四级作文模版.doc

第1段：引语引用+简单评论段
　　1文章第一句话：直接引用引语
　　1.1.第一句的第一种写法： 名人名言
　　○1" ."Sb. once said.
　　○2 Sb. once said，” 。“
　　○3 I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb. , who once said, " 。"
　　我想你应该熟悉sb.说过的一句话，他曾经说过：" 。"
　　1.2.第一句的第二种写法： 俗语/常言/习语/成语/谚语
　　○1 As the commonly-heard saying/idiom/proverb goes，" 。"
　　○2 I assume that you are familiar with saying, which is commonly-heard , " 。"
　　我想你应该熟悉一句耳熟能详的俗语/常言习语/谚语，是这么说的：" 。"
　　2文章第二句话：简化引语+表层评论
　　2.1用自己的语言说明、解释抽象和凝练的引语，保持原意的同时，使之简洁易懂；
　　本句根据题目引语内容，自由发挥
　　2.2对引语的表层含义进行评论：就引语的"事"说"事"，不要上升到人生哲理高度
　　It is obvious that …
　　文章第二句话写法真题举例：
　　(1.2.1)Although four-hour seems to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down the tree more smoothly and less laboriously in the rest two hours. (1.2.2) It is obvious that a full preparation can help people enhance the efficiency of trees-chopping. [2011-12月CET6]
　　(1.2.1)Quitting smoking is so easy as long as you keep away from cigarettes. However, many people can hardly resist the temptation of cigarette and then give up their attempt to quit smoking. (1.2.2) It is obvious that no one can quit smoking with ease without strong will and determination. [2011-12月CET4]
第2段：意义阐述段
　　3. 文章第三句话：由表及里，提炼挖掘引语的深层含义
　　3.1 The saying/proverb/ sb's remark aims at informing us of the significance of A.
　　3.2 Simple as the sentence may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of A.
　　4. 文章第四句话： 强调A的重要性
　　4.1 There is no denying that we can not emphasize the importance of A too much.
　　4.2 why does A. play an indispensable role in our life/ work/ pursuit of success ？
　　5.文章第五句话：论述A的重要性
　　5.1 A will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. The more Communicative/Modest/ Honest /Cooperative/ Inclusive we are, the more likely we are to build harmonious relationships and master more resources which is advantageous to their success.
　　两个衍生体：action & plan
　　Action will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.
　　Making plan will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. The more detailed plan we make , the more likely we are to make full use of time, enhance our work efficiency make full preparation for unexpected cases/
　　5.2 A is crucial for every individual. With its seemingly magic power, A can not only better accelerate individuals' development, but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to change the world. [The consciousness of innovation/ Confidence/ Dream / Objective / Diligence]
　　5.3 Those who possess A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and approach challenges. Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing to others hope, passion and surprise, and, thus winning others' favor and trust. [A strong will/ Persistence/ Perseverance/Optimism /Ppassion/ Enthusiasm/ Hope / Courage / Patience ]
　　6. 文章第六句话：举例论述A的重要性
　　6.1 Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of A. However, I can think of no better illustration than the following one:
　　6.2 To further demonstrate the importance of A, I would like to take sb. as a case in point.
　　举例公式：
　　Sb. ,插入语, how could he/she do sth. without A ?
　第三段：结合实际
　　7. 文章第七句话：铭记A的重要性
　　7.1 In view of the importance of A, we should always keep firmly/bear in mind that A will exert a profound influence on our life/work/health/personality.
　　7.2 From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of A.
　　8. 文章第八句话：采取具体行动，践行A的重要精神
　　8.1 Accordingly，we should foster the consciousness of A by doing sth.
　　Develop the habit of A in our work/daily life.
　　8.2 在日常生活/工作中，运用A来解决问题
　　Hence, what we must do is to to carry out a full investigation, set up a proper goal and draw up a detailed plan before we take actions. [2011-12月CET6] 　　　　Hence, when confronted with difficulties and setbacks, we need to grit our teeth and stick to the belief/faith that where there is a will, there is a way. [2011-12月CET4]
　　9. 文章第九句话： 名人名言，呼应主题
　　" ."Sb. also once said.
