专题十九书面表达市公开课一等奖省优质课赛课一等奖课件.pptx

Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,*,*,专题十九书面表示,高考英语,(天津市专用),第1页,考点一提要类,Writing 1(天津夏),假设你是晨光中学机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他,曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你团体,参加即将于7月底在天津举行世,界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请依据以下提醒代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。,(1)比赛时间、地点;,(2)邀请他原因;,(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出提议。,注意:,(1)词数不少于100;,(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;,(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,五年高考,第2页,参考词汇:,世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics Competition,Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you.,I,m looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Jin,第3页,答案,写作提醒,1.本文是一封电子邮件,主要人称为第一人称和第二人称,主体时态为普通现在时和普通未来时。,2.文章关键点:,说明写邮件目标;介绍比赛时间和地点;邀请他原因;通知Chris训练计划将发,送到他邮箱并请他提出自己提议。,One possible version:,Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you.,The World Adolescent Robotics Competition is scheduled to be held,at the end of July in Tianjin.I,m writing to invite you to join our team to prepare for it.,As far as I know,you once won a prize in a robotics competition.Therefore,I think not only will it,be a golden opportunity for you to show your great talent,but also you can offer us guidance,which is of great significance for us to perform well in the coming competition.Our training plan is to be sent to your e-mail box.I would appreciate it if you could give us your personal advice after reading it.,I,m looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Jin,第4页,精彩语句,1.精美词汇schedule,v,.安排;计划a golden opportunity 良机significance,n,.主要性,2.出彩结构Therefore,I think not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to show your great,talent,but also you can offer us guidance,which is of great significance for us to perform well in,the coming competition.(倒装句+非限制性定语从句),第5页,Writing 2(天津春),假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你在某网站论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 外国学生发帖,子,得知他有意来中国大学学习。请依据以下提醒给 Chris 留言:,(1)勉励他来中国留学;,(2)说明来华留学好处(如:加深对中国了解,对个人发展益处等);,(3)表示愿意深入提供帮助。,注意:,(1)词数不少于 100;,(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;,(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。,第6页,Chris,Australia,Any suggestions?,Posted on Mar.22nd,9:00 PM,It,s time to make a decision.I,m wondering if I should go to China for,college.,Li Jin,China,Reply to Chris,Posted on Mar.23rd,10:00 AM,Hi,Chris,第7页,答案,写作提醒,1.本文为跟帖留言,属提要类作文。以第一人称为主体人称;以普通现在时和普通过去时为主,体时态。,2.依据内容关键点可分三段来写:勉励Chris来华留学;说明来华留学好处;表示自己意,愿:愿意深入提供帮助。,One possible version:,Hi,Chris,I learned about the message you posted on the Internet that you have the intention to come to Chi-,na for college,which makes me delighted because I believe it would be a great opportunity for you,to enrich your life as well as broadening your mind.,There are many advantages of studying in China.First of all,there are many remarkable universi-,ties in China for you to choose to attend and you can experience the rich Chinese culture.Second,it is an extremely meaningful experience for you,providing you with a wonderful platform where,you can not only learn more about China but also promote your personal abilities.,Don,t hesitate to contact me if you need any more help.,第8页,高级表示,1.broaden one,s mind开阔眼界,2.an extremely meaningful experience 一次极其有意义体验,3.the rich Chinese culture灿烂中国文化,4.promote your personal abilities提升你个人能力,精彩语句,1.精美词汇opportunity,n,.机会enrich,vt,.使丰富remarkable,adj,.卓越,非凡,2.出彩结构(1)I learned about the message you posted on the Internet that you have the intention,to come to China for college,which makes me delighted because I believe it would be a great op-,portunity for you to enrich your life as well as broadening your mind.(message后接省去that/which,定语从句,that引导同位语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句,because引导原因状语从句),(2)Second,it is an extremely meaningful experience for you,providing you with a wonderful plat-,form where you can not only learn more about China but also promote your personal abilities.