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Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,Click to edit Master title style,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,Do you agree or disagree following statement?Movies and televisions have more positive or more negative effects on young peoples behaviors.,(.3.2)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The best way to travel is in a group led by the guide.,2025/5/6 周二,1,1/130,考试作文,哈尔滨医科大学,瞿平,2/130,图画类（难度最大）,1,Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.2,Give your comments.,3/130,4/130,7,、,1997,：,5/130托福新题型,新型写作考试趋势,听力,+,写作,6/130,一、书信类应用文,2,、,真题：辞职信道歉信,Directions:Two months ago,you got a job as an editor for the magazine,Fashion&Design,.But now you find that the work is not what you expected.You decide to quit.Write a letter to your boss Mr.Wang,telling him your decision,stating your reason(s),and making an apology.,7/130,国内作文评分标准,A,节,应用文评分侧重点在于信息点覆盖和内容组织、语言准确性、格式和语域（指在书面和口语表示中依据不一样交际对象，所采取话语方式，即正式、普通、非正式话语）恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性要求将依据详细试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提醒语中出现过关键词，但使用提醒语中出现过词组或句子将被扣分。,8/130,B,节,B,节作文评分重点在于内容完整性、文章连贯组织性、语法结构和词汇多样性及语言准确性。,2,、评分时，先依据文章内容和语言确定其所属档次，然后以该档次要求来给分。评分人员在档内有,1,3,分调整分。,3,、,A,节作文字数要求是,100,词左右。,B,节作文字数要求是,160,200,词。文章长度不符合要求，酌情扣分。,4,、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性一个方面。评分时，视其对交际影响程度给予考虑。英、美拼写及词汇使用方法均可接收。,5,、如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,9/130,1,结构,2,句子,3,词汇,4,内容,10/130,时间：,30,分钟,字数：,At least 300 words.,An effective response is typically about 300 words long.If you write fewer than 300 words,you may still receive a top score,but experience has shown that shorter response typically do not demonstrate the development of ideas needed to earn a score of 5.There is no maximum word limit.You may write as much as you wish in the time allotted.But do not write just to be writing;Write to respond to the topic.,托福作文,2025/5/6 周二,11,11/130,独立写作,2025/5/6 周二,12,12/130,奖励分给分标准,书法字迹,大字,vs,小字,笔选择,13/130,奖励分给分标准,正确正规可读,非正规标识：,&,Vs,etc.,简写问题：,WTO,？,World Trade Organization(WTO),_,共,200,字！,14/130,奖励分给分标准,标点问题,随意点,逗号问题,句号问题,省略号,顿号,书名号,惊叹号和问号,15/130,奖励分给分标准,修改问题,尽可能不修改,反对对于内容修改,正确修改方法,修正液,16/130,范文分析,98.1,母鸡下蛋，虚假承诺,Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:,1 write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon,此提要应分为两段写作）,2 give your comments,描述图画阐释寓意给出评论（处理方法）,17/130,范文分析,The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that a variety of promises have been arising from all walks of life,.Regrettably,quite a lot of promises are sheer nonsense,just as the hen in the given cartoon commits herself to lay eggs which are round without any angles and corners and have shells,egg whites and yolks.,18/130,范文分析,Odds and funny as they sound,such false promises can be seen and heard everywhere in our country.,Administration departments assure to perform their tasks effectively and fairly without taking any bribes;manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality;commercial enterprises swear to provide genuine commodities and polite and enthusiastic services.,19/130,Can you find anything new and substantial other than their obligations,duties and jobs in these so called promises?I guess your answer will be negative.As a matter of fact,their intention to make such commitments is nothing but to put on civilized outer clothing to please or deceive the public.,20/130,范文分析,I dare say that your society is suffering corruption and cheat which are causing damage to society both materially and morally.But the hen and her like should know that by dishonest words no one can survive the intense competition under market economy system.They should remember the old saying,“Honesty is the best policy”.,21/130,范文分析,总结,段落安排合理,聪明学生举例子,句式复杂多样,用词有效替换,语法错误较少,我们目标？