　　常用名言警句：
　　1. Living without an aim is like sailing without an aim. Alexander Dumas (Davy de La Pailleterie, French Writer) 生活没有目标就像航海没有指南针. (法国作家大仲马. A.)
　　2. Genius only means hard-working all one's life. ( Mendeleyer, Russian Chemist) 天才只意味着终身不懈的努力. (俄国化学家门捷列耶夫)
　　3. patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet. (Jean Jacques Rousseau , French thinker) 忍耐是痛苦的,但它的果实是甜蜜的. (法国思想家卢梭. J. J.)
　　4. I am a slow walker, but I never walk backwards. (Abraham Lincoln , American president) 我走得慢，但我从不后退(美国总统林肯. A.)
　　5. Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily. (Friedrich Schiller, German Dramatist and poet). 只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人, 才能够轻而易举地完成困难的事. (德国剧作家, 诗人席勒. F.)
　　6. You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success. (Charles Chaplin , American actor ) 人你必须要对自己有信心，那是成功的秘诀(美国演员卓别林. C.)
　　7. Happiness lies not in the mere possession of money; it lies in the joy of achievement, in the thrill of creative effort. (Franklin Roosevelt , American president ) 成功不仅仅在于拥有钱，还在于成就带来的喜悦，和努力带来的兴奋(美国总统罗斯福. F.)
　　8. None of us is as smart as all of us. Winston Churchill 三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮~丘吉尔

Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....
　　随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。
　　As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.
　　然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
　　As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....
　　随着社会的发展，人们开始关注............
　　People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting
　　求职的过程中，人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。
　　As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.
　　关于是否值得___________的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。
　　In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.
　　在都市的发展中，我们往往会陷入困境。
　　Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....
　　最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________。
　　The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.
　　人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快，随之给我们带来了很多问题。
　　...... plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?"
　　_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题，这是无可厚非的。不过，问题是："我们该如何抉择?"
　　Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,
　　现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。
　　People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.
　　不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。
　　The controversial issue is often brought into public focus. People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.
　　这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。
　　When asked ..., some people think..... while some prefer...
　　说到______，有人认为________，而另一些人则认为__________。
　　Just as the saying goes: "so many people, so many minds". It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.
　　俗话说，""。不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。
　　To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.
　　对于这个问题，不同的人持不同的观点。
　　There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...
　　万事万物都有其两面性，所以，勿庸置疑，____________。
　　When it comes to ..., most people believe that ..., but other people regard ...as ....
　　提到_________问题，很多人认为_________，不过，一些人则认为______是____.
　　When faced with...., quite a few people claim that ...., but other people think as...
　　提到_________问题，仅少数人认为________，但另一些人则认为_________。
　　There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of .... There who criticize ...argue that ...., they believe that ...,but people who favor .., on the other hand, argue that...
　　目前，_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______，他们认为_______，不过，另一方面，赞同_______的人则认为_________。
　　Some people are of the opinion that..
　　有些人认为_____________。
　　Many people claim that...
　　很多人认为_____________。
　　A majority of 绝大多数
　　A large number of 很多人
　　Some people contend that ... has proved to bring many advantages (disadvantages)
　　有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处)。
　　Those who argue for ... say that ...economic development of the cities.
　　觉得_____的人认为，______ 城市的经济发展。
　　Some people advocate that ....
　　有些人在坚持认为_________。
　　They hold that ... 他们认为_________。
　　People, who advocate that ..., have their sound reasons (grounds)
　　坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据)。
　　Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.
　　那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖。
　　Those who strongly approve of ... have cogent reasons for it.
　　强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。
　　Many people would claim that...
　　有人会认为___________。
　　People who support ... give some or all of the following reasons.
　　那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因：________。
　　But others hold the view that ...但是，另外一些人则认为_______。
　　观点的用词：Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组：Take, have, come up with，set forth, put forward等。
　　But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that..,.
　　不过，另一方面，也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。
　　But people who are ..., on the other hand , maintain that...
　　不过，另一方面，________的人认为__________。
　　However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.
