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学生双语报。辅导测评周刊 高三湖北专版 第十期 短文写作
题目：近日《中国青年报》就“你是否支持严厉的家教”进行了问卷调查，其中55%的调查对象表示支持， 他们认为严厉的家教是保证孩子成长的必要条件；45%的人表示反对，认为严厉的家教剥夺了孩子们的乐趣，给孩子太多的压力，不利于孩子们的成长。请你就此话题用英语写一篇文章，描述大家的观点，发表自己的意见。
注意：1 词数 120左右 2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
提示单词：调查对象respondent

参考范文：Recently,a survey on “Do you support strict parenting?” was carried out by the China Youth Daily. 55% of the respondents support strict parenting ,because they think it is necessary for parents to help their children face the fierce competition and put them on the way to their future success through strict parenting .However , 45% are against it .They think strict parenting will deprive children of fun and bring them too much stress , which is obviously harmful to them .
In my opinion , it is necessary for parents to be strict with their children in some cases ,
because children are not old enough to distinguish between right and wrong .Many children have been spoiled or even have done something seriously wrong because of a lack of strict parenting .But parents should communicate with their children equally and gently .

学生作文 （张云）
Recently ,the China Youth Daily has mad a survey about the given topic “ whether you support the strict parenting ” . But different people have different opinions .
55% of the respondents hold a supporting attitude towards it .They think that strict parenting
is a key when children are growing , which can help them grow healthily , and some of them said what children need is strict parenting . But 45% of the respondents hold the view that strict parenting is that it not a good way to bring up children . What they consider is that it can prevent children from looking for their interest , The chances that children's pressure will increase
are that their parents may be too strict with them . As we all know , it is harmful
to children's growth ,therefore ,they disagree it .
In my opinion , strict parenting is necessary ,but we should have a limit
好句子
1 The China Youth Daily has made a survey about whether you support strict parenting or not.
2 The reason is that they think strict parenting is good for children development .
3 The fact is that it will deprive children's interest and children will be tired of this life .
4 As far as I am concerned , strict parenting is necessary to educate children effectively .