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王岱,1/59,书面表示复习,一书面表示能力要求,二书面表示复习策略,三书面表示课堂指导,四书面表示批改方法,2/59,书面表示复习,一书面表示能力要求,二书面表示复习策略,三书面表示课堂指导,四书面表示批改方法,3/59,一书面表示能力要求,1新课程标准7级要求,2新课程标准8级要求,3新课程标准9级要求,4英语教学纲领要求,5高考书面表示要求,6情景和开放作文对比,7写作评分要求,4/59,1新课程标准7级要求,能用文字及图表提供信息进行简单描述；,能写出常见体裁短文，如汇报或信函；,能描述人物或事件，并表示自己看法；,能填写相关个人情况表格，如申请表、求职表；,能做简单书面翻译。,5/59,2新课程标准8级要求,能写出连贯且结构完整短文，叙述事情或表示观点和态度；,能依据课文写摘要；,能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺；,能依据用文字及图表提供信息写短文或汇报。,6/59,3新课程标准9级要求,能用英文书写摘要、汇报、通知、公务信函等；,能比较详细和生动地用英语描述情景、态度或感情；,能阐述自己观点、评述他人观点，文体恰当、用词准确；,能在写作中恰当地处理引用资料及他人原话；,能填写各种表格、写个人简历和申请书，用语基本正确、得当；,能作非专业性笔头翻译；,在以上写作过程中做到文字通顺，格式正确。,7/59,4英语教学纲领要求,高中学生应“能就已学课文内容作简单改写。能在日常生活中，写简单书信、便条和通知等，能填写简单个人履历表等。书写格式，行文及惯用词语等无严重错误；能依据提醒，在30分钟内写80100个词短文，意思表示清楚，无严重语言错误。”,8/59,5高考书面表示要求,测试考生英语书面表示能力。,共两小题，35分，其中第一小题20分，第二小题15分。书面表示提供必要提醒。提醒包含目标、过程、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提醒形式有文字、图画、图表等。,第一小题（情景作文）要求考生依据所给情景用英语写一篇约100个单词短文。,第二小题（开放作文）要求考生依据简略提醒，写一篇不少于50个单词短文。,9/59,6情景作文和开放作文对比,情景作文，写作内容有明确要求，评分尺度相对统一，在一定程度上降低主观性，对考生来说，这类作文比较轻易，依据题目要求，组织好所提供材料，用明白通顺恰当英语表示出来，基本完成了任务。,开放作文，有一定难度，要扣题，自主谋篇，创造性，逻辑性，交际要得体。,10/59,7写作评分要求,项目,情景作文,开放作文,内容要求,覆盖全部关键点,扣题，内容充实，健康，思维活跃,语言要求,词汇，句式丰富多样，语法准确，较强语言利用能力,词汇，句式丰富、多样，语法准确，较强语言利用能力,篇章结构,有效利用语句间连接成份，内容连贯，结构紧凑,有效利用语句间连接成份，内容连贯，结构紧凑,清楚思维逻辑。,交际要求,完全抵达预期写作目标,完全抵达预期写作目标,字数要求,约100字左右,不少于50字,11/59,书面表示复习,一书面表示能力要求,二书面表示复习策略,三书面表示课堂指导,四书面表示批改方法,12/59,二书面表示复习策略,了解写作命题特点,内容贴近生活，符合时代要求,词汇句式丰富，数字有所改变,1在使用中复习词汇,2在使用中复习句型,3在使用中复习语篇,13/59,1在使用中复习词汇,11在阅读课文中掌握重点词汇,重点词汇，提醒造句，连词造句，段落造句，语法造句,1-2在听力训练中掌握不一样表示法,试题与原文不一样表示,1-3在语篇中练习词汇,单句填空，框词填空，词性转换，段落填空，听后填空,1-4在重复中巩固词汇,及时听写，阶段测验,1-5在口述中扩展词汇,说词组,14/59,看图写话-举一反三,以下图画描述是你一段亲身经历，请据此为一家中学生英文报故事专栏写一篇短文。,15/59,练习表示时间词组,the other day,yesterday afternoon,on Sunday morning,seeing that,at that moment,when I saw it,hearing that,at once,before we could say anything,16/59,练习表示动作词组,went to the cinema by bicycle.,was riding with me sitting on the seat behind,went to the cinema by bike with me on the seat behind,cross roads，was riding across the road,came up and stopped us,walk to us and asked us to stop,found you at long last,saw you,didnt know them,didnt know what they meant,pointing to a policeman not far away,pointed to a police standing there,explained to us that,told us,try to find,stopped,make us catch the next offender,come on,stand here.,dont have to wait long,17/59,文字提醒-举一反三,有些人认为一些数字，比如,6，8，9等会带来好运。他们在选择车牌号，电话号码时不惜花费“择号费”要这些数字。而你本人却不相信这些。你认为成功和财富与所谓吉祥数字无关，要靠自己艰辛劳动和努力。请你依据以上内容写一篇文章,，词数100。,关键动词：,believe，think,hold the view,consider,choose,decide,like,prefer,spend money on,cost much money,pay much for,charge for,depend on,have to work hard,lie in,result from,18/59,2在使用中复习句型,2-1掌握课文中重点句型,Unit 6,重点句型,Let me remind you what we are looking for.,It looks as if it isnt clean enough to bathe here.,It seems that there is a big waste pipe coming down from the town.,No matter how much you want to bathe,it just isnt safe.,How can they get rid of waste water in this way?,19/59,重点句型,Other waste may be thrown into the sea,either 19 kilometers from land,or more than 40 kilometers from land,depending on the nature of the materials.,It is therefore unlikely that the chemicals will be carried upwards into the water.,The problem of dealing with waste has become so great that several international organizations have been set up to protect the world and to fight against pollution.,They seek to reduce waste,protect the earth,the oceans and all forms of life in them.,European countries are now making an active effort to reuse materials more than they used to.,20/59,2-2.