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最专业的学习资料下载网站最专业的学习资料下载网站六级考试改错冲刺模拟题I这篇改错原文选自The Economist，八百字左右，压缩到了200多字，设计的题目完全按照考点，难度高于真题。请同学们踊跃讨论！希望对大家有帮助！The European Union had approved a number of genetically modified crops until late 1998. But growing public concern over its supposed environmental and health risks led several1. EU countries to demand a moratorium (暂时禁止) on imports of any new GM produce. By late 1999 there were enough such country to block any new approvals of GM produce.2. Last year, America filed a complaint at the WTO about themoratorium, arguing that it was an illegal trade barrier because there is no scientific base for it.3. As more studies have been completed on the effects of GM crops, the greens case for them has weakened.4. Much evidence has emerged of health risks from eating5. them. And, overall, the studies have shown that the environmental effects on modified crops are not always6. as serious as the greens claim. Nevertheless, environmentalists continue to find fault of such studies and argue that7. they are inconclusive.While Americans seem happy enough to consume food made from GM crops, opinion polls continue to show that European consumers dislike the idea. Europeans seem be taking the attitude8. which , since there remains the slightest possibility of adverse9. consequences and since it is clear how they, as consumers, benefit10. from GM crops, they would rather not run the risk. 答案：1. its改为their; 2. country改为countries; 3. base 改为basis; 4. for 改为 against; 5. much 改为little; 6. on 改为of; 7. of 改with; 8. seem后面加to; 9. which 改为that; 10. clear 改为unclear或者前面加not.解析：1. 本题考查了大家识别代词所指的能力，its 指代genetically modified crops(为复数), 所以应该改成their；2. such country是指前面要求暂停进口转基因农产品的某些欧盟国家, 所以应该改成复数；3. 此处意为： 因为没有科学根据支持暂停(进口), it 指the moratorium； base 基础, 基地, 根据地；basis (for) 基础, 基本, 根据; 科学根据只能说scientific basis, 有的同学把base 后面的for 改为 on , 应该是受到了base on 这个短语的影响； 4. the greens = the environmentalists 环保主义者。 Case 论点，论据， case for 后面的them指GM crops, case for sth. 支持某物的论点，case against sth. 反对某物的论点(削弱了)；5. 逻辑错误，本句正常语序为Much evidence of health risks from eating them has emerged. 根据And, overall, 或后的语意，此行应该把much 改为little, 说明没有什么迹象、根据表明吃GM crops对健康有什么危险；6. 本句的意思为：研究表明modified crops对环境造成的后果并没有环保主义者所声称的那样严重。 Environmental effects of modified crops (modified crops对环境造成的后果); 很多同学看到effects 以为后面一定跟on 就错了；7. find fault with 批评，找茬；8. seem to be taking固定结构，be 不能少；9. taking the attitude that .后为同位语从句，不能用which；10. 注意since 前面的and 表示前后语意一致。 因为欧洲人觉得仍然存在使用GM food的不利后果，并且他们作为消费者从GM food中会如何获得好处也不清楚，所以他们不愿意冒风险。IIAfter months of speculation about what A would do with its mysterious search-engine company, A9, Web surfers finally got their first taste on Apr. 14. Yet despite of some intriguing new features not yet found1. on leading sites such as Google and Yahoo! , the site () - still in test mode - rises as many questions2. as it answers. The biggest question remains is whether Amazon,3. through A9, would clash into Google more directly.4. Google itself is testing a search engine for products called Froogle thats starting to appeal Web shoppers.5. At the same time, Amazon clearly isnt looking to limit A9s horizons. How directly A9 eventually goes up against the reigned6. search champion, it faced lots of challenges. For one,7. it may run into some of the same privacy issues that recently have plagued Google. A9s privacy policy points out that information provided through entering search term8. or by signing into ones Amazon account could supply the company with information that could personally identify the searcher. Those may be somewhat less intrusive(打扰的，冒犯的) than9. Googles upcoming Gmail free e-mail offering, which could search the contents of messages to pitch personalized ads. But comments posted on some sites already indicate some people are uncomfortable with Googles potential threats to privacy.10. 答案：1.of去掉，despite sth；2. rises 改raise (提出，引起问题) ；3. question后加that；4. into 改with , clash with 与冲突；5. appeal 后面加to, appeal to 吸引；6. reigned 改reigning；此处是指占搜索引擎统治地位的Google, 不能用被动；7. faced 改 faces；8. term 改 terms 条款；9. Those 改That , 这里that指上句话的意思，不用复数指代；10. Google改为A9, 逻辑上的错误。IIIAlmost every new innovation goes through three phases. When initially introducing into the market, the process 1. of adoption is slow. The early models are expensive and hard to use, and perhaps even unsafe. The economic impact is relatively great. 2. The second phase is the explosive one, where the innovation was rapidly adopted by a large number of people. It gets 3. cheaper and easier to use and becomes something familiar. And then in the third stage, diffusion of the innovation slows down again, as if it permeates out across the economy. 4. During the explosive phase, whole new industries spring up to produce the new product or innovation, and to service it. For example, during the 1920s, there was dramatic 5. acceleration in auto production, from 1.9 million in 1920 to 4.5 million in 1929. This boom was accompanied with all 6. sorts of other essential activities necessary for an auto-based nation: Roads had to been built for the cars to 7. run on; refineries and oil wells, to provide the gasoline; and garages, to repair it. 8. Historically, the same pattern is repeated again and again with innovations. The construction of the electrical system requested an enormous early investment in generation and 9. distribution capacity. The introduction of the radio was followed by a buying spree (无节制的狂热行为) by Americans what quickly brought radios into almost half of all households 10. by 1930, up from nearly none in 1924. 答案： 1. introducing改为 introduced；2. great 改为 small；3. was改为is； 4. as 后面的 if 去掉；5. was 后面加a；6. with改为by； 7. been改为be； 8. it改为them； 9. requested改为required； 10. what改为that。 作者：丁晓钟 最专业的学习资料下载网站最新下载(NewD) 中国最大、最专业的学习资料下载站 转载请保留本信息