1、英英 语语 新课标(新课标(RJRJ)七年级下册七年级下册整整 体体 感感 知知实实 例例 分分 析析本单元的写作话题是本单元的写作话题是“描述人物外貌描述人物外貌”。下下面面我我们们一一起起根根据据本本单单元元有有关关人人物物外外貌貌的的词词汇汇及及句句型型,结合实例学习一下如何描述人物外貌。结合实例学习一下如何描述人物外貌。话题分析单元主题写作九单元主题写作九整 体 感 知请你根据提示,以请你根据提示,以“My father”为题写一篇短文。为题写一篇短文。提示:提示:1.职业:教师职业:教师 2.外貌:英俊、圆脸、有点瘦、中等身高、短短的直发、大外貌:英俊、圆脸、有点瘦、中等身高、短短的
2、直发、大 眼睛、戴眼镜。眼睛、戴眼镜。3.性格:友好、和蔼。性格:友好、和蔼。要求:要求:1.短文须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥。短文须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥。2.60词左右。词左右。典型例题单元主题写作九单元主题写作九实 例 分 析下面我们就结合实例加以分析。下面我们就结合实例加以分析。写作介绍人物方面的短文时,一般必须写出两个方面:写作介绍人物方面的短文时,一般必须写出两个方面:一是外貌特征,二是性格特征。本文可以分为四个层次:一是外貌特征,二是性格特征。本文可以分为四个层次:1.引出人物;引出人物;2.外貌特征;外貌特征;3.性格特征;性格特征;4.总括全文。总括全文。思路点拨单元主题
3、写作九单元主题写作九(1)提示结构图提示结构图思路点拨单元主题写作九单元主题写作九(2)根据图示写出相关联的句子根据图示写出相关联的句子 引出人物:引出人物:My father is XX years old.He is a teacher and he teaches in a high school.外貌特征:外貌特征:He is handsome and a little thin.He is of medium height.He has a round face and two big bright eyes.He often wears glasses.性格特征:性格特征:He i
4、s friendly and kind to his students.His students like him very much.思路点拨单元主题写作九单元主题写作九My fatherMy father is 40 years old.He is a teacher and he teaches in a high school.My father is handsome and a little thin.He is of medium height.He has a round face and two big bright eyes.He often wears glasses.M
5、y father is friendly and kind to his students.His students like him very much.I love my father.单元主题写作九单元主题写作九连句成篇请根据提示,写一篇题为请根据提示,写一篇题为“Our monitor”的短文,介绍一的短文,介绍一下你们的班长。下你们的班长。提示:班长:李敏,提示:班长:李敏,2001年年6月月8日出生日出生 外貌特征:又高又瘦、大眼睛、黑色的长直发外貌特征:又高又瘦、大眼睛、黑色的长直发性格特征:和蔼,友好性格特征:和蔼,友好 爱好:体育运动,读英语书爱好:体育运动,读英语书 要求:
6、要求:1.短文须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥;短文须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥;2.词数:词数:60词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。单元主题写作九单元主题写作九自我展示单元主题写作九单元主题写作九Our monitor Li Min is our monitor._ _One possible version:Our monitorLi Min is our monitor.She was born on June 8th,2001.She is 13 years old now.Li Min is a beautiful girl.She is tall and thin.She has a round face with two big bright eyes.She has long straight black hair.Li Min likes sports and she plays sports with us after school.She likes reading English books.Shes kind and friendly to us.She gets along well with every classmate.We all like her.单元主题写作九单元主题写作九