广东高考英语基础写作例题与分析.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,Pcractice for Five-Sentence Passge,语言有三种形态：,文字语言；表达意义,声音语言；表达感觉,体态语言。表达态度，即心态,注意下面的文字语言,-,叔叔亲了我妈妈也亲了我,在这个世界上男人没有了女人就害怕了,升华篇,第四阶段,一、人物简介,要点：,1.,张华性格开朗、乐观。（,open-minded,）,Zhang Hua is open-minded and optimistic.,2.,陈伟待人友善但有点害羞。,Chen Wei is friendly and a little shy.,3.,他们两个都喜欢体育运动、阅读和听音乐。,enjoy,Both of them enjoy sport,reading and listening to music.,4.,张华担心饮食不习惯。,(have trouble adjusting to),Zhang Hua worries about having trouble in being used to food there.,5.,陈伟担心与人沟通有困难。,(be concerned about),Chen Wei is worried about communicating with people.,6.,张华想多了解英国的历史文化。,(be looking forward to),Zhang Hua hopes to know more about the English history and culture.,7.,陈伟想多交朋友，提高英语水平。,(be eager to),Zhen Wei wants to make friends to improve his English.,Dear Mr.&Mrs.Smith,Thank you for your offer to host two of our students.The boys-names are Zhang Hua and Chen Wei.Here is a little bit about them.,Zhang Hua is an open-minded and optimistic boy,and,Chen Wei is very friendly,but,a little shy.Both boys love sport,especially basketball and football and they also enjoy reading and listening to music.,As its their first trip to the UK,they both feel a little anxious.Zhang Hua is worried that he may have trouble adjusting to British food,while,Chen Wei is more concerned about being able to clearly communicate with others.Zhang Hua is really looking forward to learning more about the British history and culture,while,Chen is eager to make some new friends and improve his English.,例二：,刘翔，作为前奥运会,110,米跨栏冠军，世界纪录保持者，因伤退赛留下遗憾，尽管如此，刘翔克服重重压力，重新复出，夺得,2010,年全运会冠军。请根据下面的介绍写一篇短文。,明星档案,姓名：刘翔 生日：,1983,年,7,月,13,日,出生地,：上海,项目,：,the mens 110-metre hurdles,辉煌战绩：,2004,年以,12,秒,91,的成绩夺得,110,米栏奥运会冠军，成为中国第一人。,2006,年，在洛桑国际田联超级大奖赛,(the Super Grand Prix meeting in Lausanne),中以,12,秒,88,的成绩打破世界纪录。,精神：拼搏,;,坚定的信念。,要点：,1.1983,年,7,月,13,日，刘翔出生于上海。,Liu Xiang was born in Shanghai on the 13,th,July,1983.,2.2004,年在雅典奥运会上以,12,秒,91,的成绩夺得,110,米栏冠军。（,win the gold medal,）,He won the mens 110-metre hurdles by the score of 12.91 seconds in the Athens 2004 Olympic Games.,3.,他成为奥运田径场上夺冠的第一位中国男运动员。（,the first/last to do sth.,）,He became the first Chinese athlete to win an Olympic track and field title.,4.2006,年，在洛桑国际田联超级大奖赛,(the Super Grand Prix meeting in Lausanne),中以,12,秒,88,打破世界纪录。,(set a world record of),In 2006,he set a world record of 12.88 seconds at the Super Grand Prix meeting in Lausanne,5.,刘翔克服重重压力，重新复出，夺得,2010,年全运会冠军。,(return,overcome the pressure and pain of),Overcoming the pressure and pain of being hurt,Liu Xiang returned and got the champion of the National Sports Meeting in 2010.,6.,是他的坚强意志帮他重新站了起来。,(It is that),It is his determined spirit that helps him stand up again.,7.,在我们周围有很多这样的人，刘翔为我们树立了一个学习的榜样。,(set a good example for us to follow),Around us,there are quite a few people like Liu Xiang who sets a good example for us to follow.,Liu Xiang,born on July 13,1983 in Shanghai,is a well-known athlete in track and field in China,and,won the mens 110 meters hurdle final,and,got gold medal in the Athens 2004 Olympic Games in August,2004,which,made him the first Chinese man to win an Olympic track and field title.,Besides,he set a world record of 12.88 seconds in the mens 110 meters hurdles at the Super Grand Prix meeting in Lausanne,Switzerland in 2006.,Overcoming the pressure and the pain of being hurt,Liu Xiang has returned as a king and got the champion of national,spo,r,ts,meeting in October,2010,which,is not easy.It is his determined spirit that helps him stand again.Around us,there are quite a few people with this intense determination and spirit,and,Liu Xiang sets a good example for us to follow.,二、地方介绍,实例展示,例一：假设你是刘风，你的英国朋友,Bob,即将到你所在的国际学校学习。应他的要求，请你写一封,e-mail,，介绍你校体育馆的基本情况。,【,写作内容,】,1,历史：,40,年的历史，,2006,年重建；,2,位置：教学大楼的左边，大操场的西边，面朝学校大门；,3,结构：占地面积,750,平方米，共三层。