教案34雅思真题模拟与范文解析一.doc

教案34雅思真题与范文解析一

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第34讲：雅思真题与范文解析（一）
一、 复习提问
经典句型造句练习
二、 新课讲解
一 雅思四分作文
流行运动，例如世纪杯等国际运动，在增加国家凝聚力和缓解国际紧张起到很大的作用，你是否同意此种观点？
I disagree
Nowadays, football is the most popular game in the world. We can find there are many different teams who plays this football. There are dividing into 3division: division one, division two and division three. Each division have different skills. The skills that they have are depend on the manager. He is the one who teaches the player how to play…..
There are other sport games like tennis. Tennis is also popular. In playing tennis there are also have advantages and disadvantages. This games shows how they against each other. The advantages are can earn a lot of money, can attract the spectators (audience)…….
In my opinion, these sport can ease the international tensions and also can make death from year to year become increase. So, it is very dangerous.

本篇文章跑题严重，有用信息很有限而且语法掌握薄弱，因此为雅思4分作文。

二 雅思五分作文
2，国际旅游业为很多地区带来利益，然而有些人认为旅游业的发展可能对当地的居民和环境带来影响，你是怎么看待这个问题？
In my opinion advantages outweight the disadvantages. Firstly, many countries like Egypt or Tailand live from tourism Lots of people work there as a seilsmens or tourist guides. These countries without support of tourists wouldn’t be able to funtcion properly.
Secondly, in countries visited by tourists are plenty of places where people just can’t pass because of rare animals or plants.
Another thing is that people like traveling and seeing new exotic places. They like lie on the beach or swim in ocean.
Furthermore, tourism is now more growing industry highering tousands of people. There are makeing new places to work and to have fun.
But on the other hand, people often forget that they aren’t the only beings on the planet.
Many tourists are living garbage just anywhere. Some of them wan’t an exotic souvenir so they pay for illegal things like dead or live animals or some sculpture.
To sum up I think international traveling is a good thing but people must realise that there is something else besides them. They need to know that flora and fauna needs to be protected. People have to enjoy their holidays but alsow protect environment.

本篇文章论点表示清楚，词语运用灵活，运用了例如“Secondly” and “Furthermore”等连词，但存在个别拼写错误，例如第二段“seilsmens” 及句式简单的不足，几乎都是主谓结构的简单句，例如，Many tourists are living garbage just anywhere. Some of them wan’t an exotic souvenir so they pay for illegal things like dead or live animals or some sculpture.

三 雅思7分作文
Tourism is a very big industry in the modern time and is growing quite rapidly. Thousands of people travel everywhere to various destinations every year. Arguments have come up regarding the benefits and negative impacts of tourism in places and on its local inhabitants and environment; however, I believe there are more advantages than disadvantages of international tourism.
　　People travel for various reasons; we travel for business purposes, holidays, visit friends and relatives etc. Travelling is mostly seen as a recreational activity. Tourism has many advantages. Tourism can play a tremendous part in a countrys economy, the more tourists visit a country and spend money there, the better it is for the country; that way more money is circulated within the country and even the stability of their currencys rate of exchange persists if not improve. Vendors and shops get to sell more goods and make an income. Tourism also has its non-monetary advantages; it brings cultures and people closer. People from all around the world get to share their culture with each other and even learn more. This is a good opportunity in education.
　　Tourism seems to have some disadvantages too; However, I believe the problems caused by tourism are not something that cannot be solved or prevented. A lot of people believe that tourism can destroy or deviate culture and causes quite an impact on visited locations, such as pollution and littering. People can adhere to their own beliefs and way of life if they want to; no one can really forcefully influence someone to change from their morals and ethics. Pollution can be avoided by increasing usage of environmental friendly vehicles used for tours and rents, warnings and visual education on littering and smoking, specific times can be allocated for tours to certain areas, such as peak times where local inhabitants feel uncomfortable due to too many foreigners.
　　Where there are problems there can always be solutions. Tourism brings great amount of advantages for any place in many ways and is a “win-win” exchange process. The very few problems caused can always be avoided or taken care of. I believe tourism should be highly promoted, specially in traditional and poor countries with natural beauty such as Thailand.
本篇作文论点清晰明了，句式运用灵活，单词拼写或是语法都没有出现大的纰漏，因此得到雅思作文考试的较高分数，7分。

四 雅思6分作文
贫穷国家在健康，教育和贸易的发展是非常关键的，而且富裕的国家应该担任着帮助穷国的责任，你是否同意此观点？
In balancing the world economic growth, the underdevelopment of the third World Nations have been drawn to the attention of the developed countries of the Western. Thus governmental policies and interference in the agricultural business of the poorer nations were made to secure their dominant source of the economy. Many discussions among economists and politicians also put their focus on the other aspects. That is, to improve the health, education and trade for the developing countries. However the improvements cannot be made by these countries, but more external assistance and aids should be done.
Because of the shortage of food supply, the people in poorer nations are esily prone to disease, hunger and death…….
If the richer countries can be more serious about the essential issues of how a nation develops, and well consider the special situations and circumstance those poorer nations are facing, the improvements will be more efficiently made……
该篇文章表示了作者自己的观点，但论证不充分。文章结构清晰，句子形式多样化，但存在语法和连接的不足，例如Many discussions among economists and politicians also put their focus on the other aspects. That is, to improve the health, education and trade for the developing countries.
三、课后作业
背诵常见句子及造句