写作讲座道德类市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,四级议论文写作,道德观类,Moral values,第1页,第1页,素材,On lie-free society,第2页,第2页,advantages,fantastic,be honest and open about their conducts in social contact,No ill-minded liar,the chain debt,the under-the-table trade,society would live a life filled with truth,trust and warmth,第3页,第3页,disadvantages,horrible,express their real feelings,like dislike and hate,friendship(X),business secrets,patents,the top secrets of the government,an object of invasion from outside.,第4页,第4页,to sum up,know where to apply it,intended to comfort designed to do more harm to,the bottom line is,第5页,第5页,启承转合,1.相关“启”惯用词语,用来引导主题或跟在主题句后面,引导第一个推展句。,at first，at present，currently,first，first of all，firstly,generally speaking,in the beginning，in the first place，to begin with，to start with,it goes without saying that,lately，now，presently，recently,第6页,第6页,2,相关“承”学用词语,用来承接主题句或第一个推展句。,after after a few days after a while,also at any rate by this time at the same time,besides,meanwhile,moreover,what is more,Furthermore,in addition,in addition to.,certainly,consequently,for example,for instance,for this purpose,from now on,in fact，in other words,in particular,in the same manner,incidentally顺便让我一提）indeed,obviously,of course,particularly（尤其地）,second,secondly similarly,so,soon,still,then,third,thirdly,truly,unlike.,第7页,第7页,3 相关“转”惯用词语:用不表示不同或相反语气。,after all（毕竟）all the same anyway,at the same time but by the time（此时）,conversely（相反地）despite especially,fortunately however in other words,in particular in spite of.in the same way,likewise luckily nevertheless,no doubt not withstanding.（即使）,on the other hand,otherwise perhaps unfortunately,unlike whereas yet,第8页,第8页,4,相关“合”惯用词语:用来引导结尾或最后一个推展句,表示段落结束。,above all,accordingly（于是）,as a consequence,consequently，thus，,as a result,hence，therefore,as has been noted（如前所述）as I have said（如我所述）,at last,at length,by and large,by doing so，to speak frankly，,eventually（最后）finally,briefly,in brief(简言之)in short,in conclusion（最后）in sum（总之,简言之）,in summary on the whole（就全体面论,整个看来）,to sum up（总言之）to summarize（摘要之）,第9页,第9页,二、短语与句型利用实例,1、the+est+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/,read,etc),HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.海伦是我所看过最美丽女孩。,Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatI,haveeverhad.张老师是我曾经碰到最仁慈教师。,第10页,第10页,二、短语与句型利用实例,2、Nothingis+erthanto+VNothingis+more+形容词+thanto+V,Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.没有比接受教育更主要事。,第11页,第11页,二、短语与句型利用实例,3.cannotemphasizetheimportanceoftoomuch.（再怎么强调.主要性也不为过。）,Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceof,protectingoureyestoomuch.,我们再怎么强调保护眼睛主要性也不为过。,第12页,第12页,A or B类型,呈现问题,Recently,the issue of.has been brought into public focus.,Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations,and great changes have taken place in peoples attitude towards some traditional practice.,第13页,第13页,Recently the issue of whether or not.has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.,The issue whether it is good or not to.has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.,The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.,第14页,第14页,观点不一致,At present,some people think.while others claim.Both sides have their merits.,People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.,People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.,However,there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.,第15页,第15页,When asked.,some people think.while some prefer.,Just as the saying goes:so many people,so many minds.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.,To this issue,different people come up with various attitudes.,There is a good side and a bad side to everything,it goes without saying that.,第16页,第16页,When it comes to.,most people believe that.,but other people regard.as.,When faced with.,quite a few people claim that.,but other people think as.,There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of.Those who criticize.argue that,but people who favor.,on the other hand,argue that.,Some people are of the opinion that.,Many people claim that.,第17页,第17页,表示表明观点用词和句型,Some people,contend,that.has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages),Those who,argue,for.say that.economic development of the cities.,Some people,advocate,that.,They,hold,that.,People,who,advocate,that.,have their sound reasons(grounds),第18页,第18页,Those who have already benefited from practicing it,sing high praise of it.,Those who strongly,approve of,.have cogent reasons for it.,Many people would,claim,that.,People who,support,.give some or all of the following reasons.,But others,hold the view,that.,Some people,examine this issue,from another angle.,第19页,第19页,我之观点：选择，权衡型句型,According to my personality and fondness,I would prefer.rather than.,Personally,I side with the latter(former)opinion.,Personally,I am in favor of the former point of view.,To my point of view,To my mind,the advantages far overweigh the drawbacks（disadvantages,shortcomings）,第20页,第20页,For my part,I stand on side of the latter opinion that.,As far as I am concerned,I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.,After a thorough consideration,for my part,I am in favor of the latter view that.,If asked to make a decision,I would prefer.,Taking into consideration both sides of the issue,I tend to favor the latter view.,When considering opinions of both sides,I am inclined to.第21页,第21页,If it is up to me to make a choice between.and.I would rather choose.over.,I would have to say that,if I were faced with the decision,I would follow.,At the risk of sounding too direct,I prefer to.,第22页,第22页,我之观点：原因总起句,In my mind,the following factors/reasons/causes need to be taken into consideration.,There are several reasons for this phenomenon/why.