山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练-短文改错+写作(61).doc

山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（61）短文改错此题要求改正所有短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。There are advantage for students to work while 1. _studying at school. One of them was that 2. _they can earn money. For the most part,3. _students working to earn money for their own 4. _use. Earning their own money allow them5. _to spend on anything as if they please.6. _They would have to ask their parents for7. _money or for permission to do things by8. _the money. Some students may also to save9. _up for our college or future use.10. _书面表达最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报社正在组织的一场讨论。讨论主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况并表明你自己的观点。60% 的同学认为：40% 的同学认为：1 不应收门票2 公园是公众休闲的地方3 如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1 应收门票2 支付园林工人工资3 购买新花木注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。不计入词数。2. 词数：120左右。Dear editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks._ Yours truly, Li Hua短文改错：There are advantage for students to work while 1. advantagesstudying at school. One of them was that 2. isthey can earn money. For the most part,3. students working to earn money for their own 4. workuse. Earning their own money allow them5. allowsto spend on anything as if they please.6. ifThey wouldhave to ask their parents for7.not或wouldwouldntmoney or for permission to do things by8. withthe money. Some students may also to save9. toup for our college or future use.10. their书面表达One possible version:Dear editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. Whats more, it will become necessary to build gate and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly, Li Hua4用心 爱心 专心