练习课文中句型转换,Unit 7,It may be necessary to put up a notice saying“Keep off”.,To put up a notice which says“Keep off”is necessary.,Piles of stones lie in a corner of the courtyard,waiting to be replaced.,Piles of stones lie in a corner of the courtyard,which wait to be replaced.,European countries are now making an active effort to reuse materials.,European countries are trying their best to reuse materials.,We call this recycling.This is called recycling.,I happened to meet him on my way home.,It happened that I met him on my way home.,21/59,2-3练习作文中句子结构,enter,You can enter the park by the main gate.,You can enter it by the main gate when you see the Peoples Park.,walk straight,Walk straight until the end of the road.,Walk straight until you come to the end of the road.,When he saw that he ran in a hurry,inviting the old lady to share the umbrella with him.,Seeing that,he ran immediately to the old lady and shared the same umbrella.,22/59,3在使用中复习语篇,3-1介绍人物,Madam Curie was born in a teachers family in Poland,on November 7th,1867.,Madam Curie,a daughter of a teacher,was born in Poland,on November 7th,1867.,When she was young,she became interested in,As a young man.,In 1903,in July 1903,After the war,From then on,Today she is remembered and admired as a scientist.But she is also remembered for her determination and courage,her willingness to share her knowledge,her interest in womens rights,and her medical service during the war.,23/59,3-1介绍人物,Sun Shuwei,a world champion in diving,is now 28 years old from Guangdong in China.He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at the age of eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province.He studied hard at school and trained hard for five years before he came to the national team.A year later in 1990,he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships early this year.He is popular with the Chinese people.,24/59,3-2讲述故事,A person of great determination,Many years ago I walked into a bookstore in Cincinnati in search of some books that I wanted.While I was there,a young boy of about twelve came in to ask whether they had any geography books for sale.,We entered the fifth store,Many years later,I was sailing to Europe on a fine sailing ship across the Atlantic.,The determination that thirty years ago got you that geography book has today saved our lives.,25/59,3-3记述经历,A visit to Tokyo Disneyland,Last week,we went on a visit to Tokyo Disneyland.,On the first day,we went to the Magic Castle.,On the second day of our trip,After lunch,we also visited Tomorrow Land,which was very attractive.,We stayed there for a long time.,At eight oclock in the evening,we left the Disneyland.We had a wonderful time.,26/59,3-4时间次序,When we entered the room,Three days later,Early in the morning,In 1982,One sunny afternoon,As a young man,In ones spare time,Seeing that,On hearing it,One day,For twenty years,Hardly had we got there,when.,At 7 oclock,In July,And then,On November 8th,1992,In ones childhood,At the age of,On ones arrival,During my years in school,At this period,27/59,3-5比较对比,Classroom Behavior Rules,There are some similarities and differences in the classroom behavior rules between North America and my county.First,there is the students right to speak.In the language class in North America students can ask the teacher questions.They even ask questions when the teacher is giving a lesson.,Similarly,in my country students have the right to ask questions at the end of the class.,Next,students respect their teachers.In North America students look up to teachers and respect them.For example,when the teacher asks them to speak they must look into the teachers eyes to show respect.,Likewise,in my country,students respect teachers;,however,when a teacher asks us to speak we look down to show respect.We do not look into their eyes.,In conclusion,there are both similarities and differences in the way students