一楼有游泳池；二楼有排球、篮球、羽毛球、乒乓球场；三楼有报告厅；,4,特点：设备现代，环境优美；,5,开放时间：早上,6,：,30,到晚上,1000,；周末照常开放。,要点：,1.,我校体育馆有,40,年的历史，,2006,年重建。,(be rebuilt),Our school gymnasium,rebuilt in 2006,has a history of 40 years.,2.,位于教学大楼的左边，大操场的西边，面朝学校大门。,(be located on the left of;on its east lies),Facing the school gate,it is located on the left of the school claasroom building and on the west side of the playground.,3.,占地面积,750,平方米，共三层。,(be a three-storied building with),It has three stories and an area of 750 square meters.,4.,一楼有游泳池；二楼有排球、篮球、羽毛球、乒乓球场；三楼有报告厅。,(On the first floor is),There is a swimming pool on the first floor,several courts for volleyball,basketball,badminton and pingpong on the second floor,and a lecture hall on the third floor.,5.,开放时间：早上,6,：,30,到晚上,1000,；周末照常开放。,(the opening time is;work as usual),The opening time is from 6:30 am to 10:00 pm,，,and it is open as usual at the weekend.,Dear Bob,I was so glad to hear that you are coming to study in our school.The Gym of our school has a history of 40 years,and,was rebuilt in 2006.Facing the school gate,it is located on the left of the school classroom building,and,on its east lies the playground.It is a three-storied building with very modern equipment and excellent surroundings,which,covers an area of 750 square meters.,On the first floor is the swimming pool,on the second are the volleyball,basketball,badminton and table tennis courts and on the third,the lecture hall.The opening time is from 6:30 a.m.to 10:30 p.m.on weekdays,and,it works as usual on weekends.,Sincerely yours,Liu Feng,例二：你校将出版校庆英文特刊介绍学校的相关情况，你将参与编写工作。,【,写作内容,】,请根据以下构思图，写一份关于你校植物园的英语简介：,参考词汇：植物园,botanical garden,要点：,1.,我校植物园有,20,年的历史，,2008,年重建。,Our school botanical garden,rebuilt in 2008,has a history of 20 years.,2.,位于校园西南角，占地,1,000,平方米。,(be spread over an area of,Located in the southwest corner of our school,it has an area of 1000 square meters.,3.,植物园里有各种花卉、树木、药用植物。,(herbs),There are various kinds of flowers,trees,and herbs.,4.,观赏需要至少一小时。,(spend/it takes sb to do/set aside),It takes you at least an hour to explore/visit the,garden.,5.,美化了校园，是研究植物的场所和休闲之地。,(a fantastic place for to do),It is a good place for us to simply relax for a while or study plants and it makes the school more beautiful.,Located at the south-west corner of our school,the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1,000.The garden is over 20 years old,and,was rebuilt in 2008.,As you walk through the garden,you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers,trees and herbs.If youre planning to explore the garden,set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our school more beautiful,and,its a fantastic place for students to study,and,learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.,例三：,2010,年，第十六届亚运会将在广州举行。广州亚组委正在为宣传册征集稿件。请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇介绍主办城市,广州市的文章参与投稿。,概况,中国第三大城市；别称：花城；广东省省会，政治、经济、科学、教育，文化中心。,全市面积,7,434.4,平方公里，人口,1,100,多万。,地理,广东省中部、珠江三角洲北缘，珠江从市中心穿过，气候温暖湿润。,历史,2,200,多年历史的名城，历史上海上丝绸之路的始发港。,旅游,风光旖旎，旅游资源丰富。,参考词汇：珠江三角洲,the Pearl River Delta,海上丝绸之路,the Maritime Silk Road,始发港,a starting port,要点：,1.广州是中国第三大城市，也叫花城。(the third largest city；be known as),Guangzhou,known as Flower City,is the third largest city in China.,2.广州是广东省省会，政治、经济、科学、教育，文化中心。(serves as the capital city of，the centre of),It is the capital of Guangdong Province and also the centre of Guangdongs politic,economy,science,education and culture.,3.全市面积7,434.4平方公里，人口1,100多万。(cover an area of;is home to/have a population of),The city,covering an area of 7,434.4 square kilo-meters,has a population of over 11,000,000.,4.广州位于广东省中部，珠江三角洲北缘。,It is located in the middle part of Guangdong and on the north of the Pearl River Delta.,5.珠江从市中心穿过，气候温暖湿润。(w,The city,through which the Pearl River flows,has a warm and wet climate.,6.