letterofthanks313.pptx

Letter of thanksAmy8Problems?I just dont know how to write it.Dont worry!Lets learn!Step1:Standard for evaluation划档：划档：13-15/10-12/7-9/4-6/1-3/01.1.评分使先根据评分使先根据文章内容文章内容和和语言语言初步确定档次，然后再按初步确定档次，然后再按要求适当调整给分。要求适当调整给分。2.2.词数（词数（60-100）,100的总分中再扣除的总分中再扣除2分分3.3.评分时注意的主要内容：评分时注意的主要内容：要点要点，词汇词汇和和语法结构语法结构的丰富的丰富性和准确性以及上下文性和准确性以及上下文连贯性连贯性。4.4.标点和拼写标点和拼写也是语言准确性的一个方面，须予以考虑。也是语言准确性的一个方面，须予以考虑。5.5.如果如果书写书写较差以至影响交际，分数降档。较差以至影响交际，分数降档。写作格式写作格式 format第一段：第一段：表达感谢表达感谢之情并之情并说明原因说明原因；第二段：第二段：细述细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；并赞赏对方给与的帮助；第三段：第三段：再次阐述谢意再次阐述谢意并表达并表达回报回报愿望。愿望。Vocabulary：(感谢感谢)v.thank,appreciate;n.thanks,gratitude,appreciation;adj.thankful,grateful,appreciative.obliged adj.感激的感激的Step2:letter of thanksPhrases：因而感激sb.1.thank you for 2.appreciate ones doing 3.be grateful/thankful to sb.for 4.express my thanks/gratitude for 5.Owe(欠欠)sb.a lot for 6.be indebted to sb.for Step3:layout of a letter of thanksErrors in yours:1.For Barry:2.To Barry.3.Dear Barry:4.(no title at the beginning or no signature in the end)Correct!Dear Barry,.Yours sincerely,Li HuaStep3:layout of a letter of thanksDear Barry,How is everything going?I am writing to you to.Looking forward to your reply!Yours sincerely,Li HuaYou can use it in every letter!Step4:beautiful sentencesopening I am writing this letter to thank you for I am writing to express my sincere thanks for I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt (adj.衷心的衷心的)thanks to you for With deepest gratitude I write you this letter for I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for Step4:beautiful sentencesdetails It was your kind help that (强调句型强调句型)It was nice/kind/thoughtful(adj.考虑周到的考虑周到的)of you to.Remember to cover all the key points as required!Step4:beautiful sentencesending Thanks again for your generous help.I appreciate it more than I can say.My true gratitude is beyond the words description.I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.Please accept my sincere thanks for your help,which I will never forget.Step4:coherence(连贯性)First,/Firstly,Secondly,/Then,/After that,In the end,/Finally,Meanwhile,/Whats more,/In addition,/Besides,/Furthermore,上次作业题目：假定你是高二学生李华，暑假参加了再墨尔本的姐妹学校Yerra Valley Grammar的游学活动。回国后给host family的小伙伴Barry 写一封感谢信，要点如下：1.感谢他们一家的照顾，2.分享游学的体会，3.询问寄给他们的礼物是否收到，4.邀请他们一家来中国玩。注意：词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Step 6:possible version Step 7:writing templateDear _，I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for _(感谢的原因感谢的原因)If it had not been for your assistance in _(对方给你的具体帮助对方给你的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been _(没有对方帮助的后果没有对方帮助的后果)Everyone agrees that it was you who _(给出细节给出细节).Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely，Li Hua Practice makes perfect!Step 8:practice 在这两年多的高中生活中，13班这个大集体已经成为我们的另一个家。我们一起经历了分班，运动会，篮球赛等等，在这个大家庭里，肯定有你想要感谢的同学或老师，现在请你写一封感谢信给那个他/她，内容包括：感谢的原因具体事件等细节邀请他/她国庆节有空去你家玩。注意：80词左右，可以适当增加细节使行文流畅。Amys versionDear class,I am writing to thank you for your companionship for more than a school year.I still remember when I first met you,you all wore big smiles.This summer,I heard some of you felt sorry that I might not teach you.I was a little moved because I did have some feeling for you even if sometimes you would make me angry.So I am glad I can teach you again now.I hope you can get a good grade in coming exams.Thank you again!Yours,AmyThank you!