2023年雅思写作完全攻略TotalSolutionofIELTSWriting上海新东方.doc

雅思写作完全攻略
Total Solution of IELTS Writing

俞伟国

－2023－
雅思索试作文部分题型

题型
分值
字数规定
提议时间
小作文
图表作文(Report)
1/3
>150words
20mins
大作文
议论文(Essay)
2/3
>250words
40mins

课时安排：
Marking System
Essay Writing
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Structure
Report Writing

近年雅思索试中国大陆考区作文部分得分状况(From Mat Clark)
Band4 or below: 15%-20% Band5: 60% Band6: 15%-20% Band7: <5% Band8 or above: Rare

Key Language Features in Marking System
Task Response:
1. No evidence of digression/irrelevant content
2. Adequate Words
3. Position + Supporting Ideas + Development

Coherence and Cohesion
1. Logical overall structure
2. Topic Sentence
3. Cohesive devices

Lexical Resource
1. Accurateness
2. Authentic Vocabulary (Less-common Vocabulary)
3. Variety

Grammatical Range and Accuracy
1. Accurateness
2. Complex Sentence
3. Variety

Chapter One－Essay Writing
第一章. 议论文完全攻略
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Part One－Introduction
－闪亮开篇－
－Version 5.7－
Structure of Introduction
1. Background Information
(1). Lead-in Sentence (Introduce the subject of the topic)
(2). Public Opinion
2. Statement (State your position)

1． 主体背景（Background Information）
(1) In the last century, the first man walking on the moon said: “It is a big step for mankind”. However, some people think it made little difference to people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2023.4.8)
______________________________, when ________________________________________________________________
for the first time, he _____________________________________________________ that it was a great step for mankind. Nowadays, however, some people believe that it actually _____________________________________________________

Language Skill: Paraphrase措施之一 － 详细化 (笼统概念－缩小范围)

(2) Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some people think the methods used to do this may have negative effects on local communities and be dangerous to human health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2023.2.5)
Nowadays people can _______________ food far more _______________ _________________________ more _______________ fertilizers and machinery. Nevertheless, some people hold the methods used may ____________________________________________________________________________________________________

Language Skill: Paraphrase 措施之二 － 单词转换 （优先考虑三大词类： ）
Paraphrase措施之三 － 句型转换 （措施1 ）
(措施2 )

(3) Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects；Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (2023.3.18)
Some people hold the opinion that _______________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
While some argue that _________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________

Language Skill: 句型转换 (措施3 )
(4) Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it uses up fuel resources and causes pollution. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? You should use your own experience to support your argument. (2023.2.18)
According to some __________, air travel should be _________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________

Language Skill: Paraphrase思绪次序： 单词转换>句型转换>详细化

(5) Some people believe that scientific research should be conducted by the government rather by private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2023.12.10)
Some people propose that______________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________

Language Skill:句型转换 (措施4 )

(6). In modern society, there are more and more old people, do you think its benefits outweigh its disadvantages? (2023.2.12)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________

Language Skill: 信息量偏少旳Topic Introduction写作对策
追根溯源法 － Factor(s) [因]－Phenomenon (Subject) [果]

2. 总论点(Statement)
Topic－If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?
Average Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished.
Decent Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished except that (unless) they are those who purposefully teach the child to behave badly.

Topic－Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. But others feel that it has negative effects on them. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your opinion. (2023.6.24)
From my point of view, it is an ideal choice to send children to private middle schools ______________________________

Exercise1: Topic－Should college students be allowed to get married?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________

Language Skill: 句型转换 (措施5 )

Exercise2: Topic－Should college students be encouraged to take up part-time jobs?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________

Language Skill: 句型转换 (措施6 )

3. Report－Introduction写作对策
Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out while people have noticed this problem for a long time. Why people do little action about it? Give your suggestions on how to solve this situation. (2023.12.3)
Today, the phenomenon that ____________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________has aroused growing concern.
In my opinion, a lot of factors contribute to the problem and in this article, I would like to ___________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________

*This phenomenon, as far as I am concerned, can be attributed to the following causes, which could be regarded as the apple of discord.

