求助信建议信.doc

求 助 信
第一部分自我介绍，简述自己所遇到的困难或困境。阐述自己所需要的帮助。
第二部分具体解释自己的处境，并请求对方提供帮助，详细说明所需要的帮助。说服读信人答复并同意自己的要求。说明时间期限。
第三部分希望早日得到帮助。表示感谢。必要时提出答谢方式，如金钱。最后留下自己的联系方式。
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Dear ______ ,
①I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.
②The reason for ______is that ______（给出原因）.
③I ______ , so I ______（给出细节）.
④I would also like to request ______（提出进一步的要求）.
⑤I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.
⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests.
⑦If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at ______（电话号码）.
⑧I look forward to a favorable reply.

范例：
Dear Uncle,
　How are you?
　Next week an English speaking contest will be held in the city. A classmate of mine and I will take part in it on behalf of my school. I am excited but also nervous, because it is a good chance to improve my English. But I have no experience. Although I have been preparing for the contest, I am still not confident. As an expert in English, what would you advise me to prepare for the contest?
　I plan to pay a visit to you this Saturday morning. I wonder whether you will be free then. If not, could you tell me the time that is convenient for you? I am eager to get your instruction. I will appreciate any of your help.
Your niece,
　　 Yang Mei

就家长反对自己集邮写一封求助信
假如你热衷集邮，但家长并不支持，于是你向一个学生心声的专栏写信咨询解决的办法。内容包括：
1.你的观点：集邮可以增长知识…（至少2点） 2.家长反对理由：…
信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数
范文欣赏：
Dear Sir，
I’m a Grade-Two student in a senior high school. I’m writing to ask for advice about the conflict between my parents and me.
I’ve always been fond of collecting stamps since I was a child. As far as I’m concerned，collecting stamps is a meaningful hobby, helping me to know a lot. Besides，dealing with my collection of stamps not only gives me great satisfaction but also helps me relax under the great pressure of studies. What’s more，my collection will be more valuable as time goes by.
However, my parents are strongly against it, thinking (or: for they think) it is a waste of money and they also think that sorting out my stamps may take up too much of my time, which should be spent on my studies.
I don’t want to argue with them any more. Could you help me out? Looking forward to your early reply!
A Worried Reader

假设你叫张华，现就读于加拿大的Toronto University。你的室友不讲卫生，休息时间大声播放音乐，随意动用他人物品，常带朋友喝酒喧闹。你为此深感苦恼，写信给好友李明求助。
注意：
1．信的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
2．词数：100左右。
3．可以适当增加细节．使文章意思连贯。
4. 参考词汇：卫生 sanitation
Dear Li Ming,
    I am studying in Toronto University in Canada. Now I have a problem, which always troubles me, so I want to ask you for help.
    Tom, who is one of my roommates, never pays attention to sanitation, leaving his things out of place. As he likes music, he often plays music loudly while others are having a rest. What's worse, he often brings some of his friends to our room to drink, talking and laughing so loudly that we can't have a good rest. Besides, what you can't imagine is that he is always using others’ daily things without permission.
   I have no idea what to do next. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua

建 议 信 (Letter of suggestion)
一、简介
(1) 建议信写作注意事项
写作目的是提出建议或忠告。不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
(2) 写作方法
① 首段：1. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；2. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：1. 提出具体建议；2. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则变成投诉信；
3. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文，因为内容与议论文相似。
③ 尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。
二、结构
第一部分：说明写信的目的
(1) 来信收到，得知你下个月要对中国进行一次为期十天的访问，我建议……
I have received your letter saying that you plan to have a visit to China for ten days next month. I recommend that……
(2) 写此信是要提出我对饭店管理进一步提高和改进的建议——建立我们自己的网站来吸引更多的客户。
I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our
hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients.
第二部分：介绍详情、提出建议
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that ……
May I suggest that……
In my opinion ……
I would like to make a recommendation that …
I am writing to advise you of ……
If I were you, I would ……
第三部分：提出希望采纳建议，盼望回复
请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.
建议信模板
Dear ,
① I am very ______ to know that . ① 写信的原因
② I'm looking forward to . ② 表示欢迎
③ I'm afraid that . ③ 表述建议理由
④ I'd like to suggest that first……then _ . ④ 提出建议
⑤ I believe this kind of arrangement will________________ ⑤ 有说服力
⑥ Moreover，if _____________ , ⑥ 补充建议
⑦ It is necessary for you to . ⑦ 提出建议
⑧ With_______________you will . ⑧ 建议理由
⑨ Wish_____________________________ ⑨祝愿
范文欣赏：
A Letter to a Schoolmate
June 23rd, 2001
Dear Xiao Wang,
I am very glad to know that you are soon coming to Beijing to join me in the summer holiday. I 'm looking forward to your arrival. If you can stay in Beijing only for a week, I am afraid that you will have a tight schedule for visiting a number of places of historic interest. I'd like to suggest that you first visit some famous places that you have the greatest interest in, such as
the Palace Museum, the Summer Place（颐和园）, the Great Wall; then you can visit those places you think less important. I believe this kind of arrangement will make you have enough time to appreciate（欣赏）what you really want to see. Moreover if you really want to be a good traveler, It is necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture. I am eager to meet you soon in Beijing. Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing.
Best wishes!
Yours ever,

你堂兄建华在国外学习，你们经常用英文通信，他即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。
请根据下列提示回信。
1. 建议他回国。2. 你的理由是：学有所用，就业容易，照顾父母。
注意，词数100左右，右开头语与落款已为你写好。

Dear Jian Hua,
  I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are majoring in is badly needed nowadays in China. Personally I think it quite easy for you to find a good job here. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I believe it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I insist it’s a good idea for you to return and serve your motherland.
So what are you waiting for?
Best wishes.
                                  Jing Hua

假如你是李明，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点：
焦虑症状: 头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等
建议: 1．考前制定好合适的复习计划; 2．考试期间正常作息;
3．睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠;其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定)
注意：词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。参考词汇：头晕—dizzy(adj.)
Dear editor,
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.

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