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雅思写作如何强化重点
在雅思写作中，考生经常会遇到写作抓不住重点的问题。即使背了很多模板，以及众多写作技巧之后，照旧会有句子无重点的问题。今日我给大家带来了雅思写作如何强化重点,期望能够关怀到大家，一起来学习吧。
雅思写作如何强化重点
首先，强化重点的技巧可以将作文核心句的摆放位置，就是考生常见的把想强调的内容放在句首或句尾。通常句首是最惹眼的局部，考官更简洁接收到考生所想要强调的重点。此外，把重点放在句尾也不失一个很好的方法，可以引导考官把全句通读，才能看到重点。这样能够加强考官对你的写作遣词造句的力量有一个综合的评价。可以从下题例子看出：
重点放句首：Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers ‘attention.
重点放句尾：The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of civilization.
其次，强化的技巧就是句法上用倒装来强调。对于雅思写作而言，最强调的就是句型的多变，假设考生只用一招来应对强化句子重点的话，很难取得写作高分。因此，除了放在句首句尾这种简洁的技巧之外，考生应当把握在冗杂句中如何强化重点。对于冗杂句的构成是主句加从句，所以假设要强化重点的话，考生可以把主句移到从句的后面。通常，除了名词和形容词从句之外，由于位置比较固定，所以不能移到从句的后面。像副词从句和短语，就可以把主句放在从句的后面，进展强化作用。看下面例子：
I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday.
副词从句中主句放后面：
When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old classmate.
Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability.
副词短语中主句放后面：
Because of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools.
然后，假设考生想进一步突出雅思写作中的句子重点，可以将句子中一系列的工程做规律性的排列，进展重点的突出。换句话说就是把你所要强调的内容进展排序，例如大小，日期，年龄等排序。就好比爬楼梯一样，指引考官依据你的规律性排列一步一步看到你想表达的重点。如下例：
Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed.
Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education?
接下里，强化重点的技巧可以利用倒装完成。除了上述雅思写作技巧之外，还可以对你想要强调的重点进展重复。确定不是单纯的重新写一个单词这么简洁。对强调的重点需要对句式的把握，以及合理的语法布置。这样可以强化考官印象，加强中心思想的稳固。可以看下面例子作为参考：
...the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.
最终，强化重点的技巧还可以重复进展实现。考生可以依据自己对语法把握的程度，进展倒装句和平行句的运用。通过对句子进展倒装和平行，可以把想要强调的重点提到最适宜的位置，让考官更直接的看到考生所想表达的重点，而且还会让句子种类变得丰富起来。其实有效的倒转和平行，可以更精炼句子，能够在雅思写作中取得高分。来看看下面的例子。
Seven dwarfs lived here in the center of the dark forest.
改写为：Here, in the center of the dark forest lived seven dwarfs.
雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文
Some people insist that senior workers 65 or over should retire but others believe that they should continue working.
What is you opinion?
Model Answer:
Over the past few decades [In the past], there have been many advances in medical technology. Because of this, senior citizens are healthier and more active than before and may choose to work beyond the age of 65. Nowadays, however, there has been a growing debate as to whether or not these people should retire in order to create jobs for the younger generation. Despite the advantages of early retirement, I strongly believe that it is better for senior workers to continue working as long as they are physically and mentally capable.
Those who believe that senior workers need to retire for younger generation base their case on the following arguments. First, the unemployment rate, especially for college graduates, has never been so high so it is today. This is largely due to the slow economy. Therefore, firing some elderly workers who are well-paid would allow those unemployed young people to have good opportunities to get a job. In addition, replacing older workers with young people would bring greater benefits to companies [=employers]. This is because youngsters are better at adapting themselves to fast changing information based society. They are generally better at computers and speaking foreign languages than their older counterparts.
Nevertheless, people should not ignore the fact that senior citizens have been playing vital roles both at home and at work for their entire lives. To begin with, a young persons need for a job is no more important than an older persons. Both have a responsibility to support their families. Sadly, few seniors can afford early retirement. Besides, senior workers provide the wisdom and experience that young employees cannot offer. There is strong [=acute] possibility of situations arising that require the knowledge of skilled senior employees.
In summary, the advantages of keeping seasoned workers far outweigh its disadvantages. There are high hopes that employers exercise wisdom [=caution] in dealing with this issue.
雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文
Childrens lives these days are quite different from our generations. Describe what are the biggest changes in younger generation and explain some factors of this phenomenon.
Model Answer:
Over the past few decades, the world has significantly changed. Nowadays, many have begun to wonder what the reasons behind [=for] these changes are. Two major factors contributing to this phenomenon are advances in media and change family dynamics [=organization].
First, advances in media, such as the Internet and TV, have meant that children spend a large portion of their leisure time in front of a screen. Consequently, they are not getting proper amounts of exercise, which results in an increase in the number of children who are overweight and obese. In addition, fast food restaurants have become increasingly popular, which has also contributed to childrens health problems
Moreover, another leading force of this trend is changes in the family unit. Compared with a half century ago, nuclear families have become way more common in modern society. People tend to have only one child, which has caused personality disorders such as depression, loneliness, and selfishness. This is mainly because parents with one child have tendency to put all their focus and money into their only son or daughter. Studies have indicated that over 65% of children who are brought up without siblings show self-centered behavior find it difficult cooperating with their peers.
In summary, there are many factors that have caused children to live very differently from the generation before them. There are high hopes that parents exercise(s) wisdom in treating their children.

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