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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢,A letter of giving advice,亳州市十八中 杨秀英,第1页,写作攻略,1.,提议信是向收信人对某事提出自己,提议和忠言。,2,提议信有可能是写给,个人,，,就其碰到某个问题提出自己看法和观点,；也可能是写给某个,组织和机构,，,就改进其服务提出提议或忠言。,3,提议信要写出,写信原因，提议内容，提出提议理由，,提出理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。所以提议信要写得简明扼要、目标明确、含有合理性和说服力。,第2页,写作模式,(,三段式,),1.,首段（,beginning),：开门见山，,表明写作意图,。陈说事由，注意语气。,2.,主体段落（,body,）：对所提问题进行分析，针对问题提出提议并阐述理由,(suggestions-reasons/evidence),。,3.,结尾段,(ending),：呼应开头，重申观点并礼貌地表示希望收信人接收提议愿望,。,第3页,提议信写作注意事项,：,a,开门见山，直入主题。在书信正文开头找准切入点，自然而然地引出自己想要谈主题。,b,这类文章基本时态多用,普通现在时和普通未来,时。,第4页,写作语料库：英语提议信惯用语句,A,提议信开头惯用句式,(,照应材料,表明写作意图,),1.I am sorry to know that ,2.,I am writing to you,for/with the purpose of,3.I know you,have trouble in,after reading your letter.,4,.Im writing to,express my views about/concerning,.,4.Thanks for trusting me.Its,my great,pleasure to give you some suggestions,/advice/tips,第5页,B.,提议信第二段惯用句式。,(,提出提议，阐述理由。）,I.,标准整套句式,In the first place/To begin with/First of all,why not,?If you do this,Whats more/Furthermore/Besides,you should/,are supposed to do/are expected to do,Then/That way,Last but not least,it would be a good idea if,By doing this,第6页,II.,升级加分句式,1.If I were you,I would.,2.I would like to suggest that.,3.I think it would be more helpful,/beneficial/of greater help/benefit if you could.,4.As far as I am concerned./In my opinion.,第7页,提议信结尾惯用句式,I hope you will,find these suggestions useful/helpful.,I believe if you follow my advice,youll.,3.I will,highly appreciate your consideration of my advice/suggestions/tips.,4.I believe,with your determination,you can,manage to overcome,these difficulties.,第8页,怎样给阅卷人以好第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading,点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性,2.Body,中心记述部分；层次分明,3.Ending,小结；呼应主题,第9页,书面表示怎样写？,三个步骤,Step 1 List the key points,Step 2 Make sentences,Step3.Form a passage and polish,第10页,写作训练：,假设你是李华，你美国笔友,Jack,正在为即将到来考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求援。请依据以下关键点，用英语给他回一封信。,1.,制订复习计划，树立信心,2.,坚持锻炼身体。,3.,保持良好睡眠,注意：词数,100,词左右,可适当增加细节，已使行文连贯,energetic,第11页,Dear Jack:,I am sorry to hear that,you feel extremely nervous before an important exam.Id like to give you some advice.,First,make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely.It will help you build up your confidence.,Second,take proper exercise regularly,which will help you keep healthy and energetic.,Last but not least,dont stay up late studying.It is very important/would be a good idea to have a good sleep at night,if you want to be energetic during the day.,I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.,第12页,范文讲解：,学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书,(popular science books),和文学类图,(literary books),。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封,100-120,个词信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。,注意：,信,开头与落款已给出,(,不计入词数,),。,第13页,Dear Mr.Wang,Knowing that,(-ing,现在分词使用方法,)our library is going to buy books,Id like to give you some suggestions.（,写作意图）,What we need most,(,主语从句,)are popular science books.Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way.They help us understand science subjects better and,arouse our curiosity about,scientific discoveries.,第14页,In addition to,reading for knowledge,we read for fun and inspiration.That is(,表语从句,)why I recommend another category of books,：,literary books.Classic works,written by masters,(-ed,过去分词使用方法,),present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.Not only do they(,部分倒装）,offer us joy and excitement,but also encourage us to think critically.,Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.,Yours sincerely,Li Yue,第15页,