高考作文优胜秘籍.doc

高考作文优胜秘籍
近几年湖北省高考作文的特点是：开放性作文，尽管要求文体不限，但仍然是以记叙为主，夹有议论。要求考生做到内容与事例的统一性、词汇语句的多样性、上下文的连贯性和语言表达的得体性。从高考作文的特点和要求来看，我们要用辩证的思想来看待作文的模板，对于还停留在二档、三档的考生来说，借鉴优秀作文中的写作技巧：高级词语和复杂句式的使用，开头语和结尾语，叙事的程序和议论的模式，是简单易行，行之有效的方法。对于粗步掌握写作技巧考生来说，借鉴优秀作文，更进一步完善自己的写作技能，写出具有个性的短文，也是十分必要的。
第一段首句：解题
1. There is a consensus among people that（人们一致认为）+点题句
2. As is known to all/ As is widely acknowledged,（众所周之）+点题句
3. It is no exaggeration to say that+点题句（毫不夸张地说，……）In my perspective--（在我看来……）
4. It is an indisputable fact that（不可争议的事实是）+点题句
5.Years of school life has taught me a lot of things .What impressed me most is that……
6.Years of school life has sped by in a flash,and the most instructive lesson I have learned is that……多年的学校生活已经一闪而过，我学到的最具有教育意义的一课就是……
第二段首句：过渡句+事例（切题）
1. My own experience can serve as a vivid example.
2. Let me take my own experience as an example to illustrate that.
3. Ｉwould like to share a real story with you to prove the idea.
4. A memory can never fade away from my mind. There was a time when……
5. When it comes to this, I can’t help recalling one of my own experiences. There was a time when……
6. When it comes to this, one of my own experiences naturally flashed on my mind.（谈及此，我脑海的自然闪现一次经历）
7. A piece of memory, which always kept me convinced of that topic, never fades away.
8. Never in my mind have I experienced such an unforgettable things like this in my life. Dating back to the time when I was a middle school student……
9. Memories came crowding into my mind.
10. The memory never fades in my mind when it comes to this topic.
11. Under no circumstances will I forget the time when I had a tough life in Senior 1.
末段首句：结题——照应第一段，结束议论，升华主题
1. From the story we can draw the conclusion that……从以上故事，我们可以得出结论：
2. From this story, I am definitely convinced that……从这个故事中，我相信了……
3. From my personal perspective, I hold that……从我个人观点来看，我认为
4. We can learn from my experience that……从我的经历来看，
5. As has been illustrated above, ……正如上文所叙述的，
6. Based on what I have mentioned above, I can draw a conclusion that……根据以上所提到的，我可以得出结论……
注意：“三段论”：首段解题　中段切题　末段结题
即第一段直入主题，用一句长句，或两三句点题，解释题义，即解题；第二段例举事例，用事例阐明主题，这一段是记叙，也是阅卷老师评判的重点，想得高分的同学们一定要重视这一段的描述、记叙。记叙一般要遵循记叙文叙事的基本程序：发生、发展、高潮和结局，也就是咱们常说的“起承转合”。第三段与第一段照应，首尾呼应，升华主题。