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写好托福作文结尾段的四条
写好托福作文结尾段的四条
写好托福作文结尾段的四条“金科玉律”
如何写好托福作文的开头是许多考生所关注的，但是结尾段也同样重要，一个好的作文结尾也会给文章增色不少。今天我们就来说说托福写作结尾段的四大注意事项：重申立场
重申立场+总结理由让步+重申立场
重申立场+引申扩展
引申扩展包括：
强调反对派立场会带来的后果展望未来问题的前景强调重要性一、重申立场
“Itisdifficultforpeopletoachieveprofessionalsuccesswithoutsacrificingimportantaspectsofafulfillingpersonallife。”
Inconclusion,giventhegrowingdemandsofcareerontoday’sprofessionals,afulfillingpersonalliferemainspossiblebyworkingsmarter,bysettingpriorities,andbymakingsuitablecareerchoices。
二、重申立场+总结理由
“Sincescienceandtechnologyarebecomingmoreandmoreessentialtomodernsociety,schoolsshoulddevotemoretimetoteachingscienceandtechnologyandlesstoteachingtheartsandhumanities。”
Inconclusion,schoolsshouldnotdevotelesstimetotheartsandhumanities.Theseareasofstudyaugmentandenhancelearninginmathematicsandscience,aswellashelpingtopreservetherichnessofourentirehumanlegacywhileinspiringustofurtherit.Moreover,disciplineswithinthehumanitiesprovidemethodsandcontextsforevaluatingthemoralityofourtechnologyandfordeterminingitsproperdirection。三、让步+重申立场
“Jobsecurityandsalaryshouldbebasedonemployeeperformance,notonyearsofservice.Rewardingemployeesprimarilyforyearsofservicediscouragespeoplefrommaintainingconsistentlyhighlevelsofproductivity。”
Inthefinalanalysis,thestatementcorrectlyidentifiesjobperformanceasthesinglebestcriterionforsalaryandjobsecurity.However,thestatementgoestoofar,itignoresthefactthatacost-of-livingsalaryincreasefortenuredemployeesnotonlyenhancesloyaltyand,intheend,productivity,butalsoisrequiredbyfairness。四、重申立场+引申扩展
Howfarshouldasupervisorgoincriticizingtheperformanceofasubordinate?Somehighlysuccessfulmanagershavebeenknowntorelyonverbalabuseandintimidation.Doyouthinkthatthisisaneffectivemeansofcommunicatingexpectations?Ifnot,whatalternativeshouldamanageruseindealingwithsomeonewhoseworkislessthansatisfactory?
Inconclusion,supervisorsshouldavoidusingverbalabuseandthreats.Thesemethodsdegradesubordinates,andtheyareunlikelytoproducethebestresultsinthelongrun.Itismorerespectful,andprobablymoreeffectiveoverall,tohandlecasesofsubstandardworkperformancewithclear,honestandsupportivefeedback。
考生只要把握好以上四大托福写作结尾的注意事项之一，用好用活，托福写作的结尾就能给文章锦上添花。
托福提分小组编辑整理-严禁私自转载
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3and4:Read+Listen+Answer5and6:Listen+Answer
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☆综合作文20minutes
☆独立作文30minutes
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☆独立作文并不独立
--Writingbasedonknowledgeand
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◆discussaroundaspecifictopic--Position观点++--Support支持
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1．Ideas思路搭建2．Language语言组织
3．Performance考场发挥
#Ideas
--段间低开高走
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--段内nomore,noless
……
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Asmallstepthoughitisforyoungpeople,ahugeleapforthefuturelife.
Itviolatesabasicprinciplethatthepublicroadsshouldbeofthepeople,bythepeopleandforthepeople.
StephenHawkingWinstonChurchillthefreaksinBigBandFranklinRooseveltJobs
#Language
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#Performance
--??发挥??1适者生存2Typing--速度--精度--习惯BackspaceCap关于键盘…
@备考稳定性
1高低搭配
2时间记录--每阶\u6bb5
☆托福写作的三不原则
！不要为了凑字数而写文章！
--字数不是问题
300？400？500？550？600？700？…
不要为了凑字数而写文章多多未必益善文字是信息的载体
字数不是问题，耗时才是关键
！不要翻译思想！
--写作不是翻译不要太依赖字典
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更加不要依赖金山快译
Sayawordinheart,Ithinkwelcomethechallengeisveryokanddeliciousforboththesinglepersonandtheplanet.
Letmetellyou,Idisagreewiththisopinionbecauseitisstupidandanyonewithbrainswill","p":{"h":39.412,"w":230.397,"x":453.883,"y":756.599,"z":42},"ps":null,"s":{"letter-spacing":"-0.552"},"t":"word","r":[5]},{"c":"turnagainstit.
Itisusefultolettheoldpastaway.
Hehastogothrough5doorsandkill6generals.
Onehastogothroughaseriesofdifficultiesandwithstandcountlesschallenges.Itisreallyabig
headache.Itisalmostamission（任务、使命）impossible.
