审题提醒,李明情况,师生情况,1、学习好；品德好；,2、父病故；母病重；,3、退学；,1、震惊；,2、捐款、募捐；,3、使李明返校学习；,最近，你校师生帮助辍学李明同学返校。请依据下表提供信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍这一情况。,4/34,Li Ming was one of the students in our school.,He was good at his studies and always ready to help others.,His father died and his mother is seriously ill in bed.,He had to leave school.,李明情况,1、学习好；品德好；,2、父病故；母病重；,3、退学；,学生习作,怎样遣词造句,5/34,师生情况,1、震惊；,2、捐款、募捐；,3、使李明返校学习；,The whole school was shocked at the news.,Every teacher and student offered money to him.They went out to collect money for him.,With their help,Li Ming returned to school soon.,学生习作,怎样遣词造句,6/34,Dear editor,，,Im writing to tell you what the teachers and students have done to help a student who discontinued his studies in our school.,Li Ming is a student of our school.He is,not only,good at his studies,but also,always ready to help others.,But,he had to leave school,because,his father died and his mother is seriously ill.,As a result,he had to make money to help his family.,Hearing the news,all the teachers and students were shocked.,In order to,help Li Ming,we decided to offer money to him,and,some students went out to collect money for him in the streets.,With our help,Li Ming has already returned to school.With best wishes!(100),Yours,Wei Fang,定稿誊写,7/34,实际操演,假如你班要就“怎样为高考做准备”开一个班会，请依据以下内容写一篇讲话稿，备考过程中要注意谈谈你对要注意事项及提议理由：,1.保持良好心态有利于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难勇气。,2.目标明确、正确评价自己。太低目标使人松懈，太高目标使人丧失信心,3.与父母、老师或同学沟通帮助走出困境,4.作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛精力。,注意：,1.词数100左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）,2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,3.参考词汇：明确（definite）评价（estimation）,No doubt every Senior 3 students wishes to be successful in the National college Entrance Examination._,8/34,关键点,1.保持良好心态有利于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难勇气。,2.目标明确、正确评价自己。太低目标使人松懈，太高目标使人丧失信心,3.与父母、老师或同学沟通帮助走出困境,4.作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛精力。,9/34,怎样遣词造句,表示原因,1）There are three reasons for this.,2）The reasons for this are as follows.,3）The reason for this is obvious.,4）The reason for this is not far to seek.,5）The reason for this is that.,6）We have good reason to believe that.,表示好处,1）It has the following advantages.,2）It does us a lot of good.,3）It benefits us quite a lot.,4）It is beneficial to us.,5）It is of great benefit to us.,表示坏处,1）It has more disadvantages than advantages.,2）It does us much harm.,3）It is harmful to us.,10/34,怎样遣词造句,表示主要、必要、困难、方便、可能,1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）for sb.to do sth.,2）We think it necessary to do sth.,3）It plays an important role in our life.,表示办法,1）We should take some effective measures.,2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）,the difficulties.,3）We should do our utmost in doing sth.,4）We should solve the problems that we are,confronted（faced）with.,11/34,怎样遣词造句,表示事实、现实状况,1）,We cannot ignore the fact that.,2）No one can deny the fact that.,3）There is no denying the fact that.,4）This is a phenomenon that many,people are interested in.,5）However，thats not the case.,表示看法,1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different,attitudes towards sth.,2）People have different opinions on this problem.,3）People take different views of（on）the question.,4）Some people believe that.Others argue that.,12/34,怎样遣词造句,表示结论,1）In short，it can be said that.,2）It may be briefly summed up as follows.,3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that.,套语,1）Its well known to us that2）As is known to us，.,3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about.,4）From the graph（table，chart）listed above，it,can be seen that.,5）As a proverb says，“Where there is a will，,there is a way”.,13/34,请依据下面提要写一篇说理文。提要：(1)时间比金钱更宝贵。(2)要珍惜时间，因为时间一去不复返。(3)要充分利用时间。(4)浪费时间就是浪费生命。5养成珍惜时间良好习惯。要求：(1)题目Time Is More Valuable Than Money(2)字数：120140。Time Is More Valuable Than Money People often say,“Time is money,”But in fact time is more valuable than money.Why?Because when money is spent,we can earn it back.However,when time is lost,it will never return.This is the reason why we must value time.The time we have is limited.Every second is precious.We should make full use of our time.But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time.They kill away their time chatting,smoking,drinking or gambling,They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life.In a word,we should get into the good habit of saving time.Do not leave what can be done today until tomorrow.Laziness will not only bring us failure but also lead us to the road of poverty.,14/34,请以Why are Bicycles so Popular in China?为题，依据以下关键点用英语写一篇120词左右短文。1.大多数中国人居住地方离上班或上学地点不远，骑自行车很方便。而且，骑自行车是锻炼身体好方法。2.