高考英语书面表达作文万能模板大全-湖北省人教版名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,情景作文,【典题在线】,假设年2月12日是你父亲生日，下面三幅图描绘是你给父亲买完礼品后乘坐地铁回家时经历一件事。请依据图示，用英语写一篇日志记叙这件事，并谈谈自己感受。,(天津),第1页,注意：1.词数不少于100；,2.可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。,参考词汇：地铁（列车）subway train,第2页,【模板展示】,(日期),Today was,(某个节日，某人生日等).In the morning,(做了什么事情).And when,(又做了什么事情).,（接下来一个时间）,(叙述人们各自活动).,(事情情况).After a minute,I,(做了什么事情).,(取得结果).She said,.,Today was,(总结).I felt,(感受).,【佳篇品读】,February 12th,Today was my fathers birthday.I got on the subway train after I had bought the present.And when I was on the subway train,I imagined the situation where I gave the present to my father,and my father would be very happy.,第3页,On the next station,there was a lady who had no seat in front of me.She also had two heavy bags.After a minute,I stood up and offered the seat to her.She was very happy and appreciated.She said“Thank you!”to me,which made me feel proud.,Today was best.I felt the fun to help other people.,【模仿show】,假设你是李华，年奥运会期间你和你同学们参加了志愿者工作。请依据下列图提醒，写一篇日志，介绍你们当志愿者经历并简单谈谈你感受。日期为年8月28日。,第4页,One possible version:,August 28th,In August,Olympic Games were held in Beijing.During the Games I was a volunteer.,Before the Games,all of us received special training.Under the guidance of the trainer,we got to know what jobs we could do and what we should pay attention to.,During the Games,some of us stood outside the stadium,guiding the audience to go into the Birds Nest with loudspeakers.Some worked at the information center and offered all kinds of help.Others acted as tour guides and took foreigners to some places of interest,such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace,which helped them to get a better understanding of Chinese culture.,第5页,Today I felt being a volunteer was a valuable experience for me.Not only did I help others,but also I made many friends.Besides,I felt I could do something for our country.,第6页,议论文,【典题在线】,（12山东潍坊模块检测）,人们对于学生网上交友持不一样意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友短文，介绍人们不一样观点，并表示自己看法。,赞成理由,反正确理由,你看法,1.广交朋友;,2.可自由表示思想;,3.利于外语学习。,1.浪费时间;,2.影响学习;,3.可能上当受骗。,注意：1.文章必须包含表格中全部内容。,2.参考词汇：网络朋友online friend(s)；,上当受骗to be cheated,第7页,【模板展示】,Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether,(探讨问题)or not.Different people have different opinions.Some people say yes.They think that,(支持理由一).And,(支持理由二).Besides,(支持理由三，此点略低于前两个).,Others,however,think students should not.They say,(反正确理由一).And,(反正确理由二).In addition(以别于前面Besides),(反正确理由三).,It is my opinion that,(自己观点)students should place their study,health and safety before other things.,(理由一至二).,第8页,【佳篇品读】,Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether middle school students should make friends online.Different people have different opinions.Some people say yes.They think that the internet helps make more friends.And chatting on line,students can more freely express their feelings and opinions.Besides they may even get help with their foreign language studies.,Others,however,think students should not.They say making friends on line is a waste of time.And they should spend time more meaningfully on study.Besides,some students get cheated on line.,It is my opinion that students should place their study,health and safety before other things.As for friendship,we can easily find it in our classmates and other people around us.,第9页,【模仿show】,最近，你们学校组织高三学生进行了一场讨论。主题是“要不要集中进行晚自习”。依据下列图提供信息，写一篇英语短文，客观地介绍一下讨论情况，要涵盖全部关键点。,第10页,One possible version:,Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether they were willing to have the evening selfstudy at school or not.Different people have different opinions.,60 percent of the students think its a good idea to have the evening selfstudy at school.They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers.Also,they can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom and with company of their fellow classmates.,25 percent of the students,however,think students should not.They suppose that they may get disturbed by others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone.,At the same time,still 15 percent of the students dont have a clear answer to the question.They say they will go to school to have evening selfstudy if they are asked to,but they promise they can also do well at home第11页,应用文(书信),【典题在线】,（全国）,假定你是李华,你英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询怎样才能学好汉字。请你依据以下关键点写回信。,关键点:1.参加汉字学习班;,2.看汉字书刊、电视节目；,3.学唱汉字歌曲；,4.交中国朋友。,注意:1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,2.开头语已为你写好；,3.词数100左右。,第12页,June 8,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.,Best wishes,Li Hua,第13页,【模板展示】日期,称呼,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to,.,Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to,(第一件应该做事情),as youll be able to,(伎俩).Then,it also helps to,(第二件应该做事情).,Besides,it should be a good idea to,(第三件应该做事情).You can also,(第四件要做事情).,(这么做好处).,(表示祝福).,落款,第14页,【佳篇品读】,June 8,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.,Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV programmes and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.,Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.,Try and write me in Chinese next time.,Best wishes,Li Hua,第15页,【模仿show】,假定你是李华，你从电视上看到甲型H1N1流感（H1N1 flu）仍在美国流行,你正在美国上学笔友Jack向你问询防护提议。