外企求ۥ职信写作特点及要求.doc

外企求职信写作特点及要求

he field of cost accounting. please consider me an applicant for the position. here are my reasons for believing i am qualified for this work.　　求职的人不得不提到希望待遇时，可用类似的句子：　　1、 hesitate to state a definite salary, but, as long as you have requested me to , i should consider 6,500 a month satisfactory. 俺对待遇总是迟迟无法定个确切数目，但既然您要俺说明，俺认为月薪六千五百元就满意了。　　2、although it is difficult for me to say what compensation i should deserve, i should consider-a month a fair initial salary. 尽管俺特别难说待遇应该是多少，俺以为起薪每月--特别合理。　　3、i feel it is presumptuous of me to state what my salary should be. my first consideration is to satisfy you completely. however, while i am serving my apprenticeship, i should consider-a month satisfactory compensation. 余不敢冒昧说出起薪多少。最初余仅想要如何作工得好，使您满意。在学徒（试用）期间，月薪--即可。　　提到待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意，以下句子不宜使用。　　１、as for salary, i do not know what to say. would$4,500 a month be too much? 至于起薪，俺不知如何说，月薪四千五百元会不会太多？　　2、do you think i should be asking too much if i said 5000 dollars a month? 假设要求月薪五千元，会不会太高？　　3、you know what my services are worth better than i do . all i want is a living wage. 对敝人作工的价值您比俺更明晰。俺仅想够糊口即可。　　应征函或自荐函的结尾用语，试比拟以下各句：　　1、（a）软弱、羞怯的： if you think i can fill the position after you have read my letter, i shall be glad to talk with you. 读完此信后倘您认为敝人可补缺，敝人愿和您一谈。　　(b)改写后（较佳）： if my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, i should welcome the opportunity to talk with you, so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.　　2、（a）疑心，不妥、不平安的： if youre interested, let me know immediately, as im sure and interview will convince you im the man for the job. 倘贵司公有兴趣，请即告知，敝人坚信与您面谈能够使您相信，敝人适宜担任此职。　　（b）改写后： may i have an interview? you can reach me by telephone at taipei 884525 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening. 可否赐予面谈？您可在每天上午七至九时，下午五时半至九时电884525号。　　3、陈腐的句子： hoping you will give me an interview, i am（俺希望您惠予面谈） anticipating a favorable decision, i wait your（等候您的佳音） trusting your reply will be satisfactory, i remain(静候满意的答复)　　4、哀求式的句子，不够完好（漏掉面谈时间）： wont you please give me the chance to interview your? i can be reached by calling kenmore 69781. 恳请惠予面谈。请打k-69781　　（b）改写后： may i have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? my telephone is kenmore 69781. you can reach me between nine and five oclock during the day. 可否惠予面谈以便进一步商讨？俺的是k-69781。俺从上午九时到下午五时都可接通。　　5、太过自信的句子： i am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements between two and four every afternoon except tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 731430. 俺坚信面谈能够证明俺的话。您可在每天下午二至四时（星期二例外）打731430号通知俺。　　6、较详细有效的句子。 may i have an interview? my residence telephone is (042) 4398. you reach me by calling that number until june 30. after july 2, my address will be kent house, bretton woods, new hampshire. 可否惠予面谈？俺住处为43981号。六月三十日往常俺都在上址，七月二日以后，俺的新址为新罕不夏州布列登林肯特屋。　　应征函的语气　　应征函要发挥最大的效果，语气必须确信、自信、有创意而不过份夸大，如能事先洞察雇主的爱好，或其别人格特性，按照物以类聚的原理，应征函假设能配合雇主的特性，求职的人一定能够比其别人占上风，获得面谈的时机。 比拟以下各句语气上有何不同：　　1、i think that i should probably make a good bookkeeper for you. 俺想俺可能成为贵司公的好簿记号。　　2、i am confident that my experience and references will show you that i can fulfill the particular requirements of your bookkeeping position. 俺想信俺的经历和推荐人能够告诉您，俺能够符合贵司公簿记员一职的特定需要。　　3、i recently completed a course in filing at the crosby school of business. i am competent not only to install a filing system that will fulfill the needs of your organization, but i am also well qualified to operate it efficiently. 最近俺在克洛斯比商业补习班读完一门档案处理的课程，俺自信不仅能够设置一套档案人类系统符合您的要求，而且能够有效地操作。　　4、i feel quite certain that as a result of the course in filing which i completed at the crosby school of business, i can install and operate efficiently a filing system for your organization. 俺相信在克洛斯比商业实习班修完一门课后，俺能够替贵司公设置同时操作一套档案分类系统。　　第一句显得语气太弱，写信的人有点羞怯的模样。第二句有特别风格，第三句太过自信，第四句，表示谦虚。