自行车是一个很方便交通工具(means of transportation)，骑自行车做短途旅行，想到哪都能够。3.骑自行车能够节约能源，降低空气污染。Why are Bicycles so Popular in China?Bicycles are a convenient means of transportation.People can go wherever they like by bike on a short trip.It is easy to go to work or school by bike because most of the Chinese live not far away from where they work or study.Riding bicycles is also good exercise,which can help build peoples bodies.Whats more,riding bicycles can save energy.China has a population of more than 1,300 million.As bicycles are not expensive,almost every family has one.Now each family in China has at least a bike instead of a car.Thus a great deal of energy is saved and serious air pollution is reduced.Thats why bicycles are so popular in China.,15/34,假如你是Amy，请你给你网友Joan发一封电子邮件告诉她你在老师帮助下学习英语一些改变和取得进步。1过去：认为学英语就是背语法规则和英语单词：不喜欢读英语，更不愿意和同学练习对话。2现在：意识到英语是说出来，开始喜欢讲英语并和同学用英语交流；经常上网阅读一些新英语文章并查阅一些英语资料，对英语越学越感兴趣而且取得了很大进步。注意：词数100左右，开头已给出，不记入词数。生词：互联网internet 软件 software Dear Joan,Hello!I m glad to send you an e-mail to tell you that I m getting more and more interested in English.Yours sincerely,Amy,16/34,Dear Joan,Hello!I m glad to send you an e-mail to tell you that I m getting more and more interested in English.However,in the past I thought learning English meant learning grammar rules and words by heart.I didnt like to read or speak English,nor was I willing to practice dialogues with my classmates.Now with my English teachers help,I came to realize we learn to speak English by speaking as we learn to sing by singing.I began to enjoy speaking English and communicate with my classmates.I often read some fresh English news or articles and look up some information on the internet.As a result,I have made great progress in English.,Yours sincerely,Amy,17/34,描述一位你好朋友。要求：性格鲜明，人物形象生动（题目自拟不少于80词。Sample范文 My Best Friend Li Ming is my best friend.He looks handsome.He is tall and strong.He is good at sports such as running,football,basketball,table tennis and so on.In the match of last term,he won the first prize in running and second prize in high jump.We have much in common regarding our education,interests and hobbies.We spend a lot of time together reading,talking,singing and laughing.When we are together we feel very happy.We often help each other and learn from each other.True friendship lasts a long time.I believe the friendship between Li Ming and I will last forever.,18/34,某英文报社准备刊发一篇题为“Living in the City”相关城市生活利和弊文章，依据下面提醒，写一篇词数100左右短文，可做适当发挥。Advantages 找工作轻易 交通便利 有公园、饭店等休闲场所 Disadvantages 生活消费高 交通便利 人口多，拥挤 空气污染，居住环境差 Living in the City Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages.It is often easier to find jobs.There are always many choices of public transport.Besides,there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see.You can eat in good restaurants,visit museums,go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.However,living in the city is often very expensive.You must find a well-paid job;otherwise,you will not be able to afford the things you will do.Whats more,the city is always crowded,noisy and dirty.It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.以“Smoking”为题目写一篇短文，词数100左右，内容要求包含,19/34,以“Smoking”为题目写一篇短文，词数100左右，内容要求包含：1、现实状况：中国吸烟者约占总人口二分之一，吸烟者越来越年轻，甚至有少数中学生也在抽烟。2、原因：有人认为是时髦（a kind of fashion），有人认为是乐趣，有人认为能够提神（refresh oneself）。3、坏处：吸烟有害健康，可造成各种疾病，是一个金钱浪费。4、劝说大家不要吸烟。范文 Smoking Smoking is bad for peoples health.There are more than half people smoking in China.Even though smoking is very bad,the number of smokers keeps growing,and the average age of the smokers is getting younger.Even some students smoke,too.Why do so many people smoke today?Because some people think smoking is a kind of fashion or something interesting.Most people are so busy with their work that they smoke to fresh themselves;however,I dont think smoking is good.If you smoke too much,you will get diseases.It also costs a lot of money.In order to keep healthy,we should not smoke.,20/34,时间比金钱更宝贵人常说，“时间就是金钱，但实际上，时间比金钱更宝贵。为何呢？因为当钱用，我们能够赚回来。然而，当初间失去了，就永远不会回来了。这就是我们为何要珍惜时间原因。我们时间是有限。每一秒钟都是宝贵。我们应该充分利用我们时间。但也有很多人不知道时间主要性。他们杀了他们时间聊天，吸烟，饮酒或赌博，他们没有意识到浪费时间就是浪费他们宝贵生命。总之，我们应该养成节约时间好习惯。不要把今天能完成事情直到明天。懒惰不但会让我们失败，而且还使我们贫困。,21/34,英语主要性 英语主要性在于，它被世界上大多数国家作为语言交流工具。比如一个德国人和一个中国人彼此都不会讲对方语言，但他们都懂英语，于是他们之间语言交流就不成问题。我们每个人都能够认识它主要性，都能够认真学习。要想学好英语，关键是背单词。单词是语言大厦墙砖。认识了它们才能驾驭好他们。学好英语还要多听英语广播、多接触外国人，锻炼自己听力，这么才能学有所用。The importance of English rests with the language being used in most countries in the world as a communicating tool.For example,a German and a Chinese cant speak opposite sides language,but they both know English.And then there is no problem between their language communication.We must know the importance and learn the language earnestly.The key to learn English well is to recite words.Words are the bricks of language building.Only keeping them in our mind,can we master them.To learn English well,we need to listen more English broadcast and contact with more foreingers so that we can practise our listening comprehansion.Only in this way,can we study for the purpose of application,22/34,惯用名言和谚语 Better early than late.