概要写作visit-the-college.pptx

IlostaSamsungdigitalcameraontheeveningofSeptember9th,2018,intheEnglishreading-roomonthe4thfloorofthenewlibrary.Lost具体时间，具体地点，丢了什么东西Thedigitalcameracanbegenerallydescribedasfollows:Itisbrandnewandsilvergrayincolorwithablackleathercoat.Whatsmore,thecameraisasbigasapieceofcakeandaslightasaregularmobilephone.Itisbrandnewwithsilvergraycoverandablackleathercoat,insidewhichstoresmanywonderfulphotosofsportsplayersinourshool.学会用with短语和定语从句来描述事物Thiscameraisabirthdaypresentfrommybestfriend,solosingitupsetsmealot.MynameisLiHuaTatanytime.Thankyouverymuch!2018年年11月概要写作月概要写作-visit collegesItsareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.Theresnoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwontbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsarentgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyoudliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudontlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldntknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.Itsachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors(倾问)，anditwontcostyouapenny!Y.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircanttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyoudliketoattend.Itsareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.yourdesiredcollegekey sentenceItsareallygoodideatovisityourdesiredcollegesbeforeyoumakeadecisiontoapplyforthem.uWhichwordsdontneedtoberestated?colleges,applyforthem同义转换同义转换1.Itisofgreatnecessitytopayavisittoyourdreamcollegesbeforeyoureachaproperdecisontoapply.2.Itisdefinitelyworthwilevisitingcollegesbeforedecidingonidealonestoapplyfor.amust3.Itshighlyrecommendedtovisityourlongingcollegesbeforeyouapply.同义词：visit-payavisittodesired-dream/ideal/longingmakeadecision-cometoaproperdecisionreacharightdecisiondecideonidealcolleges1.Itwillhelpalotifyoupayavisittocollegesbeforeapplication.2.Itisagoodideato.(.是一个好主意)3.Itisadvisabletopayavisittocolleges.4.Itishighlyrecommendedtopayavisitto.5.Itwouldbewisetovisitcollegesbefore.6.Itisofgreatnecessitytopayavisittocollegesinadvance.7Itwillbebeneficialifyoupayavisittocollegesinadvanceandmakeawisedecision.复习“建议”经典句型Theresnoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwontbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!KeysentenceTheresnoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea,becausealotofcollegeapplicationswillwish/encourageyouto.Theresnoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea,becausealotofcollegeapplicationswillencourageyouto.下划线直接表达成：下划线直接表达成：visityourlocalcolleges改写要点句改写要点句1.Youaresupposedtovisityourlocalcolleges,whichislikelytobeincludedinapplications.“应该应该”的表达方式的表达方式1.Wearesupposedto.2.Weareadvisedto.3.Weareexpectedto.4.Wearerequiredto.5.Wearerecommendedto.Theresnoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea,becausealotofcollegeapplicationswillencourageyouto.改写要点句改写要点句2.Itisamustforyoutovisityourlocalcolleges,becausemanyapplicationswishyouto.3.Youarehighlyrecommendedtovisityourlocalcolleges,whichisinvolvedinmanyapplications.Ifcampusvisitsarentgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyoudliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudontlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldntknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.u本段要点与前一段要点的区别？如果不能够申请之前参观，至少要在录取通知书到来之前去参观。KeysentenceIfyoucantvisititbeforeapplication,youshoulddoitbeforetheacceptancelettersarrive.Ifyoucantvisititbeforeapplication,youshoulddoitbeforetheacceptancelettersarrive.