英语四级考试作文冲刺点拨.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,英语四级考试作文,冲刺点拨,写作的,“,七项基本原则,”,：,一、长 短 句原则,写一个短小精辟的句子，可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题,As a creature,I eat;as a man,I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind,they are in a way quite similar.,如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！,强烈建议：,在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。,二、主 题 句原则,国有其君，家有其主，一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！,特别提示：隐藏主题句可是要冒险的！,To begin with,you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam,（主题句）,.Without sufficient preparation,you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.,三、一 二 三原则,考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的,“,标签,”,来判定你的文章是,否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的,词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。,1,）,first,second,third,last,（不推荐，原因：俗）,2,）,firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally,（不推荐，原因：俗）,3,）,the first,the second,the third,the last,（不推荐,原因：俗）,4,）,in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly,（不推荐，原因：俗）,5,）,to begin with,then,furthermore,finally,（强烈推荐）,6,）,to start with,next,in addition,finally,（强烈推荐）,7,）,first and foremost,besides,last but not least,（强烈推荐）,8,）,most important of all,moreover,finally,9,）,on the one hand,on the other hand,（适用于两点的情况）,10,）,for one thing,for another thing,（适用于两点的情况）,建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！,四、短语优先原则,写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点,精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：,I cannot bear it.,可以用短语表达：,I cannot put up with it.,I want it.,可以用短语表达：,I am looking forward to it.,这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。,五、多实少虚原则,原因很简单，比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说,nice,这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如,generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm,hearted,之类的形象词。再比如：,走出房间，,general,的词是：,walk out of the room,但是小偷走出房间应该说：小姐走出房间应该说：,小孩走出房间应该说：,老人走出房间应该说：,所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！,slip out of the room,sail out of the room,dance out of the room,stagger out of the room,六、多变句式原则,1,）加法（串联）,都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，,可以在任何句子之间加,and,但最好是前后的句子有先后关系或者并列关系。,比如说：,I enjoy music,and,he is fond of playing guitar.,如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：,Not only,the fur coat is soft,but,it is also warm.,其它的短语可以用：,besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover,2,）转折（拐弯抹角）,The car was quite old,yet,it was in excellent condition.,The coat was thin,but,it was warm.,更多的短语：,despite that,still,notwithstanding,however,nevertheless,in spite of,despite,3,）因果（,so,so,so,）,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！,The snow began to fall,so,we went home.,更多短语：,then,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,as a result,for this reason,so that,4,）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）,文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。举例：,This is,what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not,is not sure.,同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：,when to go,why he goes away,5,）附加,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。,The man,whom you met yesterday,is a friend of mine.I don,t enjoy that book,you are reading,.Mr Zhang,our oral English teacher,is easy,going.,其实很简单，,同位语,要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；,定语从句,借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，,但是,whom or that,关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前,6,）排比（排山倒海句）,文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！,Whether your tastes are,modern or traditional,sophisticated or simple,there is plenty in London for you.,Nowadays,energy can be obtained through various sources such as,oil,coal,natural gas,solar heat,the wind and ocean tides,.,We have got,to,study hard,to,enlarge our scope of knowledge,to,realize our potentials and,to,pay for our life.,（气势恢宏）,要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！,七、挑战极限原则,既然是挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！,原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。,比如：,The weather being fine,a large number of people went to climb the western hills.Africa is the second largest continent,its size being about three times that of China.,如果你可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！