受宠的应用文高考英语作文(课堂PPT).ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,第六级,第七级,第八级,第九级,*,*,命题形式,写作形式,书信类型,多为文字提示；半开放性和提纲式,书信、电子邮件、日记、通知、海报、演讲稿、欢迎辞等,求职信、投诉信、慰问信、建议信、感谢信、道歉信、咨询信等,1,2011-2015,全国,1,卷高考作文,年份,写作主题,具体内容要求,2011,请求学生会帮助（求助信）,咨询预约,2012,竞争参加夏令营（推荐信）,自我推荐：参加意图,2013,请求他人接机（求助信）,人物描写,2014,询问暑假学习计划（咨询信）,活动信息说明,2015,向外国朋友约稿（邀请信）,介绍栏目和写作内容,2,记住以下,用于各种场合的套语喔，它们可以帮你提分哒,3,一、表达“活动安排与目的”,The talent show,whose theme,is“Innovations on Campus”,(,主题,),，,will take place,in our school gym(,地点,),from,8:30,to,11:30 am on April 30th(,时间,).,2.We,are scheduled to attend,the exam on June 7th and,8th.,3.Recently,in order to,improve students writing skills,our school website set up,a new column,called,English Writing,.,4.Last Friday,our class invited an old craftsman to teach,us how to make dough figurines,which was aimed,at/with the purpose of,advocating and promoting the,Chinese culture.,或,aiming to/hoping to/so as to/in order to do sth,上周五，我们班邀请了一位年老的工艺师来教我们如何,做面人，这旨在倡导和弘扬中国文化。,4,二、表达“情绪”,1.Hearing that some foreign students will come to our school for cultural exchange,were,overjoyed/more,than,happy/extremely,excited,.,2.,You cant imagine how excited I was to hear,the musical,is coming to town.,3.,So,anxious am I,that,I cant fall asleep every night.,4.I was,so,excited,that,I,couldnt wait to,open my gift.,5,三、表达,“个人决心与愿望”,1.No matter how far away,or,how busy,we are,we will try to come home for the celebration.,2.I sincerely hope that,my suggestions can be helpful to you.,3.If Im lucky enough to be chosen as,a volunteer,Ill try to,apply all Ive learnt to my work.,4.As long as,we try our best,theres no need,to feel regret for these failures.,四、表达“自信”,Im confident that,Im suitable for this kind of job.,2.,Im sure/convinced that,I can perfectly live up to(,不辜负,符合,)your expectation.,6,五、联系方式：,If you have any questions,please contact me,at,12345678910.,六、最后期限：,Youre supposed to,post your article to us,before,May 1.,七、报名方式：,1),Anyone who,is interested in this activity,should sign,up for it before,May 1.,2),Those who,would like to roll,in,can come to,Students Union or contact us before May 1.,7,其它写作形式,8,DearAmericanGuest,欢迎词写作,假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇,欢迎词,。,写作要点：,1.,表示对客人的欢迎；,2.,介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；,3.,表达对客人的祝愿。,写作要求：,1.,词数不少于,100,；,2.,称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；,3.,不能使用真实姓名和学校名称,9,Dear American Guests,On behalf of,our school,I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky enough to have you here,in the middle of our English Week Activities.,As scheduled,we have,English Talent Show,today.The purpose of this program is to,develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.,The program consists of the following activities,:recitation,singing,word spelling,storytelling and so on.,The show will begin,at two oclock this afternoon at the Student Centre,lasting three hours,.Dear guests,you are welcome to,take part in some activities.I hope we students will benefit from your presence.,I sincerely wish,you a pleasant time with us.,Thats all!,Thank you.,10,记叙文写作,注意事项：,用过去时，以时间为线索展开。,常用,at first,afterwards,at the same time,或,meanwhile,after that,immediately,soon,eventually,等。,2.,避免啰嗦或写成流水账。,对中心事件和最能表现中心思想的地方要详细叙述。,3.,描写故事的常用句型：,I was doing.when.,I was about to do.when.,Tired as I felt,I still kept doing.,Amazed at,.,I.,Not until.did I,leave the hospital.,The moment,I heard the news,I.,On hearing,the news,I.,7),Without,hesitation,I rushed up to him and.,8)He left,without,saying,a word,.,9),It occurred to me that,.,10)All the way we were chatting,singing and laughing,enjoying,the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.,11),Hearing,this,the whole class burst into laughter.,12)Two hours had passed,before,we realized,it.,13)Eventually my hard work,paid,off,.,11,4.,用于,故事升华,的表达：,1),Tired as I was,I never felt so happy.,2),From this experience I have learnt that,questioning can serve as a bridge that helps,us to seek the truth.,3)The activity benefited us a lot.,Not only did it,get us close to nature and give us relaxation,from heavy schoolwork,it,also,promoted the,friendship among us.,4),Not until then did I realize that,words could be,powerful in both positive and negative.,5),Only then did I come to realize that,it was his,suggestions that helped me overcome the,setbacks and achieve my goal.,12,2013,浙江卷,请以“,One thing Im proud of”,为题，用英语写一篇,100,120,个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：,1.,记述事情经过；,2.,简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。