宁早勿迟 It is never too late to learn.学习永远不嫌晚。Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。Health is better than wealth.健康胜于财富。Parents are the first teachers of the children.父母是孩子第一任老师。Time waits for no man.时不待人。Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。开头句子：As we know,we students are very tired because of study.Just as the saying goes:“Every coin has its two sides”,television has both advantages and disadvantages.正像谚语所说：“任何硬币都有两面”，电视即有优点也有缺点。The problem of.is important/serious/.to us.Now let me talk something about it.结尾句子：In a word,I think I will have a good time in I believe everything will be better in the fulture.I am sure the world must be better if we all give our love to others./if we all make a contribution to it.Let us do it hard/try our best to do it.,23/34,假设你是李华你美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)你在资料搜集、语言利用等方面碰到了困难。请依据以下关键点给Tom写一封电子邮件 1问询Tom生活和学习情况 2谈谈你困难并请Tom帮忙 3告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意1词数120-150 2可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。范文One Possible Version Dear Tom,Its a month since you studied in Beijing.How is everything going with you?I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here.I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer.I think the chance is of great importance for me.To have a very good performance,I am making preparations for it.However,I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials.Meanwhile,I find it hard to use English properly.I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.I also hope that the great effort I am making will pay off.You know,I have been missing you since you left,so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.I cant wait to see you again!Yours Sincerely,Li Hua,24/34,Great Changes I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years On May 12,a severe carthquake destroyed almost everything in the school,leaving dadly-damaged buildings.It is now however,taking on a new look.Tall buildings have been put up,including cleassroom and laboratory buildings,and a library.These is also a newly-built standard playground.In the new environment,teachers and students are living happily and working hard.It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful schook,full of life.Obviously,without the help of the whole society,there would be no new school today.It is love and concem that have brought about the great changes.Many hands make light work.We can work wonders if we unite as a family,caring for each other and helping those in need.Union is strength.,25/34,13 栏目写一篇英文稿件并勉励同学们主动参加课外活动。1.你校开展课外活动情况 2.你参加过课外活动及给你带来益处 3.为同学选择课外活动提出提议 4.为学校开展课外活动提出提议 注意 1.词数100左右 2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名 3.稿件开头认为你写好不计入总词数 范文One Possible Version After-class Activities Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.In our school,there are various kinds of activities,for example,arts and sports.We enjoy them very much.Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good.Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge,they also free me from the heavy work of study.Here I have some suggestions.To students,youd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you;to schools,they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.From.Dear friends,please actively take part in after-class activities,which will not only make your school life colorful,but also improve you learning.,26/34,17.发挥着日益主要作用 play an increasingly important role in 18.对必不可少 be indispensable to 19.正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:20.也不例外 be no exception 21.对产生有利/不利影响 exert positive/negative effects on 22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。23.造成引发 lead to/give rise to/contribute to/result in 24.复杂社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon 25.责任感/成就感 sense of responsibility/sense of achievement 26.竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation 27.开阔眼界 widen ones horizon/broaden ones vision 28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills 29.经济/心理负担 financial burden/psychological burden 30.考虑到很多原因 take many factors into account/consideration 31.从 另 一 个 角 度 from another perspective 32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts 33.对有益 be beneficial/conducive to 34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society 35.打下坚实基础 lay a solid foundation for 36.综合素质 comprehens