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现在很多中学生都喜欢流行歌曲。请你根据下面的调查结果，写一篇80词左右的短文。

kind
reason
a   few
quiet   music
make them feel comfortable
many
musicians who can write their own lyrics
cool
most
music that they can dance to
full of energy

【优秀满分范文】

Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs. 

A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable. Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics. Why? They think it’s cool to express their own feelings. Most of the students like music that they can dance to. They think the music is full of energy. When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music.
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假如你是郭佳，你的美国笔友Linda给你写了一封信，说她想给自己的汉语老师送一份礼物来表达自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中国的送礼习俗，所以请你给她一些建议。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一封回信给她。
提示：1.要根据个人喜好选择礼物；
2.礼物的包装不要使用白色或者黑色包装纸（wrapping paper）；
3.不要送钟、鞋或者梨。
要求：1.语意通顺，条理清楚；
2.80词左右。（信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数）

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Linda,

I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country. 

Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.

I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
   Guo Jia 
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