,注意：文章的标题已给出,(,不计词数,),。,One thing Im proud of,One possible version,：,One thing Im proud of,I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.,The first day I went to high school,I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis.Amazed at how skilful they were,I was determined to be just as good.Later on,I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques.Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.,I am really proud of this experience,because it helps me realize that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb“Practice makes perfect.”,13,近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查，结果见下图。请根据图示向你的美国朋友,David,介绍介绍调查结果，内容包括：,调查数据,2.,对校车的担忧,3.,你的看法,Recently,a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website.,图表题写作,14,Recently,a survey on,school buses(,主题,),has been conducted,on a website,(,范围,/,对象,),.Now,Im writing to,tell you some relevant information about it.,As can be seen from the chart,only 36.13%of the interviewees trust school buses,while,40.34%of them show their distrust.And still,23.53%of them are not clear about it.,There are some good reasons accounting for,their disbelief.Firstly,they are afraid of abandoned vehicles being used.,T,hey also worry that school buses will be overloaded,saying that,it may lead to serious traffic accidents.,In addition,in their eyes,some school buses are not equipped with safety equipment like safety belts.,From my perspective,effective measures should be taken to ensure,the safety of students.,Yours,Li Hua,Dear David,15,怎样使文章更精彩？,16,失分追因,要点缺失不全面,语法使用不准确,英语表述不得体,词汇句式不丰富,表达啰嗦不简洁,行文逻辑不连贯,卷面马虎不整洁,书写不规范,写作的基本要求（四个词）,切题、完整、准确、连贯,17,具体做法：,1.,高级词汇,2.,带情感的副词,3.,短语代替单词,4.,高级句式,5.,连词,6.,连贯词,18,1.,使用高级词汇,(,高中词汇、短语代替单词,),look at,me,watch,2)a,good/nice,man,3),cant,find,any,way,to,solve,the problem,fail,to,find,a solution to the problem,4)Our school life will be,difficult,.-,5)If,we never give up,we,may,succeed,finally.,As long as,.,we,are more likely to achieve,success in the end.,6)Developing a good habit,is,also,important,.,.,is,also,of importance.,7),More and more students,take their phone to school.,An increasing number of,students.,8)As the number of English learners is,increasing,，,its not difficult for them to understand these words,in Chinese contexts.,on the rise,glance,at,kindhearted/generous/easygoing,challenging,19,常见高级写作词汇必备,1,第一first,to begin/start with,2,第二second,in addition/whats more,3,第三，最后,finally,last but not least,4,总之in a word,to sum up/in conclusion/in summary,5,但是but,however,6,机会chance,opportunity,7,选择choice,alternative,8,考虑consider,take into account/consideration,9,充足enough,adequate,10,影响effect,influence,20,11,最终,finally eventually,12,勤奋,hardworking diligent,13,帮助,help assist,14,后果,result consequence,15,应该,should be supposed to,16,缺点,shortcoming drawback,17,理解,understand make sense of/figure out,18,可用,useful available,19,使用,use employ/make use of,20,种类繁多,all kinds of a wide range of,21,21,也；和,as well as in addition to/apart from,22,反对,be against object to,23,厌烦,be bored with be fed up with,24,忙于,be busy in/withbe occupied in/with,25,发生,happen occur/come about,26,几乎不,hardly barely,27,提高,improve promote,28,重要,important vital,29,立即,immediately in a flash,30,不可能,impossible out of the question,22,31,有趣,interesting absorbing/striking/appealing,32,参加,join participate,33,幸运,lucky fortunate,34,巨大,large enormous,35,许多,many a large quantity of,36,明显,obvious apparent,37,丰富,rich abundant,38,小心谨慎,be careful be cautious,39,与,不同,be different from differ/vary from,40,渴望做,be eager to do be dying to do/long to do,23,41,因为,because of on account of,42,闻名,be famous for have a reputation for,43,正在建设,being built under construction,44,感到舒心,feel comfortable feel at ease,45,在我看来,in my opinion as far as I am concerned,46,美化学校,make our school beautiful beautify our school,47,故意,on purpose deliberately/by design,48,置若罔闻,refuse to listen to turn a deaf ear to,49,成功做某事,succeed in doing sth.make it,50,无法描述的美丽,too beautiful to describe beauty beyond