改写要点句改写要点句1.Ifyoucantvisititbeforeapplication,youaresupposedtomakeitbeforebeingadmitted.2.Anyway,ifyoucantmakeitbeforeapplication,itisacceptabletodoitbeforeyoureceivetheadmissionletter.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.Itsachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors(倾问)，anditwontcostyouapenny!Y.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircanttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyoudliketoattend.KeysentenceIfyouareshortoftimeandmoney,checkingouttheonlinecollegefairswillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecision.Ifyouareshortoftimeandmoney,checkingouttheonlinecollegefairswillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecision.改写要点句改写要点句1.Ifyouareshortoftimeandmoney,visitingonlinecollegefairsisbeneficialforyoutomakeawisedecision.2.Ifyoulacktimeandmoney,itisapracticalwaytogaininformationfromonlinecollegefairstohelpyoureachawisedecison.Ifyouareshortoftimeandmoney,checkingouttheonlinecollegefairswillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecision.综合全文，综合全文，help you make an informed decision这一目的可以替换成这一目的可以替换成helpyoubetterunderstandcolleges.AnewkeysentenceIfyouareshortoftimeandmoney,checkingouttheonlinecollegefairswillhelpyoubetterunderstandcolleges.改写要点句改写要点句1.If youlackmoneyandtime,visitingonlinecollegefairsisagoodalternativetohelpyoubetterunderstandcolleges.2.Inthesituationwherestudentsareshortoftimeandmoney,visitingonlinecollegefairsisahelpfulapproachtohavingabetterunderstandingofcolleges.文章结构文章结构第一段：全文第一段：全文main idea:visit colleges连接词：连接词：Undoubtedly；Actually；Particularly第二段：事实：必须要第二段：事实：必须要visit local colleges连接词：连接词：However;第三段：退一步：至少要在录取前第三段：退一步：至少要在录取前visit连接词：连接词：Step back again第四段：再退一步：可以网上了解信息第四段：再退一步：可以网上了解信息theproblemsinwritingForstudentswhoareshortofmoneyandtime,registeringonlineisagoodalternativetohelpyoubetterunderstandschools.1.整篇文章，人称始终保持一致！整篇文章，人称始终保持一致！Forstudentswhoareshortofmoneyandtime,visitingonlinecollegefairsisagoodalternativetohelpthembetterunderstandschools.参考范文参考范文1(第二人称第二人称)Applyingtocollegesisanimportantdecisioninyourlife,soyoushouldvisitthecollegesyouwanttoattendinadvance,especiallywhentheyarenearwhereyoulive.However,ifyoucantmakeitbeforeapplication,youshoulddoitbeforetheacceptancelettersarrive.Stepbackagain,ifyoudohavenotimeormoneyforit,visitingtheonlinecollegefairscanalsohelpyoumakethewisedecision.参考范文参考范文2(you)Itisofgreatnecessitytopayavisittocollegesbeforedecidingonanidealonewhenapplyingforacollege.Particularly,itisamusttovisityourlocalcolleges,becausemanyapplicationsencourageit.However,ifyoucantmakeitbeforeapplication,itisacceptabletodoitbeforeadmissionletter.Stepbackagain,inthesituationwhereyoulacktimeandmoney,visitingonlinecollegefairsisalsoahelpfulapproachtohelpingyoumaketherightdecision.Applying to colleges is an important decision in your life,so you should visit the colleges you want to attend in advance,especially when they are near where you live.If you cant make it before application,you should do it before the acceptance letters arrive.Finally,if you do have no time or money for it,visiting the online college fairs can also help you make the right decision.高考参考答案：高考参考答案：主旨句主旨句 1+4个要点个要点 参考范文参考范文3(第三人称第三人称)Itsreallyworthwhileforstudentstopayavisittotheirdesiredcollegespersonallybeforeapplying.Undoubtedly,studentsshouldvisittheirlocalcolleges,whichmaybeincludedinapplications.Atleast,theyshouldvisittheschoolandfigureoutitsrealconditionsinadvance.Forstudentswhoareshortofmoneyandtime,registeringonlineisagoodalternativetohelpthembetterunderstandschools.Tip：注意理清各个要点间的联系。：注意理清各个要点间的联系。本次概要本次概要4个要点不是递进关系，而个要点不是递进关系，而是退而求其次的关系。是退而求其次的关系。学生作文学生作文1学生作文学生作文2学生作文学生作文3学生作文学生作文4学生作文学生作文5学生作文学生作文6