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Response,CC=cohesion and Coherence,LR=Lexical Resource,GRA=Grammar&Accuracy,雅思写作评分标准,2/44,As an international,tourist,one should always,adhere to,the local,customs,as a rule while the,traveling,.To what extent do you agree or disagree?,Traveling=?,Adhere to=?,Customs=,？,Cultural,diversity=cultural mosaic=cultural legacy,3/44,3,traveling=Tourism/journey/vacation/holiday/,Adhere to=abide by/comply with/conform to/cling to,Customs=traditions/hobbies/personal habits,4/44,什么是好开头,Clear,simple,Less memorization,higher band score,Within 5 minutes,Paraphrase,5/44,惨不忍睹版开头,-,各种想吐,Countrys health budget as a part of government budget is more and more concerned by government.,Government,spent much,money or countrys health,like the public health service.In my opinion,rather than,put enormous money to cure people,it is better to spend money on prevention how to get away from some disease.,6/44,7/44,8/44,题目：,exposure to international media,e.g.films,tv and magazines,has an impact on the local culture.to what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?,开头段：,With the development of the global media industry,traditional custom has been influenced undeniably.Some people suggest that the information from other countries bring us much profitability to our current culture.,Sample:,9/44,2024/12/9 周一,开头写法,-A,Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through,distance learning from the Internet,rather than teachers in the classroom.,Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?,利弊提问方式,10/44,A,地主版开头,For the last thirty years or so,more emphasis has been placed on,the way of offering qualifications,and it has been argued that acquiring qualification through distant learning from Internet will be more attractive than through studying in classroom.However,compared with professors,the Internet cannot communicate with students sufficiently.,11/44,A,贵族版开头,Qualification is linked,to a persons,academic performance,.,In the past,people had to spend much time in attending classes to pass the examination such as lawyer and architect vocational qualification.Nevertheless,It seems that a large number of people acquire relevant professional qualification via,classes online,easily,at present,.The advantages of this practice far exceed the disadvantages in my opinion.,12/44,A,平民版,Nowadays,the distant learning through internet is progressing rapidly on various fronts.Yet at the same time,whether we,should offer qualification through distant learning,has sparked much debate,.,Some people think,studying in classroom is better,while others disagree,.,Personally,I am in favor of the former view.,13/44,1.Definition,2.Past,3.Now,好开头,有,逻辑，,无,模板！,14/44,对比：,时间对比,past,now,future,关系对比,individual,society,15/44,开头写法,-B,Learning a foreign language offers an insight into how people from other cultures think and see the world.The teaching of a foreign language should be compulsory at all primary schools.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?,Agree or Disagree,提问方式,16/44,B,地主版,The recent years has seen a heated discussion over whether,learning a foreign language is necessary.Some people suggest that all primary schools are obligated to include foreign language as an indispensable,part of curriculum.,This allegation is flawed,as far as I am concerned.,17/44,B,贵族版,Language,is linked to,the identity of a nation,and speakers of a common language share many things,but,does this give governments the right to restrict the way language is used or taught,?,18/44,Definition,However,Question,19/44,B,平民版,In the present age,foreign languages,are becoming increasingly essential in peoples daily life.But in the meantime,whether,the teaching of a foreign language should be compulsory at all primary schools,has aroused spirited discussion.Some people say that,we should teach a foreign language in schools,while others disagree.As I see it,I find this view ill-founded.,20/44,开头写法,-C,Should parents be obliged to immunize their children against common childhood diseases,？,Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?,AD=agree or disagree,类型,21/44,C,地主版,More emphasis,in recent years,has been placed on,health problems for children.,However,people are still at crossroads whether,parents are obligated to immunize their children in order to prevent various medical complaints,or,they are blessed with the right not to.,22/44,C,贵族版,The issue of whether,we should force parents to immunize their children against common diseases is,in my opinion,a social rather than a medical question.Since we are free to choose what we expose our bodies to in the way of food,drink,or religion for that matter,why should,the question of medical treatment be any different,？,23/44,Definition,因,&,果,Question,24/44,C,贵族版,2,Some people argue that,the state does not have the right to make parents immunize their children.,However,I feel the question is not whether,they should immunize,but,whether,as members of society,they have the right not to.,25/44,Paraphrase,转折,&,对比,26/44,C,平民版,With the rapid development of science and technology,children,are playing important roles in our lives.However,when it comes to whether,parents should be obliged to immunize their children against common childhood diseases,people hold divergent views.Some people think,the government should make parents do this,while others disagree.Speaking for myself,I agree with the latter view,.,27/44,开头写法,-D,In many major cities of the world,you will find large public buildings,both new and old.Do the advantages exceed its disadvantages?,利弊提问方式,28/44,D,地主版,As the century continues,an increasing number of public constructions are being established in megacities globally.,In this essay,I intend to compare the benefits and drawbacks of this development.,29/44,D,贵族版,A public building is a building that belongs in some way to the state.,/,The number of public buildings in any town or village will depend on the size of that community and its needs.,/,For example,you will usually find a town hall of some sort,a school and a place of worship at the least.In larger communities there will be a police station,law courts,a library and maybe a theatre funded by the state.,30/44,Definition,定性,For Example,31/44,D,平民版,When involved in a dilemma of whether we should,build so many public buildings,or not,quite a few would deem that,building public buildings,is a good thing,but others,on the other hand,harbor a notion that this is a bad thing.Among numerous ingredients which influence the decision,there are several conspicuous aspects as follows.,32/44,烤鸭,-,对号入座,贵族版,:,备考时间充分或,6,分及以上基础,地主版,:,备考时间不足或,4.5,分,-5.5,分基础,平民版：准备时间不充分，基础非常差，,提议背诵模板。,33/44,开头,关键：,在,5,分钟内写完,paraphrase,题目,34/44,改写练习,【1】,题目,Personal happiness is closely related to economic success.,35/44,改写练习,【1】,题目,Personal happiness is closely related to economic success.,改写后,Individual happiness is determined by the wealth he or she owns.,36/44,改写练习,【2】,题目,Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program.,37/44,改写练习,【2】,题目,Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program.,改写后,It is justified for high schools to include voluntary work as an indispensable component of curriculum.,High school students are encouraged to participate in voluntary work as a necessary part of courses.,38/44,题目改写训练,【3】,题目,Schools should select their pupils according to their academic ability.,39/44,题目改写训练,【3】,题目,Schools should select their pupils according to their academic ability.,改写后：,It is reasonable for schools to take academic performance as the only criterion for enrolling students.,40/44,in summary,to sum up,in the end,at last,finally,taking all the factors into consideration,with all the aspects carefully considered,judging from all the evidences offered Im convinced that,.,雅思写作结尾,41/44,2024/12/9 周一,According to the facts outlined above,one understands that,For these reasons,I feel strongly that,、,Personally,In the final analysis,Based on the facts outlined above,one can understand that,普通结尾,42/44,2024/12/9 周一,In conclusion,，,To conclude,As shown above,As suggested above,It seems obvious that,Ultimately,Undoubtedly,Evidently,优异版结尾,43/44,2024/12/9 周一,微博：牙哥,spensor,44/44,