behave their teachers in the classroom.,28/59,3-6介绍国家/城市,New York,New York,is built on a group of islands,on the east coast of the USA at a point where several rivers flow into the ocean.,By 1820,the population of New York,had grown to about 125,000,making it the largest city in the USA.,The building,of skyscrapers in New York began around the year 1900.,New York never sleeps.,29/59,3-6介绍国家/城市,date back to,date from,be located in,stand,lie in,has a population of,the population of the city,cover an entire continent,from north to south the distance is,in area it is about,has an area of,The climate is different depending on the area.,is an extremely rich country.,is an important agricultural country with a small population.,In size it is bigger than yet has a much smaller population.,30/59,3-7介绍场景,假设你是李华，你英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市建新华学校学汉字，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请依据图画提供信息，写信介绍住房情况，并通知住房面积20平米，月租550元。,31/59,3-7介绍场景,Dear Bob,Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September.Ive found a place for you.Its a small flat of 25 square meters,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.The rent is 500 yuan per month.The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,which is not far from Jianxinhua Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school.In fact,its only one stop.Do you think youd like it?If not,I can try and find another place for you.,Yours，,Li Hua,32/59,3-8 看图指路,假定你是李华，你和你朋友约定星期天在人民公园野餐。你英国朋友Peter 也应邀参加。请你依据下面示意图，给他写封短信，告诉他进公园后怎样找到你们。,33/59,3-8 看图指路,Dear Peter,Were so glad youre coming to join us on Sunday.,Here is how you can find us.,Well have our picnic in the Peoples Park.You know where that is,dont you?After you enter the park by the main gate,walk straight on till you come to a small river.Cross the river and turn right.After walking for a while youll come to a hill.Walk round the hill,youll see a lake.Well have our picnic there in the small woods by the lake.,Im sure youll have no trouble finding us.,Do come！,Lihua,34/59,3-9说明程序,Experts believe that there are about 40,000 different types of jobs in the world.Choosing the right one is difficult job in itself.,First,it is important to recognize what kind of person you are and which special qualities make you different from everyone else.,You may had notice something while you were doing this task.,To examine your skills and abilities still further,ask yourself this question:in the following three areas-skills with people,skills with information or skills with things-which are your best skills?,After examining your skills,the next step is research.,Finally,trust your own ideas and your own thinking!,35/59,3-10举例说明,My brother is very selfish.He does not want to share things with other people.,For example,when he buys a bar of chocolate,he puts it in a secret place.Then he eats it all by himself.He never helps anyone.He says he is busy.He does not care if something he does bothers other people.,For instancelast night he played loud rock n roll music until 2 oclock in the morning.,In conclusion,I think my brother is selfish,and will always be selfish.,36/59,3-11介绍事物,Advertising,Advertising is a highly developed twentieth century industry.,What can you advertise?,Advertising is now a scientific business.,How are advertisements made?,What makes a good advertisement?,There are other dangers.,37/59,3-11介绍事物,Gymnastics,The words“gymnastics”and“gym”come from the Greek language,for it was in Greece that Olympic competitions started.,Dance is an important of training as it prepares you for the types of movements required in gymnastics.,To become a top gymnast,it is important to start when very young.,Boys develop physically later than girls and