,22/130,简单句子变复杂法则,1,非谓语动词,2,插入语句式,23/130,1,非谓语动词,我是一名教师。我讲课。,I am a teacher.I give classes.,I am a teacher and I give classes.,Because I am a teacher,I give classes.,I am a teacher,so I give classes.,Being a teacher,I give classes.,I,being a teacher,give classes,24/130,2,记者们听说刘若英要来哈尔滨要来哈尔滨，他们都出去找消息。,Hearing that Miss Liu is coming to Harbin,journalists set to obtain news.,25/130,3,老板叫我见客户，我去见他。,The boss asks me to visit a consumer.,I go to see him.,Asked to see a consumer,I go to see him,26/130,非谓语动词法则,1,找到一个共同主语,2,结果动词作为真正谓语,3,其余动词看与主语关系，主动变成,doing,，被动变成,done,。,27/130,My father was denied higher education for historical reasons.,But by self studies he became a technician in a factory.,He never stopping studying.,He took courses of law in his spare time.,Later he became a lawyer.,28/130,My father,denied higher education for historical reasons,by self-study became a technician in a factory.,Never stopping studying and taking courses of law in his spare time,later he became a lawyer.,29/130,practice,现在年轻人没方法缓解压力，他们在朋友唆使下，转而求援于吸烟。,The youth nowadays have no way to relieve their pressureThey are instigated by their friends.,They turn to smoking,30/130,The youth nowadays,having no way to relieve their pressure and instigated by their friends,turn to smoking,31/130,天太热我不能学习,It is too hot to study.,It is so hot that I can not study.,It being so hot,I can not study.,情况如此危急，处理这个事情刻不容缓The situation being serious,it is high time that we solved it.,32/130,插入语,2,名词，插入小细节（意义，功效，相关人等），大约念,哈尔滨市一个含有悠久历史漂亮城市，是我故乡。,Haerbin,(which is)my hometown,is a beautiful city with a long history.,33/130,2,插入语,1,主语,+,谓语,+,状语,主语，状语，谓语,老板正在和员工制订计划,The boss is making plans with his workers.,The boss,with his workers,is making plans.,不改变整个句式却显得句式有张力,Eg:,34/130,水是生命之源，现在被污染很严重，覆盖面积越来越小。,Water,which is polluted seriously and covers decreasing areas,is source of life.,Water,which is polluted seriously and covers decreasing areas,is,the,source of life.,35/130,Water is polluted seriously.,Water covers decreasing areas.,Water is source of life.,36/130,网络,Internet is a way of communication.,Internet is one of the most efficient and convenient ways of communication.,Internet,by which many young people make a fortune,is one of the most efficient and convenient ways of communication.,37/130,Internet,which makes the world smaller and smaller,is one of the most efficient and convenient ways of communication.,38/130,八大亮点句式,39/130,1,用否定句式表示必定,I am the best writing teacher in new oriental school.,I,it has been said,am the best writing teacher in new oriental school.,我不是他人，我是新东方最好写作老师。,I,rather than anyone else,am the best writing teacher in new oriental school.,40/130,Other than,I,other than anyone else,am the best writing teacher in new oriental school.,Nobody,other than I,is the best writing teacher in new oriental school.,41/130,中国正在面临非常严重,问题。,A problem of is serious in china.,In no country other than china,it has been said,is the problem serious.(the phenomenon popular,）,42/130,notso muchas,与其说,不如说,生活中成功与其说依靠起学校成绩倒不如说依靠个人能力和实践经验。,Success in the life does not depend so much on ones school record as ones ability and practice.(honesty,confidence,persistence),43/130,直到,20,世纪人们才开始重视环境保护问题,It was not until the end of the 20th century that we attached great importance to environment problems.,44/130,2,强调句：,It be+,强调部分,+that(who)+,简单句,戒指是每个女孩都梦想得到。,It is the ring that every girl wants,我不是用钱能买来,I am not for sale.,It is I who am not for sale.,标准：去头去尾现原形,45/130,在,20,世纪,80,是年代，因为中国改革开放政策，很多外国人开始了解中国及中国文化。