广州是2,200多年历史的名城，历史上海上丝绸之路的始发港。(have a history of),It has a history of over 2,200 years and was a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road.,7.风光旖旎，旅游资源丰富。(be abundant in,Guangzhou is rich in traveling resources with beautiful scenery.,Guangzhou,the third largest city in China,also known as City of Flowers,serves as the capital city of Guangdong,and,the center of its political,economic,scientific,educational,and,cultural life.Covering an area of 7,434.4 square kilometers,it is home to more than 11 million people.Located in the middle of Guangdong,north of the Pearl River Delta with the Pearl River winding its way through the city,Guangzhou enjoys a warm,and,wet climate.,Besides,it is a famous city with a history of more than 2，200 years,and,a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road.With its beautiful scenery,Guangzhou is also abundant in traveling resources.,三、自然与环境,实例展示,例一：校刊“英语园地”为配合学校创建“绿色学校”的工作，开展了“创建绿色学校英语征文活动”，请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。,内容如下：,存在现象,浪费水、电；乱扔可回收的饮料瓶、旧书本等；,个人看法,和建议,对学生进行环保教育；,从关灯、回收废物等小事做起；,注意：,1,、词数,150,左右。,2,、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。,3,、文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。,The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school.However,there are still a lot of problems in the school.,要点：,1.,我们经常看到教室里没人，灯却开着。,It is often seen that there is no one in the classroom,where lights are on.,2.,浪费水的现象也比比皆是，这是一个很严重的问题。,It is a serious problem that wasting water can be seen everywhere.,3.,学生乱扔可回收的饮料瓶、旧书本等。,Some students throw away used things everywhere,such as recyclable bottles and used books.,4.,更糟糕的是，很多学生使用不利于环保的饭盒，引起白色污染。,(non-environmentally friendly),What is worse,many students use non-environ-mentally friendly lunch-boxes,which causes the white pollution.,5.,这些问题表明学生缺乏环保意识。（,lack the sense of environmental awareness,）,These problems show that students lack the sense of the environment protection.,6.,进行环保教育是很重要的。（,Its important to,）,It is important for us teachers and parents to educate students about the environment protection.,7.,学生可从小事做起，如回收废物、关灯等。,Students can begin with small things,such as saving water,recycling used things and turning off lights when they leave.,8.,要记住：保护环境，人人有责。,Remenber that it is everyones responsibility to protect our environment.,The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school.However,，,there are still a lot of problems in the school.,In our daily life,it is very common to come across an empty classroom with the lights still on.Its not difficult to find evidence of wasting water,a very serious problem.,Additionally,students do not recycle enough,throwing away the soft drink bottles,used exercise papers and books.,Worse still,many students still use non-environmentally friendly lunch boxes,causing the white pollution.,These things show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness.Its important to educate students to be more environmentally friendly.,At the same time,students can do small things,such as,collecting used items for recycling,turning off the lights,saving water.Always remember that its everyones responsibility to protect the environment.,例二：,全世界的环境问题变得越来越严重。,请你根据,漫画内容和下面要求,给,China Daily,写一封信反映这一情况，并提出保护环境的建议。,参考词汇,：,人口膨胀,population expansion,；过度开发,overdevelopment,。,Dear editor,_,_,_,Yours truly,Liu Mei,要点：,1.,全世界的环保问题越来越严重。,Environmental problems are getting more and more serious all over the world.,2.,随着工农业的发展，由于人口膨胀和过度开发，资源越来越少。,With the development of industry and agriculture,resources have become less and less because of overdevelopment population expansion.,3.,树木被乱砍乱伐，废水不断地流入河水里，汽车产生很大的噪音，排放出有毒气体。,Trees have been cut down,waste water is poured continuously into rivers and cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas.,4.,整个地球的生态平衡正在发生着改变。