托福作文28分大牛经验分享.pdf

智 课 网 托 福 备 考 资 料托福作文28分大牛经验分享复习时间：复习了差不多20天。觉得时间很紧。所以刚接触托福，不着急考的同学还是把复习时间留足一点。逼自己一把是必须的，不过别过头了，劳逸结合。点击获取更多专业名师辅导、免费增值服务，享受托福精英、VIP一对一计划托福作文：其实重点要说的就是托福作文，尤其是第一篇。第一篇作文的听力有三个反驳的点，第三个点真太没听明白考完试觉得肯定第一个作文完蛋了。可是ETS还是给的good。为什么呢?模板啊亲!别的不说了，分享了先!大家自己体会!(模板中有个也是从论坛里面分享到的，很有用滴!在此鸣谢那位好心分享的同学!)五段哦不过考试的时候要是时间来不及，就将就四段也行，最后一段就不用写了。第一段，说一下reading的main idea，并说出reading和listening之间的关系(一般都是相反的观点)：version1：The reading passageis concerned with the issue of.The professors lecture dealswith the same issue.However,he thinks that.Which contradictswhat the reading states.Also,he gives several main reasons tocast doubt on each of the authors ideas./version2：Thereading passage presents some serious disadvantages of windpower as an alternative source of energy.The professor,however,disputes these arguments.Also,he gives several mainreasons to cast doubt on each of the readings ideas.第二段，先说reading，再说listening：First of all,even thoughthe reading passage suggests that.,the professor argues in thelecture that.This is because.,which means.Apparently,theprofessors argument disproves its counterparts in the reading.第三段，先说reading，再说listening：Secondly,the readingpassage also asserts that.The professor refutes this point aswell,pointing out.第四段，为了让文章段落显得不那么死板，体现多样性，就先说listening，再说reading：In addition,the professor indicates that.Whereas the author of the reading claims that.The professorproves that this claim is indefensible by pointing out that.结尾：In conclusion,the professor clearly identifies theweakness in the reading passage and convincingly shows thatthe central argument in the reading is incorrect.第二个作文也按五段来写，第一段:明确表明你的立场。第二段：第一个reason+detail+example第三段：第二个reason+detail+example第四段：第三个reason+detail+example第五段：结尾，再次表明立场。一般在30分钟内，对大多数人来说能说明白自己观点的小文章，字数大概500左右。写差不多500字就是最理想的状态了，别超过550。要是您是大牛的话，想写多少写多少吧中间三段不要弄得一段太肥，另外两个营养不良。最好肥瘦差不多，要么就拿个两段的肥瘦差不多，另外一段稍微少点也行。至于为什么会有reason+detail+example的模式呢?请参照托福作文考题的题目要求Reason哪里来呢?1.平时练作文的时候，看到作文题目，一定要自己先想至少三个reason。实在想不出来了再去看看范文的reason是什么。2.平时生活里面多注意积累。要是想不出来，问问身边的朋友，也许别人的一句话就能让你茅塞顿开。Detail呢?-detail就是对reason的说明。2-4句话.不要太长，也不能太短。看你的写作速度和打字速度，所以自己拿捏啦。Example?-Example最好每段都有，至少要出现在两个段落中。就是至少你要有两个例子!既可以是别人的experience也可以是你自己的。或者你编也行。光说不练不行，现在来看看这篇文章。Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Thefriend that you can have fun with is more important than friendthat you can get help with.Use specific reasons to support youranswer.第一段开头，表明观点：Friends make our life interesting andwonderful.Life would be pretty lonely without them around.Friends are not just for socializing and having fun.Mostimportantly,they are always there for you when you need help.Personally,I value the friends that I can get help from more thanthe friends that I can have fun with.(第一段，阅卷人找的就是这句话。)第二段，reason+detail+example：To begin with,friends willcome and go in our life;having helpful friends means havingpeople I can count on when I had bitterness and disappointmentin my life.(理由1)They are there to listen to me and give me helpand advice.It is hard to imagine what would happen withouttheir kindness help.(detail1)For example,(开始举例)six monthsago me and my husband of almost 2 years ended our marriagebecause of his betray.It was so miserable and I tired to commit asuicide in the bathroom.But my friends found me finally andtook me to the hospital.They looked after me and keptcomforting me and cheer me up.Now,I have already fullyrecovered from it.I feel very appreciate for their help and realizethat having friends who is willing to help is really important,because when you feel like it is the end of the world,and have noone to go to,your friend will always be there foryou.(呼应一下这段的首句，提醒阅卷老师你的例子没有跑偏)第二段，Reason+detail，这段没写example，但是在detail里面加了一个对比：In addition,helpful friends let you know what thetrue friendship is,how to be friendly to other people,and how tosolve our daily problems,etc.(理由2)People always say that tellme who your friends are and Ill tell you who you are.Thus,it isof utmost importance to carefully choose your friends,for theywill have great influence on our life.Surround yourself withhelpful friends who are models of something instead of expertsof nothing,for they are capable of contributing to a solution ofyour problem from their own experiences.On the contrary,if yousurround yourself with lots of friends that you could only havefun with,you can barely learn useful things from them.第四段，回到Reason+detail+example：Finally,a helpfulfriend could also bring us lots of happy time and make our lifebeautiful.(理由3)Life without them is just like flowers withoutsunshine.(detail)For example,a helpful friend is generally able towork out a wonderful plan for traveling or doing otherinteresting things.Most of my friends and I are keen on travelingand we went to Korea last year.It was really fun to stay withthem;they arranged almost everything from hotel to cars.Wewent to lots to tourist sites and tried different kinds of deliciousKorean food.I never remain suspicious that I can have fun withthem as well.(呼应理由3，顺便提醒老师，例子没写偏)第五段 再次表态：To sum up,the factors that have beendiscussed above lead me to believe that the friend that you canget help from is more important than the friend that you canhave fun with.As an old saying goes,a friend in need is a friendindeed.这一篇差不多500字。表明了立场，说了三个理由，举了两个例子，detail也有。照这个模式在考场里面写，绝对错不了。托福作文要得高分就一定要。必须要。非常要。好好练习啊!