山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练-短文改错+写作(2).doc

山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（2）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am a senior high school student．To my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledges．So quietness is badly need for us to learn in the classroom．But recently some
students has brought their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear of the ring of mobile phones．Some of them even wasted precious time in class type short messages on the mobile phones．To keep the classroom quietly and make us focus more on our studies, I suggest that mobile phones be used in the classroom．At least, they shouldn’t be used where we are having a class．

书面表达
假如你是Li Hua，担任学生会主席， 你校刚在10月10日举行完首届校园外语节，请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英语稿，投递到英文报，The 21st Century。
目 的： 为了丰富校园生活，提高同学们学习外语的积极性，校学生会特举办首届校园外语节。
参赛形式： 以班级为单位参加。
活动内容： 英文演讲，英文歌曲和英语短剧比赛。
活动裁判： 本校英语教师和外教。
活动影响： 增强了学生学习英语的兴趣等。
参考词汇： Foreign Language Festival, English Speech Contest, English Playlets Competition
注意： 词数100左右；信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Editor，
On Oct.10th, our school held the first Foreign Language Festival…. …

Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

改错
1. … To my opinion… To → In
2. … gain knowledges … knowledges → knowledge
3. … is badly need for … need → needed
4. … students has brought… has → have
5. …often hear of the ring … 去掉of
6. … wasted precious time… wasted → waste
7. … class type short … type → typing
8. … To keep the classroom quietly … quietly → quiet
9. … mobile phones be used … phones be之间加not 或shouldn’t
10. …where we are having … where → when

editor,
On Oct.10th,our school held the first Foreign Language Festival.It aimed to make campus life more colourful as well as to encourge students to study English.
There were three activities during this festival—English Speech Contest,English Songs and English Playlets Competition. Each contestant from all the classes took part in them actively. And the judges consisted of our English teachers and foreign teachers.
As the chairman of the Students’ Union, I was completely involved in the festival. In my opinion, this festival has been successfully organized. Also, the atmosphere of learning English has been well constructed. Moreover, it has effectively raised our awareness of cross-culture and teamwork. I hope such activities will be regularly held then.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hu
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