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Unit 11 How was your school trip?
写作课 第六课时 Section B (3a-selfcheck)
Teaching and Learning Goals
一、语言知识:
1.复习掌握本单元的重点词汇和短语。
2.复习掌握本单元的重点句型:
How was your school trip? It was great.
Did you go to the zoo? No, I didn’t. I wnet to a farm.
Did you see any cows? Yes, I saw quite a lot.
Were the strawberries good? Yes,they were./ No,they weren’t.
二、语言功能:
能模仿3a,用日记的形式描述自己的上一次学校旅行。
三、学习策略
1.能根据标题和插图预测短文的主要内容。
2.了解时间顺序是讲述故事的主线。
3. 模仿范文写日记。
四、情感态度
合理安排时间。
(设计意图:目标引领,表述了本节课的知识、能力和情感目标。)
Step1 Revision
1. Write the past forms of the following words:
am/is are do have/has go
see take buy make study
sit tell get look can
sing fly run say visit
Anwers:
was were did had went
saw took bought made studied
sat told got looked could
sang flew ran said visited
2. Preview:translate the following phrases into English.
1)参观动物园 2)乘公共汽车去那里
3)拍一些照片 4) 买一些礼物
5)我和我的同班同学也去了礼品店,并买了一些礼品。
6)我没有买任何东西,因为它们太昂贵了。
Answers:
1.visit the zoo 2.get there by bus 3.take some photos 4.buy some gift
5.My classmates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts.
6.I didn’t buy anything because they were very expensive.
Then check the answers together.
4. Pair work:1. Look at the following pictures and ask and answer in pairs.
A: What did you do last weekend?
B: I … .
Ask some pairs to make conversastions in front of class
5. Self Check 2
Ask the students to look at the pictures carefully, then fill in the blanks and ask some pairs to act it out.
(设计意图:通过本环节复习了本单元的重点词组、句型和话题,为后面写作奠定了基础)
Step2 While-writing
I.3a Look at the pictures and complete the passage.
1. Let the students fill in the blanks and then check.
2. Ask students to answer the following questions:
l How to write a diary?
1.write in a timeline.
2.Use the past tense.
3.write about the feelings.
4. the topic sentence.
l How to describe your last school trip?
It was really+adj.
l What is the topic sentence of the passage?
Yesterday my school visited the zoo
l What is the detail sentence?
We went there by bus. At the zoo, I saw a lot of __________ and I took some photos. My classmates and I also went to the __________ and bought some ___________.
3. Retell the passage according to the pictures.
June 23rd
Yesterday my school __________ the zoo. It was really __________. We __________there by bus. At the zoo, I __________a lot of animals and I __________ some photos. My classmates and I also __________ to the gift shop, and __________ some gifts. It was a great day.
Answers:
visited ,intresting ,went , saw , took ,went ,bought
II. Group work
Get the students to work in groups and complete Linda’s diary. And then check the answers.
(设计意图:通过范文3a,3b 的学习帮助学生建构写作的支架,为3c的写作奠定了基础,降低了难度。)
III. 3c Write a diary about your own school trip.
1.Let’s discuss : How to write this diary?
(The students works with the teacher together to find the answer)
1) write in a timeline.
2) Use the past tense.
3) write about the feelings.
4) the topic sentence.
2.Get students to write, pay attention to the key points while writing. Ask a student to write on the blackboard.
May 1first
My school went to Guishan.The trip was really great.On the top of Guishan,I saw lots of trees and I took some photos.We also went to the gift shop,and bought somegifts.I was a great day.
3.Check with the students according to the following checklist:
Checklist:
1. Did he / she write in a timeline?
2. Did he / she use the past tense?
3. Did he / she use the past forms of the verbs correctly?
4. Did he / she write about his / her feelings?
5. Is there a topic sentence?
6. Are there any spelling mistakes?
7. Is his / her handwriting good?
4. Get the students to check each other according to the checklist.
5. Correct the writing.
Step3.Writing Practice:
3. 制定评价量规:
Did she / he write in a timeline?
Did she / he use the past tense?
Did she / he use the past forms of the verbs correctly?
Did she / he write about his / her feelings?
Is there a topic sentence?
Are there any spelling mistakes?
Is his/ her handwriting good?
4. Get the students to write by themselves, ask two students to write on the blackboard.
Step4 Post-writing
1. Teacher-student Check
Check the writing on the blackboard with the students with the following table.
Did she / he write in a timeline?
Did she / he use the past tense?
Did she / he use the past forms of the verbs correctly?
Did she / he write about his / her feelings?
Is there a topic sentence?
Are there any spelling mistakes?
Is his/ her handwriting good?
2. Student-student Check
1. Check the writing each other with the table.
2. Ask some students to read the writings.
( 写作意图:通过范文制定了评价量规通过师生评价,生生互评对学生的写作进行评价。评价量规的制定使得写作评价有章可循。)
Homework:
Look at the pictures below. What happened yesterday? Then write a diary.
提示词:couldn’t fish
found the way to fish
fish the fish
亮点
1.本节课全面复习了本单元的重点单词、短语、句型以及话题,为写作活动的有效开展做好了铺垫。
2. 对于self check 部分做了调整到复习之后进行练习更合理。
3. 有效地指导学生写作,并制定评价量规进了全面的评价。
使用建议:
1. 采用分组教学。
2. 写作对于学生来说较难,鼓励他们大胆写。
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