,提议：1.尽可能待在家里,少去人多地方；,2.勤洗手,讲卫生；,3.多开窗,保持空气新鲜；,4.多吃水果蔬菜。,注意:1.词数100左右；,2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to protect yourself from H1N1 flu.,第16页,One possible version:,Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to protect yourself from H1N1 flu.,Here are a few suggestions.First,to stay away from this disease,you had better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people.Then,wash your hands more often to keep them clean.,Besides,it is necessary to open the window to have more fresh air in the room.And you should eat more fruits and vegetables to keep yourself fit and strong.,So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be.Do be at ease!Take care and youll be OK.,Yours truly,Li Hua,第17页,应用文(书信),【典题在线】,（全国）,假如你是李华，你美国朋友Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信问询改建后前门大街情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：,1.简况：前门大街长800余米，有600多年历史、300余家商铺；,2.位置：天安门广场南面；,3.交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；,4.特色：步行街、无轨电车、茶馆、剧院等。,第18页,参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street,无轨电车 trolley car,地铁 subway,注意：1.能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,2.开头语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。,Dear Sarah,Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street.Here is something about it.,Your sincerely,Li Hua,第19页,【模板展示】,Dear Sarah,Thank you for your letter for asking about,(某地).Here is something about it.,(某地)is a famous street/museum/city/university of over,(年).（按次序介绍）Along,(某地),there are more than,(地方，商店，大楼等).As the street/museum/city/university is,(某位置),just to/in/on the south/east/west/north of,its very convenient to,(做某事，如乘车去，步行去等).You may,(去方式).（此地特色）,.Im sure youll like it.,第20页,【佳篇品读】,Dear Sarah,Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street.Here is something about it.,Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old.Along this 800meter street,there are more than 300 shops.As the street is in the center of Beijing,just to the south of Tiananmen Square,its very convenient to get there by bus.You may take Buses No.17,69 or 59.Subway Line 2 has a stop there too.Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street,but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops,but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.Im sure youll like it.,Your sincerely,Li Hua,第21页,【模仿,show】,下面是光明中学示意图。假如你是王伟，请依据示意图和图后说明写一篇120词左右短文向你美国朋友Peter介绍这所学校。,示意图说明：,1.篮球场（basketball court）；餐厅；学生宿舍；老师宿舍；花坛；花坛（flower bed）；,2.全部大楼四面都种有灌木和花草；,3.学校占地130亩，有100多年历史；,4.学生大约有3000人；教师有150人。学校在市中心以西10公里处，周围平静，校园优美，给学生提供了很好学习环境。,第22页,One possible version:,Dear Peter,Thank you for your letter for asking about the Guangming School.Here is something about it.,Guangming High School is a famous school of over 100 years.It is in the west of the city,with the Chengxi River running nearby.It covers an area of 130 mu.When you enter the school,you can see a big flower bed in front of you,and two large buildings on both sidesthe library on your right and the teaching building on your left.Walking on further,you will find the gymnasium,which is the most beautiful building on the campus,with another round flower bed in front.Behind it,there lie four basketball courts.Next to the courts is the sports ground.Along its east side stand three buildingsthe dining hall,and two dormitories for the students and teachers.All the buildings are surrounded by bushes and flowers.,Wang Wei,第23页,应用文(书信),【典题在线】（陕西）,假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一个名叫Grownup中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助,请依据帖子内容、写作关键点和要求回贴。,第24页,写作关键点：,1.告诉Grownup要了解母亲；2.给Grownup提出处理问题详细提议。,要求：,1.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;,2.书写须清楚、工整。,【模板展示】,Dear Grownup,As a,I understand your situation.The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.However,.Here are a few suggestions.,First,.(这么做理由),.,Second,.(这么做理由),.,第25页,【佳篇品读】,Dear Grownup,As a student of your age,I understand your situation.The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.However,it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings.Here are a few suggestions.,First,its advisable to talk more with your mom.Hearttoto talks help you understand each other better.They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas and attitudes toward many things.,Second,you should learn to do your own things well,proving to your mom that you are already a“Grownup”.Its even better if you could share more of the housework,such as cleaning,washing and cooking.,第26页,【模仿show】,假如你叫李华，你在网上看到有些人以Depressed为名，寻求帮助。事情是这么：高考临近，他非常着急，可总是静不下心来复习。你回帖告诉他处理方法：一、多出去参加体育锻炼，这么能够分散一会注意力；二、把复习内容做好计划，这么能够按时间复习，防止慌乱。,要求:,1.可适当增加一些情节;,2.词数:100左右。