,文章主体段落三大杀手锏：,一、举实例,思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！,In order to attract more customers,advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads,such as,sound,light,colours,cartoon films and human performance.,For instance,to advertise a certain food,advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food.,更多句型：,to take,as an example,one example is,another example is,for example,二、做比较,方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；,只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（,through comparison,）和不同点（,through contrast,）。下面是一些短语：,相似的比较：,in comparison,likewise,similarly,in the same manner,相反的比较：,on the other hand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,in contrast,on the contrary,compared with,三、换言之,没话说了,可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字,I love you!,I am enthusiastic about you.,That is to say,I love you.I am wild about you.,In other words,I have fallen in love with you.,或者上面我们举过的例子：,I cannot bear it.,可以用短语表达：,I cannot put up with it.,因此可以这样说：,I cannot bear it.,That is to say,I cannot put up with it,or,I am fed up with it.,更多短语：,in more difficult language,in simpler words,put it more simply,图表作文的写作,有些学生习惯于文字题，看到图表作文时就有些发蒙。其实图表作文是文章中常见的一种辅助性表达形式，它具有醒目和简练的特点。图表作文要求作者先描述图表，再阐明观点。在描述图表时，应该先弄清楚数据彼此之间的关系，并根据图表中所给出的数据进行横向或纵向比较、分析，如：最大,最小；最多,最少；最快,最慢；最好,最差等，然后再用图表的内容来阐明道理，最后得出结论。在写作中可以采用各种不同的方法，如：,比较和对照、因果关系,等。,图表作文常用句型,As is shown/can be seen/stated in/from the table/chart.,Compared with B,A is.,.There was a rise/fall of.between/during the period of.,A is three times as much as/faster,than/slower than B,From the analyses/date/discussion above,we can see/come to a conclusion/draw a conclusion/make a conclusion that.,写作万能公式,开头万能公式：,1,开头万能公式一：名人名言,经典句型：,As a saying goes,“,Money makes the mare go,”,but there are something that can,t be bought with money such as time and true love.,A proverb says,“,you are only young once.,”,（适用于已记住的名言）,It goes without saying that,we cannot be young forever.,（适用于自编名言）,更多经典句型：,as everyone knows,no one can deny that,2,开头万能公式二：数字统计,原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。,According to a recent survey,about 78.9,of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.,更多句型：,A recent statistics shows that,结尾万能公式：,1,结尾万能公式一：如此结论,Obviously,（此为过渡短语）,we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.,更多过渡短语：,to sum up,in conclusion,in brief,on account of this,thus,更多句型：,thus,it can be concluded that,therefore,we can find that,2,结尾万能公式二：如此建议,Obviously,it is high time that,we,took,some measures to solve the problem.,这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？,更多句型：,Accordingly,I recommend that,some measures,be taken,.Consequently,to solve the problem,some measures should be taken.,四级高分作文标志,1.120-150,字，字迹清晰，卷面整洁；,2.,是否长短句交叉；,3.,用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；,4.,关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词。,写好一篇作文的注意事项：,1.,适当用被动代替主动。,这样能更客观的反映事实，句子开头不要总是用,we/I(,比如写结尾时不用,we should pay attention to,而用,Attention should be paid to.),举个经典结尾,2004,年六月六级作文的最后一段：,It is,therefore,high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.Thus,，,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.,2.,善于使用插入语。,比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。,如,however/therefore/for example/I believe,做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。,比如说：,Other individuals,however,take the attitude that,3.,一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。,(,考试中一般不要出现,good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion,等等,),比如上面例子中，,applicable,代替,proper;,approaches,代替,ways;,implement,代替,carry out;,sharpen ones competitive edge,代替,enhance ones competitiveness(,提高某物竞争力,),下面举一篇优秀作文,(14,分,),的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。