Unit5-Nelson-MandelaWriting市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件.pptx

Unit5 Nelson Mandelawriting1/32课型:人物介绍写作课教学目标:经过这节讲授,让学生掌握怎样用英语介绍人物.重点:讲授描写人物惯用句型和步骤.难点:灵活利用所学词汇及句型写一篇短文.2/321.be born in a poor family出生贫穷家庭2.attend school 上学3.at the age of 在岁时4.during his childhood在他童年时5.sense of humour幽默感 相关短语相关短语3/326.be always ready to总是乐于7.modest and honest谦虚老实8.be regarded as被认为是9.have a gift for在方面有天赋10.work hard at致力于4/3211.devote ones life to致力于12.graduate from 从毕业13.take an active part in主动参加14.open-minded and optimistic乐观开朗15.be admitted to被录用;考入 5/3216.go abroad for further studies出国深造17.be honored for因而受到尊敬18.dream of being a writer梦想成为作家19.make contributions to对做出贡献20.have a strong interest in对有浓厚兴趣6/321.When he was a boy,he showed a great interest in maths.他小时候就对数学非常感兴趣。2.Born in a small town in 1812,Charles Dickens was able to attend school for only two years owing to his poor family.查尔斯狄更斯于18出生在一个小镇,因为家里穷,只上了两年学。相关句式相关句式7/323.As a teacher,she is kind,helpful and patient,so all of us like her.作为一名教师,她善良、助人而有耐心,所以我们都喜欢她。4.Wang Ping,an 18-year-old girl from Class 3,Senior 3,loves reading books.王萍,来自高三三班一个十八岁女孩,热爱读书。8/325.She is always ready to help her fellow classmates improve their reading.她总是她总是乐于帮助同学提升他们阅读。乐于帮助同学提升他们阅读。6.She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country.她为科研献出了一切她为科研献出了一切,对国家作出对国家作出了巨大贡献。了巨大贡献。9/327.He is considered to be one of the greatest scientists in China.他被认为是中国最伟大他被认为是中国最伟大科学家之一。科学家之一。8.She was awarded the Nobel prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievement.她因在化学方面科研成就被授予了诺贝尔她因在化学方面科研成就被授予了诺贝尔奖。奖。10/32How How dodowewedodothe the Basic Basic WritingWriting?11/32题材突破：人物介绍题材突破：人物介绍 人物介绍普通包含姓名、性格、人物介绍普通包含姓名、性格、外表、年纪、头衔、教育背景、人外表、年纪、头衔、教育背景、人生经历、所取得成就或所获奖项、生经历、所取得成就或所获奖项、评价等。写人物介绍时惯用到以下评价等。写人物介绍时惯用到以下技巧：技巧：12/321.职位头衔职位头衔:用同位语，年纪性别与家用同位语，年纪性别与家境也可用同位语。如境也可用同位语。如:Sun Shuwei,a world champion in diving(一位跳水世界冠军一位跳水世界冠军),is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.(同位语同位语)Im Li Hui,a girl of sixteen(一个一个16岁女孩子岁女孩子).13/32同位语一个名词或其它形式，跟在另一个名词或代词后并对其进行解释、说明或限定，这个名词或其它形式就是同位语。同位语与被它说明先行词格要一致，而且前后两项所指相同,句法功效也相同。14/322.介绍出生介绍出生:介绍出生时间、地点和介绍出生时间、地点和家境用分词结构家境用分词结构,使文章更简练。使文章更简练。如如:Yao Ming,born in Shanghai in 1980(1980年出生于上海年出生于上海),is a world famous basketball player.15/32 Born on the 18th of January,1979 in Taiwan,Jay Chou,a famous singer,was brought up by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.分词结构分词结构 同位语同位语身份与身份与生平生平尽可能用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简练，通顺尽可能用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简练，通顺讲解：16/32练一练：Madam Curie is a great scientist.居里夫人是伟大科学家，生于波兰，1867年11月7日。2.Abraham Lincoln,was born in Kentucky on February 12th,1809.阿伯拉罕.林肯，1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州一个贫困家庭。Born in Poland on November 7,1867,the son of a poor family,17/323.描写外貌描写外貌:巧用巧用with短语。如短语。