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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,IELTS Writing,-Catherine,第1页,第1页,Introduction,时长：60分钟,A类：小作文、大作文,B类：书信、大作文,评分：9分制,Task 1、Task 2,第2页,第2页,写作常见问题,（1）题目看不懂,（2）没想法：有想法胡扯；观点抽象，写不下去；,（3）分论点主次不分，或者考官无法接受论点(文化差别),（4）语法不通，表示不地道,第3页,第3页,对 策,尝试用不同方法写同一个句子，练习句子多样化表示,多样化：同义词替换，词性改变，主语从句利用，强调句利用，there be句型利用，倒装，插入语，伴随状态,第4页,第4页,段 落 结 构,段落（paragraph）是由表示单一中心思想（controlling idea or central idea）一组句子构成，是文章结构基本独立单位。,主题句topic sentence,推展句supporting sentences，结论句concluding sentence,第5页,第5页,主 题 句,位置,关键词（详细）：控制和限制段落发展；阐明段落发展办法,第6页,第6页,原句：He can fix a bicycle himself.,修改：,He can fix a bicycle himself,in several ways.,There are,several reasons,why he can fix a bicycle.,练习：She tries to improve her looks.,第7页,第7页,推 展 句,主要推展句：围绕段落主题句展开每一个推展句本身都不要求作进一步阐明或证实，句与句之间关系是互相独立又是互相连接。,第8页,第8页,（主题句）There are several factors affecting climate.,（推展句1）One factor is the a mount of sunlight received.,（推展句2）Altitude,or the height above sea level,also determines climate.,（推展句3）The oceans have an effect on the climate of adjacent land.,（推展句4）In addition,climate is influenced by the general circulation of the atmosphere.,第9页,第9页,次 要 推 展 句,次要推展句是指对主要推展句作进一步事实分析和举例阐明。它从属于某一个或某几种推展句。,第10页,第10页,I dont teach because teaching is not easy for me.,Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living:mechanic,carpenter,writer.,For me,teaching is a red-eye,sweaty-palm,sink-stomach profession.,Red-eye,because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up preparing.,Sweaty-palm,because Im always nervous before I enter the classroom,sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am.,Smoking-stomach,because I leave the classroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual.,第11页,第11页,段 落 发 展 方 法,列举、举例、对比、分类、因果分析,第12页,第12页,过 渡 词,解释：,now,in addition,for,in this case,furthermore,in fact,The problem,in this case,is hard to solve.,第13页,第13页,强 调,Certainly,indeed,above all,surely,most important,Indeed,a dessert is always enjoyable.,第14页,第14页,转 折,But,however,although,though,yet,except for,Yet there was still a chance that he would win.,第15页,第15页,举 例,for example,for instance,a case in point,such as,The point is best illustrated with the example of,The point can be confirmed by the example of,第16页,第16页,补充、递进,In addition,furthermore,also,moreover,yet,顺序,First,second,third,afterwards,meanwhile,thereafter(在那以后),last,finally,eventually,第17页,第17页,比 较,类 比,：,Similarly,likewise,the same is true of,对 比,：,While,whereas,by contrast,instead,on the other hand,第18页,第18页,让 步,Although,of course,after all,clearly,still,yet,nevertheless,结 果,Therefore,as a result,consequently,then,thereby,thus,hence,accordingly,so,otherwise,第19页,第19页,总 结,To sum up,finally,in conclusion,at last,in short,in a word,in the long run,第20页,第20页,结 论 段,重复中心思想,做出结论,第21页,第21页,Thank you!,第22页,第22页,