,Computer and I,第一段：,I never forget the,exceedingly,thrilling,day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present,which,exerted a tremendous fascination on me,so that I indulged myself in,googling,an army of,useful information I had expected,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless,feeling that the whole world belonged to me.,exceedingly,替换,very,thrilling,替换,exciting,sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb,替换,sb.be interested in sth.,google,替换,search,an army of,替换,a lot of,第二段：,The dawn of the new century witnessed,the,increasing popularity,of computers.,Coincident with,the,advancement,of science and technology,computers,pouring into,the,current,society as a fashion are,appealing to,growing individuals,.,It is no exaggeration to say that,we have been submerged by them,in large measure!,The dawn of the new century witnessed,是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；,Increasing popularity,替换,more and more popular,Coincident with,非常地道的词汇，表达,与,一致,的意思，替换,With,Advancement,替换,development,Pour into(flood into/swarm into),替换,enter into,Current(currently),替换,now,Appeal to sb.,替换,sb.be interested in sth.,Growing individuals,替换,more and more people,It is no exaggeration to say,经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的,第三段：,To begin with,we can,freely,search desired information at any moment.Little by little,our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.,Additionally,we can get huge recreations online by chatting,playing games,or,delivering,email.,We can,freely,search,用了插入语的写作手法,our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.,用了非常精彩的被动,Additionally,替换,In addition/Besides,Deliver,替换,send,第四段：,There is no denying that,however,computers can function in the disservice of human beings,in a way,especially the growing violence,porn pictures,AV-films,emerging,on the screen,which leads quiet a few,net citizens,to copying.,There is no denying that,however,computers can function in the disservice of human beings.,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先,There is no denying that,这个句型，还有,however,作为插入语，,function in the disservice of,替换,do harm to,Emerging,代替,appearing(fading,代替,disappearing),Net citizen,网民，属于精彩用词,第五段：,As a classic proverb goes that,no garden has no weeds,.Computers,do,play a,positive,role in the development of people lives,despite,a slice of,unfavorable,impacts,.,We should,therefore,take advantage of,the,fruits,and avoid the opposite,facet,.,No garden has no weeds,替换,Every coin has two sides,Computers do play,，,do,强调,Positive,替换,important/good,A slice of,替换,a part of,Unfavorable,替换,bad,Impacts,替换,effects/influences,We should,therefore,take advantage of,使用插入语,Fruits(,而且,fruits,用的非常形象，,merits/virtues),替换,advantage(defects,替换,disadvantage),Facet,替换,aspect,30,个最经典的替换词,1.individuals,characters,folks,代替,(people,persons),2.positive,favorable,rosy(,美好的,),，,promising(,有希望的,),，,perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,代替,good,3.dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(,有害的,),代替,bad,。如果,bad,做表语，可以有,be less impressive,代替,eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games,enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation,as a result,they find their academic records are less impressive.,4.(an army of,an ocean of,a sea of,a multitude of,many,.,if not most),代替,many.,注：,用,many,if not most,一定要小心，,many,后一定要有词。,eg.Many individuals,if not most,harbor the idea that,.,同理用,most,if not all,代替,most.,5.a slice of,quiet a few,several,代替,some,6.harbor the idea that,take the attitude that,hold the view that,it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that),替,think(,因为是书面语，所以要加,that),7.affair,business,matter,代替,thing,8.shared,代,common,9.reap huge fruits,代替,get much benefit,10.for my part,from my own perspective,代替,in my opinion,11.Increasing(ly),growing,代替,more and more,。,注意,没有,growingly,这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用,increasing/growing,。修饰形容词，副词用,increasingly,。,eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.,12.little if anything,，或,little or nothing,代替,hardly,13.beneficial rewarding,代替,helpful be beneficial of,14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替,customer,15.exceedingly,extremely,代替,very,16.hardly unnecessary,hardly inevitable.,代替,necessary,inevitable,17.sth appeals to sb,sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb,代替,sb take interest in,18.capture ones attention,代替,attract ones attention.,19.facet,dimension,sphere,代,aspect,20.be indicative of,be suggestive of,be fearful of,代,indicate,suggest,fear,21.give rise to,lead to,result in,trigger,代替,cause.,22.There are several reasons behind sth,代替,.reasons for sth,23.Desire,代替,want.,24.pour attention into,代替,pay attention to,25.bear in mind that,代替,remember,26.enjoy,possess,代替,have,(,注意,process,是过程的意思,),27.Interaction,代替,communication,28.frown on sth,代替,be against,disagree with sth,29.to name only a few,as an example,代替,for example,30.next to/virtually impossible,代替,nearly impossible,GOOD LUCK,！,THE END,