　　然而，很多人对此有不同的看法。
　　问题用词：Issue, phenomenon，后接介词, on, over等。
　　However, some others argue that... 然而，另一些人则认为_________。
　　However, there are also some others who contend that...
　　然而，也有人认为__________。
　　But other people set forth completely totally different argument concerning this case.
　　不过，对于此，另一些人则持完全不同的观点。
　　Some people examine this issue from another angle.
　　有的人用另一角度来看这一问题。
　　On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly ...
　　另一方面，也有很多反对的人，他们认为_____________。
　　According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer ... rather than...
　　根据我的个性以及兴趣，我选择_______而不会选择__________。
　　Personally, I side with the latter (former) opinion...
　　就我个人而言，我支持后者(前者)___________。
　　Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.
　　就我个人而言，我较同意前一种看法。
　　To my point of view 我认为
　　To my mind, the advantages far overweigh the drawbacks(disadvantages, shortcomings)
　　我认为，优点胜过缺点。
　　For my part, I stand on side of the latter opinion that..
　　就我而言，我较赞同后一种观点________________。
　　As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.
　　在我看来，我较同意后一种观点。
　　After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the latter view that...
　　经过深思熟虑，我较支持后一种看法，亦即________________________。
　　If asked to make a decision, I would prefer...
　　如果真的需要作出选择，我宁愿____________。
　　展现问题篇
　　问题的常用词：question, problem, issue
　　Recently, the issue of ...... has been brought into public focus.
　　近来，_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。
　　Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people’s attitude towards some traditional practice.
　　现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。
　　Recently the issue of whether or not ... has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.
　　近来，是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。
　　The issue whether it is good or not to .... has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.
　　______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。
　　At present, some people think ....while others claim ...Both sides have their merits.
　　目前，一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实，两种观点都其可取之处。
　　People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.
　　对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。
　　People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.
　　不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。
　　The controversial issue is often brought into public focus. People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.
　　这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。
　　When asked ..., some people think..... while some prefer...
　　说到______，有人认为________，而另一些人则认为__________。
　　Just as the saying goes: "so many people, so many minds". It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.
　　俗话说，""。不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。
　　To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.
　　对于这个问题，不同的人持不同的观点。
　　There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...
　　万事万物都有其两面性，所以，勿庸置疑，____________。
　　When it comes to ..., most people believe that ..., but other people regard ...as ....
　　提到_________问题，很多人认为_________，不过，一些人则认为______是____.
　　When faced with...., quite a few people claim that ...., but other people think as...
　　提到_________问题，仅少数人认为________，但另一些人则认为_________。
　　There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of .... There who criticize ...argue that ...., they believe that ...,but people who favor .., on the other hand, argue that...
　　目前，_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______，他们认为_______，不过，另一方面，赞同_______的人则认为_________。
　　Some people are of the opinion that..
　　有些人认为_____________。
　　Many people claim that...
　　很多人认为_____________。
　　A majority of 绝大多数
　　A large number of 很多人
　　Some people contend that ... has proved to bring many advantages (disadvantages)
　　有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处)。
　　Those who argue for ... say that ...economic development of the cities.
　　觉得_____的人认为，______ 城市的经济发展。
　　Some people advocate that ....
　　有些人在坚持认为_________。
　　They hold that ... 他们认为_________。
　　People, who advocate that ..., have their sound reasons (grounds)
　　坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据)。
　　Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.
　　那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖。
　　Those who strongly approve of ... have cogent reasons for it.
　　强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。
　　Many people would claim that...
　　有人会认为___________。
　　People who support ... give some or all of the following reasons.
　　那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因：________。
　　But others hold the view that ...但是，另外一些人则认为_______。
　　观点的用词：Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组：Take, have, come up with，set forth, put forward等。
　　But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that..,.
　　不过，另一方面，也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。
　　But people who are ..., on the other hand , maintain that...
　　不过，另一方面，________的人认为__________。
　　However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.
　　然而，很多人对此有不同的看法。
　　问题用词：Issue, phenomenon，后接介词, on, over等。
　　However, some others argue that... 然而，另一些人则认为_________。
　　However, there are also some others who contend that...
　　然而，也有人认为__________。
　　But other people set forth completely totally different argument concerning th