作文10-23书表优秀句式与错误.doc

高三英语备课组（Oct.24）
10.23日英语考试高三学生书面表达中好的词汇和句式：
1. keep to /stick to/ hold onto/ hold on to one’s dream
go after/ pursue one’s dream
keep on doing sth.
make one’s dream come true/ a reality/ realized
realize one’s dream/live one’s dream
2. As the author puts it, failure can make us successful one day.
3. Every apple tree has several seeds, but only a few of them grow into big apple trees, so do the dreams. In order to realize our dreams, we are supposed to try repeatedly until we succeed.
4. To begin with, being afraid of difficulties makes it hard for people to stick to pursuing their dreams.
5. The passage conveys to us that not all seeds can grow into a big tree, which is the same as our dreams. However, as long as we stick to them, we’ll succeed eventually.
6. The passage teaches us an important and thought-provoking lesson.
7. When confronted with difficulties, I’ll stick to my dream and never give up until I succeed.
表达中典型错误：
1. There are many factors may result in this consequence.
There are many reasons account for this problem.
2. Why many apple seed can’t grow into a proud tree?
3. The passage conveys that “It’s impossible for everyone to realize their dreams”.
4. Not every dream comes true, just like not every seed can grow into a tree.
5. We don’t stick to our dreams, due to we are easy to give up.
6. One possible solution is that build up a reasonable dream.
7. The fact that apple seeds can’t all grow into apple trees is just that our dreams won’t all come true.
8. Nowadays, many people have ambitions, but why they can’t realize their dreams. Several facotrs account for it.
9. In my opinoin, one is likely to fail doing one thing while he trys for it.
10. They prefer to do some things that just needs a little effort.
11. In my point of view. To make our dreams come true, we should build up our confidence so that we hold the positive attitude to the future.
12. An increasing number of people loses their heart and give up.
13. I can make every effort into pursuing it.
14. Despite I have failed many times, I never give up.