,第27页,One possible version:,Dear Depressed,As a student of your age,I understand your situation.The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.However,it should be wise to do something that stops the situation.Here are a few suggestions.,First,its advisable to take some exercises after class.In doing so you may forget the hard work for a while and you may refresh yourself when you begin your study again.,Second,you should arrange your study properly.Its better to do the right thing at the right time.You dont need to feel depressed then.,Hope you get better soon and make great progress.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,第28页,应用文(书信),【写作说明】,经过书信反应现实存在一些事情是高考常见形式。这一类作文中，首先我们要注意书信格式，然后直接反应情况，接下来提出自己看法或者处理方法，最终是与对方探讨。,【典题在线】,（湖南）,假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课情况，主要内容以下：,1.描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻事情；,2.介绍你处理该事方式；,3.谈谈你感想。,第29页,注意：1.词数不少于120个;,2.可适当发挥想像，增加细节，以使行文连贯；,3.文中不得出现与本人及学校相关任何真实信息。,【模板展示】,Dear,(姓名),Now I want to tell you an impressive story that happened,(某个地方).,(以时间次序讲述事件起因、发生、发展、结局).,From the story I felt we should,(自己看法，或者由此事产生认识).Do you think so?Im looking forward to your reply.,Yours truly,Li Hong,第30页,【佳篇品读】,Dear Zhang Hua,Now I want to tell you an impressive story that happened on my first lesson.,On hearing the bell,students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can.But a boy,Li Ming,whose father died a month ago,was late for the class.He stood outside the classroom,silently.I smiled to him and let him come in.After a while,he cried on his desk.Then I walked to him and asked what had happened.He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her.At the same time,he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his wordsI praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named Mother for the students.How time flies!Class was over before I realized it.,From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them.Do you think so?Im looking forward to your reply.,Yours truly,Li Hong,第31页,【模仿show】,假定你是李华，在网上你看到一群中学生在殴打一名学生视频(video)。视频中，几个中学生对这名同学先是谩骂，然后拳脚相加。这些人还对着镜头做着各种怪动作或者表情。旁观者不但不阻止，还在为这几个打人学生鼓掌(applaud)。请依据以下要求给报社写封信：,1.描述事情经过；,2.谈谈你感想。,注意：1.可适当发挥想像，增加细节，以使行文连贯；,2.文中不得出现与本人及学校相关任何真实信息。,第32页,One possible version:,Dear editor,Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on the Internet.,T he other day I happened to watch a video on the Internet.Several senior students first said ill words to a boy and then they knocked with fists and kicked him with foots.No passersby went to stop them.Instead they laughed,and even applauded to cheer the bad boys up.In the end that boys mouth and nose were bleeding badly and those boys made ugly faces to the camera,which made me very angry.,From the story I felt we should respect each other and help each other when in trouble.Besides,our schools should make strict rules to stop such bad behaviour happening again.Do you think so?Im looking forward to your reply.,Yours truly,Li Hua,第33页,应用文(讲话稿),【典题在线】,(01浙江安江中学、寿昌中学、严州中学联考),5月10日，为了庆贺母亲节，你们班开展了以“尊敬父母”为主题活动。假如你是校英语报记者。请按以下关键点用英语写一则演讲稿。,1.时间：母亲节(5月10日),2.现象：大多数同学是独生儿女，只看重自己不顾及父母,3.宗旨：让每位学生都了解父母，尊敬父母,4.活动：（1）送一份自制礼品给父母；,（2）记住父母生日，并表示祝福；,（3）给父母写一封信；,（4）父母上下班主动打招呼;,5.感想或简短评论,第34页,【模板展示Ladies and gentlemen:,(日期),we had an activity,(活动内容),aiming to,(目标).,As we know,(现实状况).Therefore,we held the activity to show,.In this activity,some of us,(人们表现一);some,(表现二);some,(表现三);some,(表现四).,After this activity,(他人以及自己感受),Thank you！,第35页,【佳篇品读】,Ladies and gentlemen:,On May 10th,we had an activity in celebration of mothers day,aiming to let everyone respect and considerate of his parents.,As we know,most of us students today are the only child in our family,we often regard ourselves as the center of the family,without caring much about our parents.Therefore,we held the activity to show our respect to our parents.In this activity,some of us gave presents made by ourselves to parents;some remembered parents birthdays and decided to express our good wishes to them;some said hello to parents when they went to work and returned home after work;some even wrote a letter and had a hearttoheart talk with parents.,第36页,After this activity,all of us felt it was worthwhile.We developed an awareness of respecting our parents.What an unforgettable and meaningful day it is!,Thank you!,第37页,【模仿show】,现在提倡“文明从我做起”，以改变当前社会上一些不良风气。为了支持这一活动，4月20日（星期日）你们学校组织学生走上街头进行献爱心活动。有帮助老人过马路，有帮助清扫街道，有宣传文明用语。对这一做法，你们班同学有赞成，有反对。你看法怎样？请依据以上提醒用英语写一则演讲稿。,第38页,One possible version:,Ladies and gentlemen:,On Sunday,April 20th,we had an activity aiming to let everyone know that civilization must start from ourselves.,As we know,in our actual society,some people are rude to others,and even some give great harm to others.And we can see many unproper behaviours.Therefore,we held the activity to suport the idea that civilization must be made by ourselves.In this activity,some of us helped clean the road;some helped the old cross the road;some made people know what is civilization in our words and actions.,第3