so Olympic gymnastics medals are usually won by men between the ages of nineteen and twenty-five.,In competitions,gymnasts have to perform on different pieces of equipment.,38/59,3-12寻求帮助(书信),Dear Marty,I have got a problem and as I dont know what to do.I thought Id write to you and ask for your advice,I have been working at a meat factory for about two months now.I have recently noticed that one of my workmates is stealing.,What should I do?May be I should have told that.Or possibly I should have gone to the manager,I think Im in a difficult position,Please tell me how I can solve this problem.Id like to hear your advice.,Best wishes,John,39/59,3-13给与帮助（回信）,Dear John,Thank for your letter.I agree that it is a difficult situation.,I think there is a possible problem if you tell the manager about the thief.,There is no need to say to the other worker.,But I advise you to check your bag every evening before going home.,Best regards,Marty,40/59,3-13给与帮助（回信）,9 Ocean Road,Freetown,9th April,Dear Ken,Thank you for your letter.Im sorry that you are not happy yet in your,new school.,It is wrong of the other children to make fun of you.,First of all,dont worry about being short.It really doesnt matter.Lots of,people are short.You are fine just as you are.,Have you considered looking for one special friend?I suggest you choose,someone who you think is kind and friendly.So why dont you look for,some who might be a special friend?And dont spend too much time alone.,Best wishes,Your friend,Amy,41/59,3-14,推销产品（信件）,No.76 Zhichun Road,Haidian District,Beijing 100086,3rd August,-9-12,Dear Ms.Zhang,I believe that you are a teacher of computer studies at your school.I am writing to you because we have a used computer for sale and wonder if you would like to buy it.The model is ZY-2 and it is one year old.We would be happy to sell it to you for 3,500 yuan,that is 50%of the cost of a new one.,If you are interested,please write to me at the above address.Could you also suggest a time when it would suit you to visit us and try out the machine?,Im looking forward to hearing from you.,Yours sincerely,He Xiaohua,42/59,3-15索要资料（书信）,40964 Friendship Hotel,Beijing,1083,14th January,Salesman,Computer Sales Dept.,Founder Computer Corp.,Dear Sir,I am a college student studying electrical engineering.I need a micro-computer at home.Founder computers are my first choice,so I am writing to you for some information.,I would be very happy if you could send me an introduction to your products and the prices of them.Please write to me at the above address.,I look forward to hearing from you.,Yours sincerely,John Jenkins,43/59,3-16口头通知,Attention please!,Boys and girls.Less noise,please!Gather round and listen carefully.,Ladies and gentlemen,may I have your attention please?I have something important to tell you.,Thats all.Thank you.,44/59,3-17书面通知,About spoken-English Competition,In order to develop students interests in learning English and improve their spoken English,a spoken-English competition will be held by Students Union and English Office on November 2nd.,Good luck!,Student Union,Friday,December 10,45/59,3-18日志,May 9th,Tuesday Sunny,46/59,3-19分析图表,A survey about choice of jobs has been done among 100 middle school students,which shows that,47/59,3-20介绍喜好,My Most Favorite Program,There are a lot of TV programs I like but the one I like best is World Report broadcast by CCTV at ten every night.,This program aims at keeping audiences informed about the international situation.,There are several factors,which may account for my preference of this program.,First,.,Besides,.,Finally,From the examples mentioned above,it can be easily,understood why I like World Report.,48/59,写作相关话题和词汇,灾害事故（火灾）,书信、日志,分析表格（就业选择）,业余兴趣（喜爱节目）,指明