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张庆科
Dear Editor,
Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose parents are working in urban areas away from homes. The majority of them are under 14. They are lack of love and weaker than those who enjoy full family care. Therefore, in my opinion, there is no doubt that we should pay more attention and care to the left-behind children.
As we all know, children are the hope and future of the people. But according to the survey, they are in need of love and care, and they are behind in physical and psychological health and learning abilities. Not only could (Neither can) these children benefit from cares in mental areas, but also(nor can) they grow more strong and healthy physically∧ (with their parents being away). And caring them is a good experience to all of them (to teach us devoting and giving)可省略, which will have a great influence on all their life.
Here are some practical tips. First, volunteers can be organized to go to these children’s homes and play with them. Second, we can regularly take them to their parents to make them unite. Third, improving their living conditions is necessary. Last but not the least, their parents should go home as frequently as possible as well as other family members.
Best wishes to you!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
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曹梦菲
Dear Editor,
Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose parents are working in urban areas away from homes. They are lack of family care. So I think people and government should give them more concern, in order that they can grow up happily.
As is reported in China Daily, over 69percent of them are under 14. They are weaker than children of the same age who enjoy full family care. And they are also behind in physical and psychological health and learning abilities. ∧But they are the future of their parents and the nation. And their physical build-up, mental development and learning skills in this period will have great influence on all their life) So they need the social care and opportunities to develop healthily. And our nation is a big family. We are all families, so it is responsible for us to care about these children.
In my opinion, first, government should set up new policy to help them go to school and live better. Second, good psychologists can talk with them and solve their psychological problems. Third, people should give them more care and love by playing with them and helping them.
If everyone can give their care to these children, they will be happy.
Best wishes to you!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
编者 雷孝民
Dear Editor,
Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose parents are working in urban areas away from homes. It comes as a great surprise that the number has totaled up to 58 million and the majority are under14. They are lack of love and weaker than those who enjoy full family care. They are also behind in physical and psychological health and learning abilities. I am much worried about them and their situation.
As we all know, teenagers are the future of not only their parents but also the nation. And the early years of their life play an important role not just in building a good body, forming a good personality, but also the ability of acquiring knowledge. However all these can not be acquired without parents’ enough company and care. So teenagers need parents’ particular care. Otherwise, lack of care, nutrition and family love, will do great harm to all their life.
How to solve their problems? In my opinion, the logical governments should set up more public libraries and provide more and easier education opportunities for them. Social Groups should organize more hand-in-hand activities to help these children develop well both physically and mentally. But the best way I suppose is to urge the government to take effective measures to develop the rural areas thus creating more job opportunities for their parents in their hometown so that fewer children have to live without parents around.
Best wishes to you!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
高三毕业告别演说词----雷孝民改编
My teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears。
To make the journey safe and fruitful, our mother school has provided us with a beautiful and comfortable environment to study and live in, and she has also tried her best offer us all the necessary and most advanced learning facilities. Our great teachers have contributed all their time, energy, love and the whole heart. Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us。
It’ll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. But it is not the end. It just means that we’re going to begin a new journey。
Finally, Here at this moment, on behalf of all the graduates present here, please allow me to express our sincere wishes for our mother school and the respectable teachers.
That’s all
Thank you!
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