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Jobs for Graduates
提纲： 
1. 工作难找（现象）
2. 原因
3. 解决方法

Nowadays there is an increasing concern over the issue of the jobs for graduates. Students find it hard to look for a work. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that it is not easy to seek good positions for the graduates.

Why should this phenomenon take place? There are generally three factors accounting for it.First of all, there are not enough jobs for so many graduates, obviously.（副词法） At the second place, the students are good at their specialized subjects, but lack of working experience.（减法句） Last but not least, the needs of company such as English standard, computer skills, etc. can’t be met by the students. （被动法）

Think into account all the analyses above, we may confidently come to the conclusion that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation. The government should encourage business startups. This should create more position for the young man. On the other hand, Universities should provide opportunities for students to improve their English standard and computer skills. In addition, enterprises should offer more Job Internship for the graduates. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

作文顺序： 
1. 审题，阅读提纲
2. 列出套用万能句/模板
3. 列出高频词换词表、逻辑词
4. 行文（保证正确率原则，每段首句体现提纲主旨，使用齐头式行文）
5. 复查（谓语及名词单复数、时态一致性）

换词： 
工作：job, work, position, post
大学生：graduates, students, young man
难：difficult, not easy, hard
找：find, seek, look for

套用万能句： 
Nowadays there is an increasing concern of the jobs for graduates.
Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that it is not easy to seek good positions for the graduates.
Why should this phenomenon take place? There are generally three factors accounting for it.
Think into account all the analyses above, we may confidently come to the conclusion that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation.
I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.（80 words）

逻辑词： 
First of all
At the second place
Last but not least
On the other hand
In addition

构句法： 
1. 加法句（,and）
2. 减法句（but however）
3. 副词法（obviously…）
4. 被动法
5. 换而言之（In other words）