山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练-短文改错+写作(61).doc

山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（61）
短文改错
此题要求改正所有短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
There are advantage for students to work while
1. ____________
studying at school. One of them was that
2. _____________
they can earn money. For the most part,
3. ____________
students working to earn money for their own
4. _____________
use. Earning their own money allow them
5. _____________
to spend on anything as if they please.
6. _____________
They would have to ask their parents for
7. _____________
money or for permission to do things by
8. _____________
the money. Some students may also to save
9. _____________
up for our college or future use.
10. _____________

书面表达
最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报社正在组织的一场讨论。讨论主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况并表明你自己的观点。
60% 的同学认为：
40% 的同学认为：
1． 不应收门票
2． 公园是公众休闲的地方
3． 如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象
1． 应收门票
2． 支付园林工人工资
3． 购买新花木
注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。不计入词数。2. 词数：120左右。
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks._________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua

短文改错：
There are advantage for students to work while
1. advantages
studying at school. One of them was that
2. is
they can earn money. For the most part,
3. √
students working to earn money for their own
4. work
use. Earning their own money allow them
5. allows
to spend on anything as if they please.
6. if
They would∧have to ask their parents for
7.not或would→wouldn’t
money or for permission to do things by
8. with
the money. Some students may also to save
9. to
up for our college or future use.
10. their
书面表达
One possible version:
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
Opinions are divided
on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What’s more, it will become necessary to build gate and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

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