国家开放大学电大本科《高级英语写作》2022-2023期末试题及答案(试卷号：1359).docx

Part 1 Vocabulary and Structure [10 points]
Questions 1—5 arc based on the following task.
Choose the appropriate words or expressions from the box to complete the following paragraphs.
There are THREE extra choices that you don't need. Write your answer on the Answer Sheet
A. produces

However
C. just M
D. care
E consequences
F.
Although
G・ convenient
IL responsible

Technology surrounds us and is n part of our daily lives. We can find technological innovations at home, our workplace, our schools, and our playgrounds* L technology has improved our lives tn some ways, it has also brought many negative 2..
Modern technology has made life very 3.• We have everything we need and our inventions take care of no many unpleasant details >n our day-to-dny hves< Foods from all over rhe world art available At local supermarkets International travel is now fast and easy> We can talk to friends on cell phones any rime# anywhere^ and we enn catch a TV show from many countries far away.
4. • the^e conveniences have a price- Wc consume too much energy nnd too many rrjiourceM« and we create too much waste< The world is overflowing with pollution and waste. Wc cannot continue like this forever We should hr more 5. about
protecting our world while fttill enjoying convenienceSe If our nntura! world in destroyed^ the conveniences will be uscIcstu
Part 2 Paragraph Organization and Development [40 pointsj
Questions 6—8 arc ba<«etl on the following task. (15 points)
Pnragriaph A
Read the foilowins pantgrupk Choose tbc best answer to each question. Write your answer A. B or C on the Answer ShccL
My parents played an important role in my education" development by helping me in both materiftl and spiritual ways to become the person that 1 ae today. They raided my older brothers and sisters in such a way that they would Met n good example for me and the other younger children. They bought various books that helped me become n hardworking student
■nd ■ good reader. They aIbo me to experiences such am varnttonA and museum tripu
Hint enlarged my prrMpcctive on life. In addition* they lookrd cnrrfully At my cxaminAiion renultfi in school in order to motivate me Always to do my best. In uhorG 1 owe nil o( niy positive qualitio to the efforts of my parentn.
6. Which »cnfence is the topic «cntcnca of the paragraph?
A・ The firm »cntcnce of the parngrnpK
Be The second sentence of the parngriiph.
C The hut ncntencc of the paragruph.
PuniKniph II
Hntd lhe inlnxiuctory pnmxniph of nn away. Choouc the best «n«wcr Io cnch qurWon. Write your answer At B or C on the Answer Sheet
Elxht Hours a Night
(D In my daMe«« slee|>-deprived Rtudrnts tend to disturb other ntudentiit and thin can makr it hard to learn. (2) No matter wh«l they are in« ulcep deprived utudenla are likely to vnudc problcmtu (3) For cxamplct they rarely contribute lo the da»»room topic (4) If they do something in clnnn. it1 • titiunlly |U»t tu Answer n question that war nlrrndy anawcred> (5) Such sleepy ttudenU can even kill motivation lor students who nrr nwnkc. 《6) When I >rr five people slreping with their hcndu on top o( their dmk»・ it ib po»nib!e thnl I will feel »lcrpy« too. cspccinlly if it in ・ boring or nn rnrly morning chisa. (7) Another problem with many mudenu who don * t net enough sleep in that it h not unusiual (or thrm to arrive lair lo clnMMe inh-rrupting wlwitvvrr im hupprnin^ (8) lb naive tlwjtc pn)blrrruie I think that trai hrt3 should rwikc Mrrp M Iwnir nkcp per night « |mrt af the cUm m|inrrrnrnu
7. Choouc the type of introduciiom
A. Problem-Solution. Ik Definhion/Exphnation«
C. Oenrral to-»r>ecific^
8« Choose the thesis statemenu
A. Sentence L H. Sentence 7.
C Scntrncc 8>
Question 9 Complete lhe following paraipiiph by adding details. (25 points)
• Make sure your tone and the vocabulary you umt mfc in unity with (he rclcvanl pantgraph.
• Write about 60—80 words. Write yoor answeni on the Answer Sheet-
Xiao (孝)一Love for Parents Expressed by Action
Xiao is a fundamenul concept in Chinese culture^ What is Xruo? 1 think Xiao is love for parents and being good to parentiu There are many examples of being Xiao towards parents by a son or a daughter. Xiao w respecting your perrnu. Xiao is not only supporting your parents mAterially when they need iti it is also frequently updating parent!! on our futuaiiont 90 that they wouldn't worry about us and so that they can help and Advise us if they see that we need th Xiat> is not forgetting about your parents* health. Xiao is • • • (Add supportinc drUils here )
Part 3 Writing nn Essay [50 pointsj
Question 10| Write an essay on the following topic.
Th- IntenuH is becoming more central 2 mir lives It is providing echt infonri — • mare convrnirnces m wrll a» acting m ah intrrnctivr emrtaitmwM These hjiwtiOns h・vtrvclurc | 10 point* . 2 points each I
1. F 2. E 3. G 4. B 5・ H
Part 2 Pamgraph OrxaniMllon und Development「40 points I
Question* 6—8 (15polnls> 5 points each)
6. A 7. A & C
Quntion 9 25 pointiu
MarkinK Guidelines (供尊号〉
21—25
内容切・i粮性好，澎法正・•论「，讷顺恰％，禁本无话法MiRiWMXa.
16-20
内容旬■ 1建食性0!好• is nr段为通IH恰弥4少*»««，篇幅送当.
11 15
内容校完会8羯句1 »V«本通腰.有少 MttMiR »«Mtt当・
6—10
内修不完iR句欠ttKiW法41眼枚多.
0-5
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Herr bi a tuimpk.
<(>ivrn on the lent pnprri Xian in a fundamcntAl concept in (?hinc»c culture. Whut in Xiuo? I think Xiao 浦 love (or pwrentn nnd being good to purentn. Thrtr nrv many rwunplc^ o( Ixnng Xtao townrch parents by a wti or n clatightrn Xiao in rcspcrtinK your pnrmteu Xiuo i not only ttuppornng your parents tnntcnnlly when they need iti it 浦 a1»o frequently uprinting parents on our tituntion* so that they wouldn't worry about u・ nnd no that they can help nnd ndviw u« if they see that we need it. Xian i» not (orKetting about your parentsr health.)
Xiao is waking up m two o'clock in th。fnorning U） remind your menher io uke her medicine. Xi。。is run visiting purees only on weekends when you dou'i hiivc better things io do. Xiu。is taking lime off work u> spend Ahk? wilh your parents 将 not sending your parents away to an old people's npmment. so tfmt they won't 邱k you to run bmnds> X如 is letting your parem live in your house, so thm you sn be at their service when they need you<
Part 3 Writing an Essay [50 points]
Question 10 Marking Guidelines（供参考）
46—50 分
内容切题,完整，条理清楚.文章结构严谨1语法正确.语育通顺恰当.句式用 词富有变化,有“闪光点”8基本无语言诺误.
41 — 45 分
内容切题.完整；条理清楚，文章结构产谨，语法正胸.语言通顺恰当,有少量 语法情俱.
31—40 分
内容基本切题.完整■条理基本清楚，文章结构基本严谨3语法基本正瑜.宙 吉基本通朋恰当，有少■浴官情俱.
21—30 分
内容基本切顺.完整，条理不够清fth较多语舀销误.许多何使用不当.
11—2。分
内容偏题，不完整，思路混乱,语句不完整■只有少数句子可以理解，同汇拼 写情误较多.
0—10 分
内容偏不完费，思路混乱，涪句不完整，句子无法理解.