(现,在分词短语providing.作伴随状语,where引导定语从句),第9页,Writing 3(课标全国),假定你是李华,你新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你问询相关习俗。请你回,复邮件,内容包含:,1.抵达时间;,2.适当礼品;,3.餐桌礼仪。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,第10页,答案,写作提醒,1.本文是回复一封邮件,主要人称为第二人称,写作主体时态为普通现在时。,2.文章关键点:抵达时间;适当礼品;餐桌礼仪。,One possible version:,Dear Terry,I am delighted when receiving your letter,asking what customs you should pay attention to when,visiting a friend.Here are my tips for you.,First of all,bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the ap-,pointed time,which is of great significance to show your politeness.Additionally,to be respectful,you might as well bring an appropriate gift,like some fruits.Most importantly,it,s vital that you,should mind your table manners.For instance,never speak with your mouth full of food,which,may be similar to your own custom.,In brief,do as the Chinese do when in China.I do hope you will have great fun at your friends home.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,第11页,精彩语句,1.精美词汇punctually,adv,.按时地be of great significance 很主要appropriate,adj,.适当,2.出彩结构First of all,bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier,than the appointed time,which is of great significance to show your politeness.(that引导宾语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句),第12页,Writing 4(课标全国),你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片,Growing,To-,gether,内容包含:,1.短片内容:学校发展;,2.放映时间、地点;,3.欢迎对短片提出意见。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,第13页,答案,写作提醒,本文为提要式作文,属于应用文中书面通知。可采取三段三步写作法写作。,第一步审题立意,布局谋篇“启”:审题确定主题、体裁、主要人称和主体时态。主题:,在学校宣传栏“英语天地”公布邀请大家观看短片书面通知;体裁:书面通知;人称和时态:,以第一、二人称为主要人称,以普通现在时或普通未来时为主体时态。,第二步确定、提炼和理顺关键点,顺势承上启下,巧妙转折过渡巧“承”妙“转”,即注意,段落之间、句子之间衔接与过渡。结合关键点文章可分三段来写。第一段:介绍短片内容,学校发展;第二段:说明放映时间和地点;第三段:表示愿望希望大家对短片提意,见。,第三步紧紧围绕主题,遣词造句“合”:照应开头和主题完美结尾,是画龙点睛之笔。紧,扣主题组词成句,做到语言得体、准确无误,防止重复;遣词造句时,注意高级词汇、短语或句,式使用。,第14页,One possible version:,Notice,Dear schoolmates,It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that we,ll invite you to see an Eng-,lish short film named,Growing,Together,which is about the development of our school.,We have arranged that the short film will be on show from 16:00 to 17:00 at our school theater to-,morrow.Don,t miss the chance of taking part in this collective activity.,I do hope you can give us some valuable suggestions about the short film.Please give your feed-,back in time and contact us at your convenience.,Students,Union,精彩语句,1.精美词汇on behalf of代表take part in参加;参加feedback,n,.反馈at one,s convenience,在某人方便时候,2.出彩结构It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that we,ll invite you,to see an English short film named,Growing,Together,which is about the development of our,school.(that引导宾语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句),第15页,Writing 5(课标全国),假定你是李华,你英国朋友Peter来信问询你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包含:,1.学校体育场馆;,2.主要运动项目;,3.你喜欢项目。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,第16页,答案,写作提醒,1.本文为书信形式说明文;以第一人称口吻介绍学校体育场馆和主要运动项目;时态,以普通现在时为主。,2.可采取三段式结构。第一段:介绍背景,引出写作目标;第二段:详细介绍试题给出三个要,点,其中第二个关键点可采取列举方式,第三个关键点除了写自己喜欢体育运动,还要阐述喜欢,这项体育运动原因;第三段:总结并发出邀请。,One possible version:,Dear Peter,I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.You asked me in your last letter about the physical,exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.,To begin with,a fabulous new stadium has been built,which has become the new landmark in our school.,Moreover,with the stadium set up,a wide range of sports events are able to be held,of which ping-pong and,football,as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.As for me,I,m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.All in all,I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.,Yours,Li Hua,第17页,精彩语句,1.精美词汇exceedingly,adv,.非常,极其give sb.a rough sketch向某人做简单陈说enjoy,great popularity受到了热烈欢迎,2.出彩结构Moreover,with the stadium set up,a wide range of sports events are able to be held,of which ping-pong and football,as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.