2017-2021北京重点区高三(上)期中英语汇编：写作类型章节综合.docx

2017-2021北京重点区高三（上）期中英语汇编
写作类型章节综合
一．书面表达（共11小题）
1．（2019北京•海淀高三期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华．请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英语写一篇短文向校刊"英语园地"投稿，记述你班上周组织"国旗在我心中"系列活动的全过程．
注意：词数不少于60．

2．（2018北京•海淀高三期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，记述你班上个月参加学校组织的"中国骄傲"主题活动的全过程，并向校刊"英语园地"投稿．
注意：词数不少于60；
提示词：汉字 Chinese character

3．（2018北京•朝阳高三期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，准备加入学校的一个学生社团．请给你班的交换生Jim写封电子邮件，向他介绍这个社团，希望他能够一起参加．邮件的内容包括：
1． 社团的名称；
2． 社团的活动内容；
3． 询问对方的意向．
注意：1． 词数不少于50；
2． 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，

Yours，
Li Hua
4．（2018北京•东城高三期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华．请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍上周末你陪同交换生游览长城的完整过程，并以"Our Trip to the Great Wall"为题，给校刊"英语角"写一篇英文稿件．词数不少于60．

Our Trip to the Great Wall

5．（2021北京•海淀高三期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校外教Jim的线上英语课被评为"最受欢迎的线上课"，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.表达你对该课程的喜爱，并解释原因。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________
Yours，
Li Hua
6．（2019北京•朝阳高三期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华．请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以 "An honorable experience "为题，给校刊"英语角"写一篇英文稿件，介绍你和你校同学参加70 周年群众游行的过程．

注意：词数不少于60． 提示词：群众游行 civilian parade
7．（2021北京•朝阳高三期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将举办主题为"声入我心"的英文电影配音比赛。作为学生会主席，请给外教Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他担任评委，内容包括：
1.介绍比赛信息（如时间、地点等）；
2.说明评委职责。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：配音dubbing
Dear Jim，
_____________
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2020北京•海淀高三期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了减少舌尖上的浪费，你校英语俱乐部拟举办有关"爱惜食物，从我做起"的英语演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.食物浪费的现象及危害；
2.你爱惜食物的做法；
3.你的倡议。
注意：
1.词数不少于80；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning，everyone.
﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
That's all. Thank you for listening.
9．（2017北京•海淀高三期中）你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣，并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品．请你给他回信，内容包括：
1．书的题目和作者；
2．书的主要内容；
3．你的推荐理由．
注意：1．词数不少于50；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，

Yours，
Li Hua．
10．（2019北京•海淀高三期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华．你的英国朋友Jim发来邮件，询问你的高考选考情况，请给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1．选考科目；
2．选考某一科目的原因．
注意：1． 词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
提示词：选考科目 elective course
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
11．（2017北京•朝阳高三期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校将举办"中华传统文化周"活动．请给你班的交换生Jim写封电子邮件，希望他一起参加．邮件的内容包括：
1．介绍活动的安排（如时间、地点、内容等）；
2．说明活动的目的；
3．询问对方的意向．
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，　 　
Yours，
Li Hua．

