作文专项训练-导学案.docx

作文专项训练
* 教师寄语：Never do things by halves. 做事不要半途而废。
【学习目标】：
Enable the students to compose a composition with the help of given information.
【学习重点】：
1. Train the students` writing skills.
2.How to train the student`s writing ability
【体验学习】：
1、中考英语作文中8个常见话题
2、中考英语书面表达评分标准
3、写作技巧探讨
开头：好的开头就成功了一半
1. 仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句
2. 开头万能句型：
1) ....plays an important part in the...
2) As we all know, ... becomes more and more....
3) As everybody knows, ...is one of the most...in ....
4) Many people say that.... But I don’t think so.
5) I will never forget the ....
结尾：结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应
1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。
2. 结尾经典词组、句型：
At last/ Finally ... 最后
In a word, ... 总而言之
In short, ... 简言之
We hope that··· 我们希望
Let’s try our best to ....
I believe if we can..., ... will be ....
What a ...! / How...!
号召性句子：Let’s …
Do it now ! / Don’t do it again!
As students, we should start from ourselves.
Don’t wait. Join us now!
Start to join us now!
Don’t put it off! Become a volunteer today!
How amazing! I can’t wait!
Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!
Don’t hesitate(犹豫). It will be great fun!
正文：语言简洁，层次分明
1、长句短句交叉使用最好。
2、基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用。
3、把握要点，层次清晰。
4、注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and ,so ,or, but, become等等。
【课堂导学】：
学习任务一、用适当的连词连接文段
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more ，not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or
3.表示转折: but,however,although/though,after all,anyway
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end
9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short
学习任务二、作文写作技巧——五步法，一起来写作
1、（search）审清题目，明确要求，确定格式
2、（list）编写提纲，列出重点词组、短语或句型
3、（add）扩展成句，加开头与结尾，适当扩句
4、（connect）连句成篇，运用适当的连词、过渡词语
5、（check）美：认真检查，修改错误
学习任务三、合作探讨
1、试翻译，选出更加优美的句子
2、赏析例文（列要点，找关联词、好词和好句）
假如你是班长，班主任让你明天早上在班上讲以下有关的班级管理制度，请按以下要求写一篇发言稿。
要点：1、上学要穿校服，服装要整洁；
2、不迟到，不早退；
3、轮流打扫教室，保持教室清洁；
4、课前要有准备。
要求：1、词数：不少于80词；
2、课适当增加细节，使短文更连贯。
参考词汇：校服school uniform ,轮流做……take turns to do, 为……准备……get …ready for
Good morning,class.!
Now I will tell you our class rules.First, we must wear school uniforms at school.Our clothes should be clean and tidy. Second, we are not allowed to be late for class or leave school before it is over. Third,it's our duty to keep our classroom clean.So from today on,we will take turns to clean the classroom every day.Finally,in order to have good results,it's necessary for us to get things ready for a class before it starts.All the rules are necessary for everyone if you want to stay in a good class and learn something here.Let's work together to make our class a good one .
Thank you !

【自主检测】：
亲爱的同学们，三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，你们即将离开熟悉的母校和三年来朝夕相处并给予你们无尽关爱和帮助的老师们。请根据下面表格的内容，谈谈你熟悉的英语老师。
My English Teacher
Name
Ms.Li
Age
35
Looks
tall, beautiful, long curly hair
Hobbies
reading, singing, dancing, playing sports
Character（性格）
patient, friendly, warm-hearted
My comment（评价）
a good teacher, a friend, a mother
要求：1、文中不能出现真实学校和老师真实姓名。
2、语言要通顺，表达要正确。
3、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。
4、词数不少于60个英语单词。
5、文章开头已给出，不计入词数。
I have met many excellent teachers in junior school. One of them is my English teacher. Her name is Ms. Li. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________