！不要追求真理！","p":{"h":42.407,"w":315.3,"x":139.687,"y":1013.324,"z":42},"ps":{"_cover":true},"s":{"color":"#0000cb"},"t":"word","r":[19,20]},{"c":"--写作不必面面俱到
表达观点而不是写真理。观点(perspectives)是种角度
和姿态。观点不是真理。作文不是免责声明。
！滴水不漏才是最大的疏漏--and/or
Thesuccessfulindividualsorpeoplearethemalesorfemaleswhohaveachievedandaccomplishedorevenhavebeenregardedtogetgreatdeedsorcontributions.Heorshe,inthepastofhistory,inmodernsocietyandinthefutureoftomorrow,was,isorwill","p":{"h":42.407,"w":68.341,"x":237.666,"y":954.764,"z":70},"ps":null,"s":{"letter-spacing":"-0.709"},"t":"word","r":[12]},{"c":"beadmiredorworshipedbyallofusoratleastthemajorityofthepublic….!拼图原则：
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environmentsignificant2.Nevertheless,noteffective3.Notthemostimportant--othersolutions
4.solutioncounterproductive（反生产的,使达不到预期目标的）
★有预谋，才能有组织
Ifyoudonotthinkclearly,youcannotwriteclearly.","p":{"h":42.407,"w":212.393,"x":81.112,"y":790.394,"z":52},"ps":{"_cover":true},"s":{"letter-spacing":"-0.385"},"t":"word","r":[14]},{"c":"☆规划我的篇章规划原则：
@无悬念--立场和论点前置@有系统连接词运用
@有脉络从概括至具体
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Itisgood,Ithink.Butotherpeoplemaysaydisagree.Well,sometimesitisgood,sometimesbad.Thatdependsontherealityandpeople’smind.Soitisreallydifficultformeto","p":{"h":42.407,"w":42.486,"x":549.303,"y":883.844,"z":63},"ps":null,"s":{"letter-spacing":"-0.098"},"t":"word","r":[13]},{"c":"tellyouwhetherIshouldagreeordisagreewiththisopinion.Iwillanalyze3pointsinmyfollowingparagraphs.
!Heading写作三原则☆Straightforward开门见山Position=Questionresponse☆Centralize立场核心化
☆Nodetails
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Incomparison,humorousfriendsaremorewelcomedbyothers.Cleverfriendsarelesspopularamongpeople.
Spendingallthemoneyonpresentpleasuresuchasvacationisnotagoodidea.Noonewouldacceptthatputtingeverycentonvacationmakesanygood.
Agreeordisagree:thebestwaytotravelisinagroupledbyatourguide.
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*Systematic
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Tobeginwith,thereisnopointtoclaimthatdoingsomechallengingworkwoulddoanygood.Thatistosay,Iobjecttotheassertionthattaking","p":{"h":42.407,"w":116.779,"x":171.225,"y":649.619,"z":56},"ps":null,"s":{"letter-spacing":"-0.065"},"t":"word","r":[15]},{"c":"challengeswouldbebeneficial.Tobeexact,theclaimthatfacingupwithchallengeshasmanyadvantagesisoutoffocus.
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☆thesimplest,thebest☆independentsentences
☆noexplanation-because-
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☆noslogan!
Letus,thewesternersandeasterners,youngandold,richandpoor,gayandstraight,handinhand,shouldertoshoulder,sparenoefforttoworkforthewell-beingsofoursocietyandthepeaceonthisplanet!
Tosumup,Inaword,Allinall,
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for建议类话题
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for结论话题
*Allinall,thereisnopointtoclaim/assert/assumethat….Whatismore,it
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★有品位，才能有层次
好文章的标准
★评分标准OverallScoring
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@falsereactiontowardthe
topic
@incompleteunderstanding
@misplaceexample
Doyouagreeordisagree:Becausepeoplearetoobusydoingmanythings,theycandofewthingswell.
Heading
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CS1.Concedesometimesdofewthingswell.
CS2Nevertheless,wehaveachievements+eg.CS3Whatismore,dofewthingswellnotbecausewearebusy.+
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negativeinfluence
Doyouagreeordisagree,peoplewillspendlesstimepreparingandcooking
Doyouagreewiththefollowingstatementthattheonlywaygovernmentcandotoenergyconservationistoincreasethepriceofgasolineandelectricity
Heading
Tolargeextent,disagree.","p":{"h":54.941,"w":11.784,"x":158.715,"y":186.247,"z":18},"ps":null,"t":"word","r":[1]},{"c":"Body
1.Tobeginwith,Concedemakethepricehighernecessary.
2.Nevertheless,raisingthepriceharmful3.Tocarrytheideafurther,nottheonlymeasure4.Atlast,thepolicyofpriceincreaseforbasicenergyisnotsupposedtobedecidedbygovernment./
Finally,theincreasingofprice
forbasicenergyisnotsupposedtobemadebygovernmentaldecision./
Finally,theincreasingofpricefor…isnotsupposedtobedecidedbyafewgovernmentalofficials.
#语言组织行云流水
Streamline+Clear
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主谓一致
连贯
--seamlessconnection
#遣词造句并非复杂
Vocabulary+Sentence
FitRangeAccurate
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