,It was in 1980s that a number of foreigners began to learn China and Chinese culture owing to,the reform and open door policy,being carried out.,46/130,时间状语替换法则,1,用强调句,2,时间（主语），,witness,谓语，宾语,In,，,the number of college students increased sharply.,witnessed increase in the number of,47/130,1980s witnessed a fact that a number of foreigners began to learn China and Chinese culture owing to,the reform and open door policy,being carried out.,48/130,3,倒装句：,only,句，地点状语倒装句，让步状语从句倒装,只有用这种方法，我们才能处理这个问题。,Only in this way can we solve the problem,在森林里有各种各样小动物,All kinds of animals are in the forest.,In the forest are many valuable species of animals.,49/130,如图所表示，一个年轻人在操场上奔跑，而且冲向终点。终点又是新起点。,As is shown in the cartoon,on the playground runs the young man,rushing to the final,which is defined as another start one,50/130,Although,句型省略,尽管她是个女孩，唱歌却像男人一样。,Although she is a girl,she sings like a man.,Girl as she is,she sings like a man.,尽管漫画很简单，不过其寓意却非常深刻,Simple as a picture is,the meaning behind it is as deep as the ocean.,51/130,4,虚拟语气,1,）,It is high time that+,过去时,It is high time that the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems(,喊口号句式，用于最终一段,),The situation being so serious,it is high time that we took effective measures.,52/130,2,）,It is important/necessary/imperative/urgent+that+(should)+do,政府有必要制订法律法规来处理这个问题,It is imperative that laws and regulations should be worked out to,53/130,if,句式,假如没有改革开放政策,我们可能根本吃不愿德鸡,.,If there were no the reform and open door policy,we would never taste KFC.,54/130,5,被动句,Your baby was born.,Measures should be taken,Attention should be paid to sth,Emphasis should be placed upon,Great importance should be attached to,当文中主语为人们，大家，社会等大词时候用被动语气,55/130,6,定语从句,交通工具发出有毒气体，污染环境。,Automobile discharges lots of fumes which seriously pollute the air,你穿牛仔裤还是套装对我来说无所谓。,You can wear jeans or suit,which makes no difference to me.(matter a lot to sb),A majority of youth tend to smoke,which has a negative(positive,profound)influence in society.,56/130,利用定语从句法则,1,尽可能找出句子相互重合部分，,2,把其中从句重合部分用关系代词,which,that,who whose,，,whom,或关系副词,where,或者 介词,+which,whom,来连接两句话,57/130,我爱上一个让我奋不顾身人。,女生版：,I fall in love with him at whom I throw my life,男生版：,I fall in love with a girl for whom I can do everything.,58/130,If,，及,because,句式替换,I want to buy the cup because its color is special.,I want to buy the cup whose color is special.,If the students can get a job in their area,they are gaining valuable experience and putting their knowledge to use immediately.,The students,who can get a job in their area,are gaining valuable experience and putting their knowledge to use immediately.,59/130,If the students can get a job in their area,they are gaining valuable experience and putting their knowledge to use immediately.,The students,who can get a job in their area,are gaining valuable experience and putting their knowledge to use immediately.,60/130,if the hobby is stamp collecting,the person can learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history.,The person,，,whose hobby is stamp collecting,can learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history.,61/130,Our neighbor,learning about my familys condition and beginning to help us,lent some money to my parents who used the money to open a shop and got through the hard life.,62/130,7,主语从句,What makes the cartoon surprising(interesting)is that+,环境细节,What makes the cartoon surprising is that the old father is kicked off by his daughters and sons like a ball.,63/130,8,比较句式,1,与老一辈人相比，现在年轻人在很小年纪就独立了。,The youth nowadays are more independent at an early age than the old.,Compared with the,old generation,young people nowadays tend to be more independent at an early age.,同级代替比较级；比较级代替最高级,64/130,2,传统观念认为，素食主义者活更长，然而他们却因为营养不良而死更早。