如:My English teacher is a beautiful lady,with long hair and big eyes(她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发).18/32练一练：3.She is good-looking 她长着长头发，很好看。4.Born in Germany,Einstein is a great scientist 爱因斯坦出生在德国，是一位有着非凡想象力伟大科学家。with long beautiful hair.with anextraordinary imagination.19/324 4.教育经历教育经历(注意尽可能注意尽可能用非谓语动用非谓语动词词,使文章精炼使文章精炼)如；如；中山大学英语系毕业后，她出国深造。中山大学英语系毕业后，她出国深造。Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University,she went abroad for further studies.20/32练一练：5.Southwest Agricultural College in 1953,Dr Yuan went on further study on rice.袁隆平博士于1953年从西南农业大学毕业，然后深入研究水稻。Graduated from21/325生平(尽可能用复合句倒装,非限制性定语从句等，润色文章)如；1）她不但对科学感兴趣，她不但对科学感兴趣，而且对音乐有天赋而且对音乐有天赋.Not only is she interested in science,but also she has a gift for music.22/322)只有这么，我们才能逐步提升我们 英语听力和口语。Only in this way can we gradually improve our English listening and speaking.23/326生平(尽可能用复合句倒装,非限制性定语从句等，润色文章)如；凭着无比决心和毅力，他花了37年完成了这本书，为这个领域作出重大贡献。With great determination,he spent 37 years finishing the book,which makes a great contribution to China.24/327评定（注意利用一些动词动词,形容词形容词等短语，词组）如；雷锋为我们树立了个好榜样，人们都高度赞扬他，尊敬他。Leifeng set us a good example,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him.25/32基础写作（共1小题；满分15分）你接收了一项写作任务，要为汕尾日报写一篇关于海丰历史名人彭湃英雄介绍。【写作内容】请依据以下信息，介绍彭湃这位历史英雄。（1）彭湃是海丰当地人，出生于1896年10月22日，他是中国历史上一位著名人物。（2）年轻时他曾在日本留学过几年并在那里学到了很多新知识。（3）回国后他组织了农民运动（peasant movement），使得大量农民取得自由。（4）他在农民运动中起着非常主要作用，又被称为中国“农民运动英雄”。（5）1929年，他不幸被抓但他宁死不屈。26/32范文：Peng Pai,a native of Haifeng,born on October 22th,1896,was a famous people in the history of China.When he was young he had been studying in Japan for a few years where he learnt a lot of new knowledge.27/32He organized the peasant movement after he came back to China,which helped a large number of peasants get their freedom.He played an important part in the peasant movement for which he was called“the Chinese hero of peasant movement”.Unfortunately,in 1929 he was caught by the enemy but he would rather die than give in.28/32二、话题写作二、话题写作基础写作基础写作 依据以下信息用英语写一篇短文介绍袁隆依据以下信息用英语写一篇短文介绍袁隆平教授。平教授。基本信息基本信息1.19371.1937年年9 9月月7 7日出生于重庆一个贫困家庭。日出生于重庆一个贫困家庭。自幼刻苦学习自幼刻苦学习,酷爱农业科学；酷爱农业科学；2.2.自从自从1953 1953 年大学毕业以后年大学毕业以后,他已经研究他已经研究水稻近半个世纪水稻近半个世纪,一直在为世界农业默默耕一直在为世界农业默默耕耘。耘。29/32主要成绩主要成绩1.因为他研究因为他研究,我国水稻产量快速增加我国水稻产量快速增加,为很多国家处理了粮食不足问题为很多国家处理了粮食不足问题;2.他被誉为他被誉为“杂交水稻之父杂交水稻之父”;3.即使他很知名即使他很知名,不过他过着简单生活，不过他过着简单生活，不计名利。不计名利。30/32 Born in a poor family in Chongqing on September 7,1937,Yuan Longping studied hard,showing great interest in agriculture.As a matter of fact,since his graduation from university in 1953,Yuan has done research on rice for over half a century,devoting all his time and energy to the study of agriculture.31/32Because of his research,Chinas rice production is increasing rapidly,solving the problem of the lack of food for many countries.As a result,he is honored as“Father of Hybrid Rice”and was rewarded with many prizes for his great contributions to the world.Though he is famous,he lives a simple life and cares little about money and fame.32/32