-(as follows,And I would like to present two explanations for this:,The reasons are chiefly as follows.,There are numerous reasons why _,and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here.,The reasons are presented belowThere are three premier(主要)/best/most important,largest,significant,obvious,crucial causes as follows.,This is based on the propensity(倾向，原因)of following points.,第23页,第23页,原因阐述,The main reason is that.,One very important argument for.is that,The reasons are quite clear.Above all,The first reason can be seen by every person.,The first and most important reason is that.,One of the reasons that are given for.is that,Perhaps this is because of the simple fact that.,One of the premier causes is that,第24页,第24页,We may look into every possible reason,however,foremost reason for.Is.,It might also be noted that.,What is also worth noticing is that.,There is another factor that deserves some words here.A more essential factor why.Is that,A further reason why,is that.,第25页,第25页,Moving on to wider themes,_ 展开来说，_。,The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that.,Likewise(同样),common sense tells us that.,The third but very important reason is that.,The third,not the last is that,The last factor to be taken seriously is.,第26页,第26页,比如表示方式：,For example,For instance,It can be given a concrete example,Take.for an example,it is a very obvious case,There is one impressive example I want to mention here.,Lets see an example.,It is best illustrated if given the following example.,第27页,第27页,Let me provide an example.,Perhaps the most important example of.is that.,As I remember,/I now still remember that.,I will never forget that,To illustrate this,there is an example that is very persuasive.,An instance that accompanies this reason is that.,An example can give the details of this argument,.,It is a forceful example to demonstrate the importance of.,History presented many examples of.,In order to see this point clearly,let us see an example.,第28页,第28页,综合利用篇,Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of which is that.,伴随社会不停发展，出现了越来越多问题，其中之一便是_。,As to whether it is a blessing or a curse,however,people take different attitudes.,然而，对于这类问题，人们持不同看法。（Hold different attitudes 持不同看；Come up with different attitudes 有不同看法）,As society develops,people are attaching much importance to.,伴随社会发展，人们开始关注.,第29页,第29页,People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting,求职过程中，人们慢慢意识到面试主要性。,As to whether it is worthwhile.,there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite naturalthat people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.,关于是否值得_问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同人对此可能持不同观点。,第30页,第30页,In the process of modern urban development,we often find ourselves in a dilemma.,在都市发展中，我们往往会陷入困境。,Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern,some people are in alarm that.,最近，这种现象引起了人们广泛关注，有些人开始紧张_。,The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history,with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization,more problems are brought to our attention.,人类进入了一个历史崭新阶段，经济全球化、都市化速度不断加快，随之给我们带来了诸多问题。,第31页,第31页,.plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world,there comes a question,is it a blessing or a curse?,_显得非常主要而成为当今世界所关注最大问题，这是无可厚非。但是，问题是：我们该如何抉择？,Now we are entering a new era,full of opportunities and challenges,现在我们正在进入一个充斥机会和挑战新时代。,第32页,第32页,Sample writing It pays to be honest,Nowadays people are troubled with mass of dishonest behaviors in society.,(examples),Teachers get annoyed when they catch students cheating on exams;consumers get hurt when they unfortunately buy some fake products;children are misled when they see their parents tell lies so as to evade the responsibility they should take.,第33页,第33页,Why do people cheat?,The main reason,probably,lies in,immediate interest they may obtain by cheating.,For example,a company,which manufactures fake products,may seem to win for a moment because it can minimize its manufacture cost by doing so.This kind of businesses,however,will be driven out of the market in the long run,for,the consumers after getting to know the poor quality of the products will not buy them anymore.,第34页,第34页,The same is true of individuals.,Dishonest people dare not take on the responsibility of life.,(examples),They cheat in class,in office,at home and so on.But the truth can hardly be masked.,The moment the truth comes out they will lose their credibility,which is easier to destroy than to rebuild.,Consequently,these dishonest will suffer a long time because of their cheating behaviors.,In conclusion,no one can afford to be dishonest in a civilized society.Honesty is the pillar of a society.People will benefit from being honest in the long run.Thats why we say it pays to be honest.,第35页,第35页,How to improve public morals?,Nowadays there are still many behaviors against public morality,such as,spiting or littering in public places,cutting in line,wasting water or electricity and so on.,第36页,第36页,One of the main reasons for these immoral behaviors is that,some people lack personal manners and public consciousness.Actually these small things,in many peoples eyes,have brought great bad effects on our community.,Above all,these immoral behaviors disturb social order and disrupt sociability.,Moreover,ones,violating public morality,not only,evades others benefits,but also,does harm to,himself.,For example,if most people buy,pirated products,those original producers will suffer great damage and might lose the enthusiasm to continue their producing，which,in turn,influences consumers taking the profits into consideration.I think,it is high time that,we took more effective measures to improve public morals.,第37页,第37页,First of all,education plays a very vital role.We must,utilize education,to make people know their behaviors influence on the society and follow public morals consciously.,Besides,the government should improve the administration system and,ensure the efficient improvement of administration measures.,第38页,第38页,道德类词汇,社会风气(公德)：public morals(or morality),有公德心：be publicspirited,向公众呼吁做某事：appeal to the public to do sth.,在方面教育公众：educate the public in,无视公共规章：disregard the public rules,恪守法纪：comply with the law,盗窃是违法：Stealing is against the law,第39页,第39页,遵守公德：comply with public morality,守法：observe/obey the law,违法：offend against the law,违反公共规章：break/violate public regulations,她自认为能够凌驾法律之上：She acts as if she is above the law,制定和严格执法：make and rigidly enforce the law,遵守交规:observe traffic regulations,按道德行事：follow the morals,第40页,第40页,改进社会风气：improve public morals,维护公共道德：safeguard public morals,损害公共道德：injure public morality,应当受到法律严惩：deserve to be punished heavily by the law,从他行为中能够清楚看到，他不讲道德：It is obvious from his behavior that he,has no morality,Powered by,第41页,第41页,