,Contrary to the thought,（,belief)that,主句,Contrary to the thought that vegetarians can live longer,they die earlier for lack of nutrition.,65/130,The more,we learn about the issue,the more,we realize that it is of importance.,Contrary to,the thought(belief,conclusion)that,Contrary to,the thought(belief,conclusion)that vegetarians could live longer,most of them die earlier for lack of nutrition.,66/130,词汇,词汇多样性,词汇量概念,简单词复杂化方法,重复率高词汇,词汇替换方法,67/130,实现词汇降级替换,EG,：在当今社会,In contemporary society,In modern society/todays society/nowadays/at present/today/now,68/130,重复率高词汇,1,显示：图标图画中，,show,indicate,reveal,reflect,demonstrate,conveys the message that,imply,suggest,illustrate,depict,2,主要：,Be of importance,significant,vital,essentially,critically,crucial,play a role,should be taken seriously,importance should be attached to,69/130,very,of great importance,significantly important,替换,very,方法：将,adj.,同义词 变为,adv.,即相当于,very,70/130,4,极大：,great/sharp/dramatic/sizable/significant/enormous/considerable/profound,5 think:believe,convince,suppose,assume,guess,reckon,insist,maintain,argue,claim,in ones opinion,be of opinion/view that,hold the view that,as far as I am concerned,in my eyes,71/130,6 Different various,a variety of,vary from person to person,，,Peoples opinions are various.,7 more and more,Students in growing numbers find learning English has become increasingly important.,More and more teachers are demanded with,With the development of economy there is an increasing demand of teachers,72/130,most,The vast majority of students take a part time job.,The large(considerable)percentage of college students takes a negative attitude of smoking.,73/130,As is shown in the pictures,with the rampancy of commercial fishing,the number of fishes has dramatically decreased.In one picture,there were various kinds of fish and only fishing-boat in 1900.On the contrary,in 1995 there was only one fish,but many fishingboats.,Shown-described/depicted,Picturecartoon/caricature,Rampancydisorder/immoderation,Dramaticallysharply/considerably/profoundly/rapidly/Significantly,Variousall sorts of/diverse kinds of/,On the contraryby contrast/but on the other hand/,Manyinnumerable/countless/a large number of,74/130,例文,As is,shown,in the,pictures,with the,rampancy,of commercial fishing,the number of fishes has,dramatically,decreased.In one picture,there were,various,kinds of fish and only fishing-boat in 1900.On,the contrary,in 1995 there was only one fish,but,many,fishing-boats.,75/130,The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decrease of ocean recourses.Owing to over-fishing,the number of fishes has obviously decreased.If we let this situation go as it is,we do not know where fish will be in the future.By that time,our environment will suffer a great destruction.,76/130The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decrease of ocean recourses.Owing to over-fishing,the number of fishes has obviously decreased.If we let this situation go as it is,we do not know where fish will be in the future.By that time,our environment will suffer a great destruction.,Showwarn/sound an alarm to,Due attention has to be paid toimportance should be attached to,Decreasedecline/reduction/shrink,Owing toas a result of/on account of/as a consequence of/,Over-fishingexcessive/immoderate fishing,Obviouslyevidently/apparently/visibly,77/130,Purposemoral(adj,道德，,n,寓意,)/motive/theme(,音乐,),Showwarn/sound an alarm to,Due attention has to be paid toimportance should be attached to,Decreasedecline/reduction/shink,Owing toas a result of/on account of/as a consequence of/,Over-fishingexcessive/immoderate fishing,Obviouslyevidently/apparently/visibly,78/130,Therefore,it is imperative for us to take drastic measures.For one thing,we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing.For another,we should enhance peoples awareness that the ocean resources are vital to us.Only in this way can we protect our ocean res