参考答案
一．书面表达（共11小题）
1．
【分析】
高分句型一：We went through books on the birth of the flag， which took us back to 7 decades ago， the dawn of a new era．
译文：我们翻阅了有关国旗诞生的书籍，这使我们回到了70年前，一个新时代的曙光．
分析：which引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二：During the weekend， we recorded what we had learned and presented our work on the blackboard．
译文：在周末，我们把学到的东西记录下来，并在黑板上展示我们的工作．
分析：what引导宾语从句．
【解答】Last week， my classmates and I participated in a series of activities with the theme "National Flag in my Heart"．
During the class meeting on Monday， our class teacher informed us of these activities which were aimed to enhance our understanding of the national flag and promote patriotism． Fully aware of its significance， we couldn't wait to get started．（图一）
Over the next several days， we learned more about the topic from various resources． We went through books on the birth of the flag， which took us back to 7 decades ago， the dawn of a new era． 【高分句型一】We also collected online stories of the flag in more recent years and realized what it symbolizes for every Chinese， including soldiers on guard at the borderline， the athletes on Olympics podiums and so on．（图二）
Watching the flag﹣raising ceremony at Tian'anmen Square impressed us most． We stood in solemn silence as the soldiers marched to the pole， guarding the national flag． As the flag went up， we saluted while singing our national anthem together． Before we knew it， our eyes had welled up with tears， for we were filled with pride thinking of the prosperity of today and feeling admiration toward all who made it come true．（图三）
During the weekend， we recorded what we had learned and presented our work on the blackboard．【高分句型二】 We wrote the column "All about the Red Flag with Five Stars"， accompanied by photos taken at Tian'anmen Square． Each stroke was finished with our affection toward our national flag and motherland． The red flag had made it to the depth of hearts!（图四）
【点评】这是一篇图画类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来． 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
2．
【分析】
高分句型一：We also consulted our teacher，who explained to us how they came into being．
译文：我们还咨询了老师，老师向我们解释了它们是如何形成的．
分析：这句话使用主从复合句，who引导定语从句修饰our teacher．
高分句型二：On the day when the exhibition "Pride of China" was held in our school，I introduced the charm of Chinese characters with great pride，which was well received with applauses．
译文：在我校举办"中国骄傲"展览的那一天，我自豪地介绍了汉字的魅力，受到了热烈的掌声．
分析：the day后面是when引导的定语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句．
【解答】Last month，my classmates and I participated in the activity themed "Pride of China" in our school．
In one class meeting，after our teacher informed us of this activity，we had a discussion on the topic．In the end，my idea to show the history of Chinese characters stood out．（中国骄傲主题活动）
We started by learning more about the topic．Firstly，we visited the museum to learn about the origin and evolution of Chinese characters．We also consulted our teacher，who explained to us how they came into being．【高分句型一】（参观，咨询老师） The next step was to make the display board．With our joint efforts，we successfully made an informative and attractive one．（做展示板）
On the day when the exhibition "Pride of China" was held in our school，I introduced the charm of Chinese characters with great pride，which was well received with applauses．【高分句型二】I am glad that we did our bit in providing the students with a chance to appreciate the achievements of ancient and modern China．（做展示）
【点评】这是一篇图画类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
3．
【分析】
高分句型一：We'll learn the basic knowledge of photography， such as the color and composition of the pictures， so that we can record the beauty around us in a better way．
译文：我们将学习摄影的基本知识，比如图片的颜色和构图，这样我们就能更好地记录我们周围的美．
分析：这句话使用主从复合句，so that引导结果状语从句．
高分句型二：Besides， we'll have exhibitions of excellent works， in which we could share our ideas and skills and enable more students to appreciate the beauty of life．
译文：此外，我们还将举办优秀作品展览，在展览中我们可以分享我们的思想和技能，让更多的学生欣赏生活的美．
分析：这句话使用主从复合句，in which引导非限制性定语从句．
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm writing to tell you that I'll take part in the photography community in our school and ask if you'd like to go with me．（社团的名称）
There are a wide variety of activities in this community．（社团的活动内容） We'll learn the basic knowledge of photography， such as the color and composition of the pictures， so that we can record the beauty around us in a better way．【高分句型一】 Besides， we'll have exhibitions of excellent works， in which we could share our ideas and skills and enable more students to appreciate the beauty of life．【高分句型二】
I've heard that photography is also your hobby． I'm sure we'll have fun together． Look forward to your reply．（询问对方的意向）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来． 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
4．
【分析】
高分句型一：Everyone was excited， discussing what we had known about the Great Wall， including anecdotes and legends．
译文：大家都很激动，讨论我们对长城的了解，包括轶事和传说．
分析：这句话使用现在分词作状语，what引导宾语从句．
高分句型二：It contains exhibitions showing the history of the Great Wall and the social landscape along it， from which we got a better understanding of the Great Wall．
译文：里面有展示长城历史和沿途社会风貌的展览，从中我们对长城有了更好的了解．
分析：这句话使用主从复合句，from which引导定语从句．
【解答】Our Trip to the Great Wall
Last weekend， I accompanied two exchange students to the Great Wall， which proved to be a very pleasant trip．
Early on Saturday morning， we got on the bus happily． Everyone was excited， discussing what we had known about the Great Wall， including anecdotes and legends．【高分句型一】（乘车） Two hours later we got to our destination， and everyone couldn't wait to start climbing． We spent the next few hours on the Great Wall， stopping from time to time to take photos and appreciate its magnificence as well as the breathtaking scenery around it．（登长城） Then we went to the Great Wall Museum nearby． It contains exhibitions showing the history of the Great Wall and the social landscape along it， from which we got a better understanding of the Great Wall．【高分句型二】 Time passed quickly! It was noon before we knew it． （参观博物馆）Before leaving， we took a group selfie to record this unforgettable moment． Excitement was written on everyone's face．