,(the whole ecological balance of),The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing.,5.,大量环境破坏已经带来了很多负面效应，甚至威胁着人类的生存。,(massive destruction of environment,，,negative effects,，,poses a great threat to),Great destruction of environment has caused a lot of negative effects and given a great threat to mans existence.,6.,我们必须面对这种已经存在的现象，并采取措施解决环保问题。,(face the situation,，,take action to),We must face the existing phenomenon and take measures to solve these environmental problems.,7.,我们希望所有的措施都是有效的，重新营造一个健康的环境。,(be effective,，,bring back),We hope that all the measures will be effective and lead to a healthy environment.,Dear editor,Environmental problems are becoming more,and,more serious all over the world.With the development of industry and agriculture,resources have become less and less because of population expansion and over-development.,For example,trees on the hills have been cut down,waste water is being poured continuously into rivers,and,cars make great noises,and,give off poisonous gas.The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing.Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects,and,even poses a great threat to mans existence.We must face the situation that exists,and,take action to solve our environmental problems,and,we hope that all these measures will be effective,and,bring back a healthful environment.,Yours truly,Liu Mei,例三：如果你有美国朋友来深圳参观，请你简要介绍深圳。内容包括：,地理位置：中国南部，南海之滨，毗邻香港；,气 候：温和，亚热带海洋性，雨量充沛，阳光充足；,居民特点：自从南宋就有移民移居深圳，建市以后数量剧增；,面 积：总面积近,2,000,平方公里，盛产荔枝等；,其 他：深圳高楼林立，干净整洁，高科技产品世界闻名。,参考词汇：亚热带海洋性,subtropical maritime,荔枝,litchi,要点：,1.,深圳位于中国南部，南海之滨,(,沿海城市,),，毗邻香港。,Shenzhen,a coastal city on the South China Sea,is located in the south of China and close to Hong Kong.,2.,气候温和，亚热带海洋性，雨量充沛，阳光充足；,(enjoys a climate with adequate),It has a mild subtropical maritime,climate with adequate rain and sunshine.,3.,自从南宋就有移民移居深圳，建市以后数量剧增。,(there be,flow into,be soaring,剧增,),There have been immigrants moving into the place since the Southern Song Dynasty and the number has been increasing rapidly since it was established as a city.,4.,总面积近,2,000,平方公里，盛产荔枝等。（,cover an area of nearly/the total area approximates to,将近,be rich in,）,It covers an area of nearly 2,000 square kilometers,(and it is)rich in various fruits like litchi.,5.,深圳高楼林立，干净整洁，高科技产品世界闻名。,(have quantities of,有很多，,be famous for),Shenzhen,famous for its hi-tech products,has a good number of tall buildings and clean streets.,A Brief Introduction to Shenzhen,Located in the south of China,Shenzhen is a coastal city on the South China Sea,adjacent to Hong Kong.It enjoys a mild,subtropical maritime climate with adequate rain,and,sunshine.There have been migrants flowing into the Shenzhen area since the Southern Song Dynasty,and,the number has been soaring after it was established as a city.The total area of Shenzhen approximates to 2,000 square kilometers,and,it is rich in fruits like litchi.Shenzhen has quantities of tall buildings,and,clean streets,famous for its hi-tech products.,四、个人健康与饮食文化,实例展示,例一：假设你是彭明，你发现部分同学每次碰到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点：,焦虑症,建 议,其他建议,头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等,1,考前制定好合适的复习计划；,2,考试期间正常作息；,3,睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠。,(,内容由考生自己拟定,),参考词汇：头晕,dizzy(adj,),要点：,1.,我,写信,是,想说,我们同学考试前出现的一些焦虑症状。,(symptoms of anxiety among.),I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.,2.,大部分同学重要考试前都会,紧张,，出现头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等症,(whenever,，,suffer from lack of sleep,，,losing ones appetite),Most of us feel nervous whenever were taking an important exam,such as feeling dizzy or tired,suffering from lack of sleep,or losing their appetite.,3.,事实上这些症状,对,考试都,有很不好的影响,，我们应该,尽力,消除,。,(have terrible effects on,In fact,these symptoms have bad effects on our