(with复,合结构作状语,of which引导定语从句),第18页,Writing 6(浙江,第一节),假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包含:,1.口语能力;,2.相关经验;,3.应聘目标。,注意:,1.词数80左右;,2.能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,第19页,答案,写作提醒,1.本文是一封求职信,以第一人称为主,时态主要用普通现在时。,2.内容关键点:(1)口语能力;(2)相关经验;(3)此次应聘目标。,One possible version:,Dear Sir/Madam,On seeing your notice on the bulletin board,I feel excited to write this letter for the position.,Owing to studying in the English department,I can talk in English fluently.To be honest,I have,just won first prize in the Spoken English Competition,so there is no doubt that there is not any,problem for me to communicate with foreigners.,What,s more,I have ever served as a receptionist in our schools 70th anniversary celebration,making myself more confident.,In order to practise my speaking skills and get more experience,Im eager to be taken on for this job.,Looking forward to your early reply.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,第20页,精彩语句,1.精美词汇owing to因为fluently,adv,.流利地to be honest老实说communicate,v,.沟通;,交流what,s more而且,confident,adj,.有信心be eager to do sth.渴望做某事look forward to sth.期盼某事,2.出彩结构,(1)On seeing your notice on the bulletin board,I feel excited to write this letter for the position.(on,doing sth.表示“一做某事”),(2).there is no doubt that there is not any problem for me to communicate with foreigners.(There,is no doubt that.句式),(3)Whats more,I have ever served as a receptionist in our schools 70th anniversary celebration,making myself more confident.(making.为非谓语动词短语作状语,表示自然而然结果),第21页,Writing 7(北京,第一节),假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你英国朋友Jim在给你邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴,趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包含:,1.表示欢迎;,2.推荐他上哪所大学;,3.提议他做哪些准备工作。,注意:1.词数不少于50;,2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua,第22页,答案,写作提醒,1.仔细审题,注意交际用语;,2.关键点齐全,合理添加细节;,3.注意词句使用,关注文章整体性。,One possible version:,Dear Jim,I,m happy to hear from you.Welcome to Beijing for your study!,Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture,I think Beijing Language and Culture Uni-,versity is an ideal place for you.The university is known for its language and culture courses in-,tended for international students.I believe you will have a rewarding experience there.,第23页,To be frank,studying for a degree in a different culture is never easy.You,d better learn some ba-,sic Chinese before you come.That way,you may adjust yourself to the life here in Beijing soon.,If you have any other questions,do let me know.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇ideal,adj,.理想rewarding,adj,.值得做,2.出彩结构The university is known for its language and culture courses intended for interna-,tional students.(非谓语动词作定语),第24页,Writing 8(天津夏),假设你是李津,与你以前外籍教师Mrs.Green一直保持联络。近日她来信问询你近况,请,依据以下提醒给她回复一封邮件。,(1)简明介绍自己学习和生活;,(2)通知你已成为八月底在津举行第十三届全运会志愿者,并介绍为此所做准备(如深入,了解天津等);,(3)希望她有机会重访天津。,注意:,(1)词数不少于100;,(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;,(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。,参考词汇:第十三届全运会the 13th National Games,第25页,Dear Mrs.Green,I,m so glad to hear from you.,Yours,Li Jin,第26页,答案,写作提醒,1.本文为提要式作文,体裁为应用文。人称以第一人称为主,时态以普通现在时为主。,2.写作关键点:,(1)介绍自己学习和生活;,(2)告诉Mrs.Green你已成为第十三届全运会志愿者,并介绍你为此所做准备;,(3)希望Mrs.Green重访天津。,One possible version:,Dear Mrs.Green,I,m so glad to hear from you.,With the college entrance examination drawing near,I am engaged,in preparing for it.Meanwhile,owing to my great interest in sports,I pay close attention to the 13,th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August.And the good news I want to tell you,第27页,is that I have become a volunteer for it.In order to have a good performance,I have made a lot of,preparations for it.After school,I often surf the Internet to get more information about the history,and culture of Tianjin.I also practice my oral English every day.,I do hope you can revisit Tianjin someday.,Yours,Li Jin,精彩语句,1.精美词汇performance,n,.表现;成绩revisit,v,.重游,再访be engaged in 忙于,2.出彩结构With the college entrance examination drawing near,I am engaged in preparing for,it.