description,24,51,一个表现好的孩子,a child who behaves in a proper way,a wellbehaved child,52,节能的房子,a house which saves energy an energysaving house,53,一位受到良好教育的妇女,a woman who has received good education,a welleducated woman,54,精心组织的活动,an activity that is organized well,a wellorganized activity,55,一个爱好和平的人,a person who loves peace a peaceloving person,25,2.,使用带情感的形容词、副词,You,patiently,taught me how to write articles.,2)Here,Im writing to thank you for sending me,such,a,wonderful,gift and give you a,special,gift,in return.,3)Thank you for your,generous,help.,4),Unfortunately,I lost my wallet on my way home.,26,3.,使用状语，,with/by/despite/in spite of/because of/,as a result of,等介词短语,带高级词汇的目的状语,例：,I go to the library.,After,school/During the summer vacation,I,often,go to the school library with my best friends by bike to borrow some,books,.,In order to meet the demands of broadening my horizon and enriching my knowledge,after school/during the summer vacation,I often go to the school library with my best friends by bike to read,books,newspapers and magazines.,27,to broaden ones horizon,to enrich one knowledge/school life,to meet the demands of,to get close to nature,to relax one brains,to build up confidence,to beautify the environment,to get a better understanding of,28,(1),合并句子,(,丰富结构),_can I improve my oral English _I learn some customs in western countries.,_,，they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons._，they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun.,(2),改变语态,(,避免单调),Besides，I am a book,lover and the books _,that they are as good as new.,(3),使用省略,(,达到言简意赅的效果),If so/possible，please keep quiet about it because we want to give him a surprise.,Not only,For one thing,but also,For another,are so well kept,4.,高级句式,29,(4),使用强调句型,(,突出语意),_ affect the children,s healthy development.,(5),使用倒装句,(,增强说服力),_a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.,(6),使用虚拟语气,(,提出建议，委婉表达，易于接受),She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.,(7),使用with结构,(,丰富句式),The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring，,_,It is overprotection and too much care that,Only when we match our words with actions can we make,with the sun shining and birds singing,30,(8),使用状语从句,(,强调谓语或句子),_,，they were always available.,(9),使用定语从句,(,表意丰富),However，I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time，,_,(10),使用名词性从句,(,体现扎实的语言功底),_,children are the focus of families,，shouldering the hope of their parents.,Whenever I had difficulties,which was of vital importance for me,It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that,31,(11),使用非谓语动词,(,不定式、现在分词、过去分词以及动名词的使用，可使句式多样化),Whats worse，they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake，,_,These days，,_ are not uncommon,，,_ life and the environment.,totally ignoring the noticeable sign No Littering nearby,breaking traffic rules and littering,causing serious harm to,32,多种表达,明天在会上要讨论的问题很重要。,(,简单句,)The problem is very important.It will be discussed at the meeting tomorrow.,（并列句）,The problem is very important,and/so,it will be discussed at the meeting tomorrow.,（定语从句）,The problem,which will be discussed,at the meeting tomorrow is very important.,（非谓语作定语）,The problem,to be discussed,at the meeting tomorrow is very important.,（句型：结果状语）,The problem is,so,important,that,it will be discussed at the meeting tomorrow.,33,5.常用的过渡句式(黑体部分)：,Firstly,.Whats more/More,o,ver,.Most importantly,.,Obviously,a good learning habit can help us to speed,up to reach our destinations.,4),To make matters worse/whats worse/Worse still,，,it,became dark.,5),Meanwhile/At the same time,I will regard it as my duty,to keep our environment clean and healthy.,6),Take,Beijing,for example,it is one of the oldest cities in,the world.,7),What is more serious is that,we dont cherish wildlife.,8),From my perspective,they stand for love,，,friendship and unity.,9),However,not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser.,34,英语演讲比赛,英语辩论赛,英语才艺表演,英语话剧表演,英语歌唱,英语诗歌朗诵,讲英语故事,激发英语兴趣,提高英语水,平,英语口,语,书面英语,1.English speech contest,2.English debate,3.English Talent Show,4.English play,5.singing English songs,6.English poem recitation,7.storytelling,8.stimulate/motivate their,interest in learning English,improve their English level,spoken/oral English,written English,与英语有关的表达,35,