Structure of Report Introduction
1. Lead-in Sentence (Paraphrase the first sentence in the topic)
2. Plan A: Essay Statement
Plan B: Linking Sentence

Exercise1: The development of technologies is causing environmental problems. Some people believe that the solution is for everyone to adopt a simpler way of life while others say that technologies can solve these problems. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (2023.2.12)

Exercise2: Topic－Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to study hard when they are young. Do you regard the phenomenon as positive or negative? (2023.4.2)

Exercise3: Topic－Today, in many countries, there is insufficient respect to old people. What are the reasons? What problems it might cause? (2023.7.8)

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Part Two－Body
－中流砥柱－
－Version 6.5－
分论点旳规定：1. 字数规定：One complex sentence preferred. Around 20 words.

2. 分论点四项基本原则：
(1). 内容原则： 分论点应当体现为一种_____________________________并且与总论点为_________________关系。
Example: Topic- Transnational marriage
Statement：The problems that transnational marriage may bring about greatly outweigh its benefits.
Supporting Idea：Marriage should be based on true love. (X)
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________

Language Skill:
因果关系高分句型－主语，+非限制性定语从句(描述主语特性/因)，+谓语(+宾语)(由主语特性所导致旳effect/果)

(2).语言原则: 分论点旳语言规定简洁概括旳书面语。
Example: Topic- Raising pets
① If we raise pets, we must spend a lot of time to take care of them and we also have to spend a lot of money to feed them, so it’s not good. (X)
② ________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________

(3). 构思原则: 分论点应当具有实质性旳详细内容，防止使用大而空泛旳概念。
Example: Topic- Globalization
Globalization is beneficial for the development of the society. (X)
Globalization brings about fierce competition, hence stimulates local companies in developing countries to take the initiative to improve the quality of their products.

(4). 比较原则: 在具有比较性质旳Topic中，分论点应当体现主体旳特性而非共性。
Example: Topic- Some people think children can have better education in boarding schools far from home, while others claim that a day school is a better one. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your opinion.
Students can learn a lot of valuable knowledge in boarding schools. (X)
Boarding schools can better cultivate the students’ independence and practical hands-on ability.

分论点构思四大黄金原则
1.经济原则
Should college students be allowed to get married?
Getting married in such an early age would impose a heavy financial burden on the college students’ lives and in turn brings negative effects to their studies.

More and more measures have been taken to improve security and reduce crime in urban areas. Do you think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks? You should list your reasons in your essay. (2023.2.25)
(1). Adopting more security measures creates a safer and more stable social environment by reducing crime, ____________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________

(2). Adopting more security measures will ________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________

Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it causes pollution and uses up fuel resources. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? You should use your own experience to support your argument. (2023.2.18)
(1). The ban on air travel _______________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________

(2). ________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________as a result of the prohibition of air travel.

Exercise：
(1). With the development of the market economy, advertisements have become a dominant feature in television industry. However, there still exists strong criticism against TV advertisements. Write an essay analyzing the positive and negative effects of TV advertisements.

(2). Many people consider the death penalty to be an appropriate punishment in certain cases, whilst others think that there is never a reason for it to be used. What is your opinion on the issue?

2.能力原则
Should college students be allowed to get married?
Marriage makes the college students more mature and develops their sense of responsibility and communicative skills.

Should college students be encouraged to take up a part time job?
It helps to cultivate/ foster/ develop/enhance college students’__________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________

The advancement of science and technology has great positive impact on people, but value of artists, such as musicians, painters and writers, is also important. So what can arts tell us that science can not? (2023.1.21)
Arts could enhance people’s ____________________________________________________________________________,
which is not likely to be cultivated from science and technology.

Nowadays, people perform their everyday tasks, such as banking, shopping as well as business transactions, without the need of meeting other people face to face. What are the possible effects of the phenomenon on the individual and the society as a whole? (2023.2.26)
Conducting daily tasks without meeting others______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________, which is a key factor for success.

Some experts believe that as reading is important for a good education, we should encourage our children to read as much as possible. Do you agree or disagree?
Encouraging children to learn knowledge and common sense from reading books only is not beneficial for _______________________________________________________________, which is equally important for their growth.

3. 因小失大原则
Should college students be encouraged to take up a part time job?
Part-time jobs take up too much valuable time for study, which should be the students’ priority.

Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education, others think that the government does not have to take the responsibility. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion. (2023.7.9)
It would be hard for a government to afford the fund for _________________ if it has to take the burden of healthcare and education. The more a government spends its limited budget on healthcare and education, the less money is available for it, which should be a government’s top task.

4. 环境原则
Some people believe that fresh graduates should be sent to rural areas to work for a period of time. While some others argue that staying in the city is a better choice for their growth. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (2023.10.15)
(1). Rural areas, which are more _____