(with复合结构),第28页,Writing 9(天津春),假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你美国笔友 Chris 正在学习汉语,他得知“中国诗词大,会”在 CCTV 播出,非常感兴趣,便写信给你,希望你介绍相关情况及更多了解中国文化途,径。请依据以下提醒给他写一封回信。,(1)简单介绍“中国诗词大会”引发反响;,(2)介绍了解中国文化路径(如阅读相关书籍、利用媒体资源等);,(3)表示对 Chris 学习中国文化祝福。,注意:(1)词数不少于 100;,(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;,(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,参考词汇:中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Competition,第29页,Dear Chris,Yours,Li Jin,第30页,答案,写作提醒,本文为提要式作文,属于书信体。主要使用第一、三人称,以普通现在时为主体时态。,文章可分三段来写:首段简单介绍“中国诗词大会”在 CCTV 播出后反响;第二段可详细推,荐一本书;第三段表示自己祝福。,One possible version:,Dear Chris,I,m glad to reply to your letter.Chinese Poetry Competition,which aims to encourage people to,know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture,has been broadcast on CCTV and has attract-,ed almost all the people who are interested in Chinese poetry.,In your letter,you mentioned that you are eager to know about Chinese culture.I think the best,way to learn about it is to read some relevant books.I,d like to recommend a book to you.The,book,entitled,Read,Poetry,and,Learn,History,by Wang Chunshui,is suitable for the foreigners to,learn classical Chinese poetry.The poems in the book can reflect the Chinese history and culture,第31页,many of which can give readers vivid pictures of the life of the ancient Chinese.And they can also,improve your appreciation of Chinese poetry.,I think the book is a good choice for you.I believe you will understand the poems easily and effi-,ciently.Wish you to enjoy the book and know more about China.,Yours,Li Jin,精彩语句,1.精美词汇be interested in对,感兴趣be eager to do sth.渴望做某事be suitable for适合,2.出彩结构Chinese Poetry Competition,which aims to encourage people to know more about,traditional Chinese poetry culture,has been broadcast on CCTV and has attracted almost all the,people who are interested in Chinese poetry.(句中使用了一个which引导非限制性定语从句和,一个who引导定语从句),第32页,Writing 10(课标全国),假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包含:,1.展览时间、地点;,2.展览内容。,注意:1.词数100左右;,2.能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,第33页,答案,写作提醒,1.本文为提要式作文,体裁为书信。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,以普通现在时和普通将,来时为主体时态。,2.文章关键点:,1)展览时间、地点;,2)展览内容:中国传统剪纸艺术历史和作品。,One possible version:,Dear Henry,I,m Li Hua,one of your students.I,m writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition.,Paper-cutting is one of Chinese traditions and I,m sure you will like it.,The exhibition will be held in the local museum next Saturday.Some famous Chinese artists will,第34页,perform on that day.Meanwhile,some beautiful paper-cutting works,collected from all over the,country,will be exhibited there.It will be a feast.If you like,you can also join in paper-cutting.I,m sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.,I,m looking forward to hearing from you.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇exhibition,n,.展览unforgettable,adj,.难忘,2.出彩结构If you like,you can also join in.(if引导条件状语从句),第35页,Writing 11(课标全国),假定你是李华。你所在校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀,请他加入,内容包含:,1.球队活动;,2.报名方式及截止日期。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,第36页,答案,写作提醒,1.本文为提要类作文。人称应以第一、二人称为主,时态以普通现在时、普通未来时为主。,2.写作关键点:导入话题:鉴于Eric对乒乓球运动兴趣,特通知他校乒乓球队招收新队员消,息;介绍球队活动,可从日常训练安排以及比赛活动入手;通知Eric报名方式,提醒他务必在,截止日期前完成报名。,One possible version:,Dear Eric,I,m writing to invite you to join our school table tennis team.I have been told that our school team,is recruiting new members.Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis,I wonder if you,d,like to join.,第37页,Team members need to receive training after school every day and are often offered opportunities,to watch table tennis competitions,which benefit me most.What do you think of it?If you are in-,terested in it,you can visit the school website to sign up.The closing date is 15th June.,I hope to meet you in the school team.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇recruit,v,.吸收;招募be keen on酷爱,对,着迷,2.出彩结构Knowing that you are.I wonder if.(现在分词短语中that引导宾语从句;wonder后,if引导宾语从句),第38页,Wri