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昨天你们班就“Why should we learn English?”这一话题进行了一场激烈的讨论，结果如下表。请根据表格里的内容写一篇海报。
Title
Why should we learn English?
Reasons
1. 英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言，大多数商业信件，书籍，杂志都用英语书写。
2. 学好英语可使我们更好的向国外学习先进经验：可以更快更好地学习 现代科学技术。
3. 学好英语能更好地为祖国服务。
4. 学习英语有时也是一大趣事。
Conclusion
我们应该努力学习英语
注意：
1. 词数120左右。
2. 根据内容可适当增添细节。
Why should we learn English?
English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. It is one of the working languages at international meetings and is more often used than others. It’s said that most business letters was written in English. Millions of books and magazines are written in English, too.
With the help of English, people in developing countries can learn a lot of advanced experience, modern science and technology faster and better from the developed countries.
We can serve our country better with the help of English.
Sometimes, learning is also great fun.

假定你是一名高中生，一次一位外国朋友问你，除了在学校学习英语之外还有什么其它途径练习英语。请你根据提示用英语写出你参加“英语角” 的情况。提示：1、“英语角” 于两年前成立，许多中学生参加，有时也有些大学生和外国友人来此。2、活动时间：每周六上午。3、活动内容：练习英语口语，谈论大家共同感兴趣的事情，交流学习英语的经验等。4、谈你参加此项活动的体会。
参考词汇：“英语角”：English corner

I’m a senior student. I like English very much. Besides attending English lessons at school, I often go to the English corner in the park nears my home on
Saturday morning. It was set up (formed) two years ago. Many high school students gather there. Sometimes, some college students and even foreign friends are present at the English corner. There, we practice our spoken English, talk about what we are interested in, exchange our experience in learning English and so on. I’ve learned a lot. I have greatly improved myself in English since I visited it. It is really a great help to me.

假定你叫王华，是南京25中学生，你的朋友李刚写信告诉你他学英语有困难，尤其是听的能力较差，写的能力也不够，请你于2004年2月2日回一封信，给他提出一些建议。
提高听力的建议：每天听，别贪多，选择磁带由易到难。
提高写的能力的建议：多读，好文章反复读，记日记（keep a diary）。
1． 用90个词左右。2． 不要逐字翻译成英文。3． 注意书信的格式。

one possible version:
No. 25 Middle School
Nanjing
Feb. 2nd, 2004
Dear Li Gang,
Thank you for writing to me. In your letter you told me about your problem with listening. I advise you to practice listening English for ten minutes every day. Choose tapes that are not too difficult. Later on you can practice with tapes that are more difficult.
You asked me how to improve your writing. I suggest that you should first of all read as much as possible and read some good passages many times. You’d better keep a diary in English. I’m sure you’ll improve your listening and writing soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hua

A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to class of foreign adult
students. After placing quite a number of everyday objects. on a table, and he asked
them to give her the ruler, the book and”on. The class went very smooth and the
students seemed interested in the work unless my friend tuned to an Italian student
and said, "Give me the keys." The Italian looked surprising end somewhat at. a loss.
Swing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn't heard him clearly. However, he
repeated, "Give me the keys." The Italian then kissed him on both cheek.
带二节书面表达（满分25分)
浪定你是李华，21st Century网站向你哟稿，请你介绍自己的暑期生活情况、请用英 语写一封邮件，就以下内容做简耍介绍，
写作要点，
1．学习、上网；
2观看奥运节目：
3.旅游观光。
注毒．
1.词段100左右；
　2、可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯：
3.邮件开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数
A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to ∧ class of foreign adult
giving a
students. After placing quite a number of everyday objects on a table, and he asked

them to give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth and the
him smoothly
students seemed interested in the work unless my friend turned to an Italian student
until
and said, “Give me the keys.” The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss.
surprised
Seeing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn’t heard him clearly. However, he
thought Therefore
repeated, “Give me the keys.” The Italian then kissed him on both cheek.
cheeks
Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student. I’d like to talk about my life during the summer vacation.
I arranged a few hours a day for learning and sports. I also surfed the internet for an hour each day to learn what’s going on around the world. Besides, watching the 2012 London Olympic Games on TV was a must for me, which I believe was a big event few wanted to miss. It was really exciting to see the fierce competition and each athlete was doing their best. What’s more, I went to several famous tourist attractions in China and Huangshan has left a deep impression on me with its fantastic views.
I think I had an unforgettable summer vacation.

Now in the country areas, there are much children dropping out of school. The reason for this are different. Some families are very poor to send their children to school. Some parents think useless for girls to go to school, so their daughters lost the chance. Some other children are not interesting in their lessons, and would not like to go to school. In my opinion, every child should have the chance to receive education include boys and girls. Beside, the whole society should pay attention to the education of children, because of they will play important part for developing our country in the future.

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much reasons
different. Some families are very poor to send their children to school. Some parents think ∧useless
too it
for girls to go to school, so their daughters lost the chance. Some other children are not interesting in
lose interested
their lessons, and would not like to go to school. In my opinion, every child should have the chance to receive education include boys and girls. Beside, the whole society should pay attention to the
including Besides
education of children, because of they will play important parts for developing our country in the future. in

2.只允许修改10处。
It is five years now since I graduate from High School Attached to Harbin Normal University. Last Saturday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies. Anyway, they called back or sent greeting card from different places.

改错答案：1.graduate---graduated 2. on---in 3.to prepare 4.drop the 5.well---good
6. remembering 7.they---we 8.which---that 9.drop to 10.card---cards

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Dear Mary,
I am writing to asking for your advices on how to get along with my roommate Rose. I find really difficult to share a room with a person who do not act like a girl.
My roommate has many bad habits in everyday life. She is quite wild and always makes noise while we are sleeping. Beside, she usually throws rubbish everywhere, that makes our room a dirty place. I’m really boring with it.
I have talked about her many times and have tried my best to help her get rid of the bad habits. And it seems that there is no hope that I will succeed in changing his behaviour. So I want you to give me some suggestions.
Looking forward to your early reply!
1. asking – ask 2. advices – advice
3. find后加 it 4. do–does
5. Beside –Besides 6. that – which
7. boring – bored 8. about – with或 to
9.And – But 10.his– her

· During the weekend I traveled by the air for the first time in my life. I usual travel by train or bus. It’s both cheaper and safe. But to fly in the sky was something new to me. At the end I felt a little nervous. But very soon I became exciting when I found me high up in the sky among the clouds. I also found that mountains, fields, river and so on were interestingly small. I enjoy the frightening and comfortable journey very much. After all, it is more interesting take a plane than to take a car.

Thank you for your letter. To tell you the truth, I’ve thought a lot of about whether you

should buy a laptop computer help you with your study. In my opinion, you’d better not. For

one reason, it’s very easy for you to develop some bad habit once you have it, such as playing

computer games, see movies and so on, which will be a waste of time. For other reason, buying a

laptop computer don’t mean you can study well. If you want to make a progress, you need to put

your heart into your study but work hard. Whether you had a computer or not is not the most

important. Do you agree to me? Looking forward to your reply!
Li Hua