It was really an impressive trip and I really felt proud of this world wonder．（感想）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来． 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
5．
【分析】
高分句型一：During them，not only can I learn a lot of knowledge in the texts，but also I can practise my oral English.
译文：在这期间，我不仅可以从课文中学到很多知识，而且还可以练习口语。
分析：这句话使用not only置于句首，后面用部分倒装。
高分句型二：Besides，your humorous way of teaching always makes us burst into laughter，which leaves a deep impression on me.
译文：此外，你幽默的教学方式总是让我们捧腹大笑，这给我留下了深刻的印象。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I am glad to know that your online English class are ranked as the most popular online lessons.Congratulations to you.（表示祝贺）
I also enjoy attending your English classes.During them，not only can I learn a lot of knowledge in the texts，but also I can practise my oral English.【高分句型一】Besides，your humorous way of teaching always makes us burst into laughter，which leaves a deep impression on me. 【高分句型二】Last but not least，I develop confidence in English in your classes.（表达你对该课程的喜爱，并解释原因）
Thanks for your good teaching. （感谢）
Best wishes.（祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
6．
【分析】高分句型：
1．In order not to affect people's daily life， the rehearsals usually took place at midnight．
为了不影响人们的日常生活，我们的排练通常在半夜进行．
该句中In order not to affect people's daily life为动词不定式作目的状语，take place发生，举行．
2．Although the three﹣month training was tough， it was a great honor to take part in such a splendid event．
尽管三个月的训练很艰苦，但是能够参加如此大的活动真的是一种莫大的荣耀．
本句中although引导一个让步状语从句，it为形式主语，后面的动词不定式to take part in such a splendid event为真正的主语．
【解答】An honorable experience
On October 1st， a ceremony was held on Tiananmen Square to celebrate the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People's Republic of China．（介绍事件的时间、地点和目的）
Five months before the ceremony， I， together with some schoolmates， was luckily chosen to be part of the civilian parade．（入选游行队伍） Then we were engaged in three﹣ month intense training． No complaints escaped our lips in spite of exhaustion， heat， and mosquito bites． After the hard training， we were gathered to do rehearsals． In order not to affect people's daily life， the rehearsals usually took place at midnight．（高分句型一）（紧张训练以及实践排练）
Finally came the big day! With flowers in our hands， we did every move to the music carefully． When passing Tiananmen Square， we were very excited and couldn't help chanting， "Motherland， I love you!" I could see there were tears of joy on some of my schoolmates' faces．（经过天安门，参加70 周年群众游行）
After the parade， I couldn't wait to share my feelings with friends on WeChat Moments． Although the three﹣month training was tough， it was a great honor to take part in such a splendid event．（高分句型二） I'm proud of my motherland and I will surely spare more efforts to study hard and make it more powerful in the future!（分享感想）
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧
7．
【分析】
高分句型一
With your rich knowledge of English language and experiences of performing，you would be responsible for grading all the dubbing works according to the criteria，and making comments to the competitors.
分析：句子里，作be responsible for的宾语，用动名词grading all the dubbing works according to the criteria和making comments to the competitors。
翻译：凭借您丰富的英语知识和表演经验，您将负责根据标准对所有配音作品进行评分，并对参赛者发表评论。
高分句型二
Besides，we will be grateful if you could give a speech on English dubbing.
分析：句子里，if引导条件状语从句you could give a speech on English dubbing。
翻译：此外，如果您能就英语配音发表演讲，我们将不胜感激。
【解答】Dear Jim，
It is with great pleasure that I am writing to invite you to judge our English dubbing competition.The event will be held at our school hall next Friday afternoon.（介绍比赛信息）
I would like to tell you the duties of a judge.With your rich knowledge of English language and experiences of performing，you would be responsible for grading all the dubbing works according to the criteria，and making comments to the competitors.【高分句型一】Besides，we will be grateful if you could give a speech on English dubbing.【高分句型二】（说明评委职责）
On behalf of the school's Student Union，I am extremely excited to have you as our judge and I hope you will accept our invitation.（再次邀请）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
8．
【分析】
高分句型一
Moreover， wasting food also means wasting resources like water， land and energy.
分析：句子里， 动名词wasting food also作句子 means wasting resources like water， land and energy的主语.
翻译：此外，浪费粮食也意味着浪费水、土地和能源等资源。
高分句型二
Realizing the severe consequences of wasting food， I've been doing my bit to save food.
分析：句子里，现在分词Realizing the severe consequences of wasting food作原因状语。
翻译：意识到浪费食物的严重后果，我一直在尽我的一份力来节约食物。
【解答】Hello， everyone. It's my great honor to be here and give a speech on saving food.（点明主题）
Speaking of food， there are two ugly truths. First， a huge amount of food is wasted every year. Millions of tons of cooked and served food ends up in trash cans. Second， primary and secondary school students are among the top three food wasters.（食物浪费的现象）
At present， China is still heavily dependent on the import of certain grains， and wasting food will make our efforts to be self﹣sufficient in vain. Moreover， wasting food also means wasting resources like water， land and energy.【高分句型一】 Therefore， it will damage the environment in the long run.（食物浪费的危害）
Realizing the severe consequences of wasting food， I've been doing my bit to save food. 【高分句型二】At the school cafeteria， I ask for half﹣size servings when I'm not hungry. When dining out in restaurants with family or friends， I propose ordering smaller portions and taking the leftovers home. At home， I check the fridge before making shopping plans to avoid buying more food than we actually need.（介绍自己爱惜食物的做法）
Saving food benefits every one of us. Let's clean our plates today so that we can have enough for tomorrow.（发出号召）
That's all. Thank you for listening.（结束语）
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