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高考英语作文专项训练高考英语作文专项训练-图表式作文一一.高考作文总攻略高考作文总攻略审题审题体裁、人称、时态、要点（注意隐含要点）要点扩充要点扩充what/why/how/causes&effects行文行文结构、主题句、语言（句式、中高级词汇）、连接、平衡卷面卷面字体、整洁、舒服语言基础词汇、语法、句式、篇章经常训练-背诵、模仿、领悟形成习惯-自我风格我我的的作作文文我我做做主主Step1认识图表认识图表表格表格Table2006200720082009Food,drink and clothing40%35%30%25%Transport and entertainment10%15%20%25%Education and housing30%35%38%40%others20%15%12%10%yearitem某地区居民近某地区居民近4年的消费变化年的消费变化曲线图曲线图LineGraph记忆规律曲线图记忆规律曲线图BarChart/Graph柱形图柱形图/条形图条形图某校某校2006-2009年学生中拥有年学生中拥有QQ号人数的调查号人数的调查25%housing 18%food&drink22%food&drink32%housingotherother (a)Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 1997 (b)Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 2002饼状图饼状图PieChart下面表格是某地区居民近下面表格是某地区居民近10年的消费变化，请根年的消费变化，请根据要求写一篇文章，要求描述变化并得出结论，据要求写一篇文章，要求描述变化并得出结论，词数词数100左右。左右。1998200020032007Food,drink and clothing40%35%30%25%Transport and recreation10%15%20%25%Education and housing30%35%38%40%others20%15%12%10%Step2范例引路范例引路范例引路范例引路关键词：关键词：show,change,fall/increasefromtoondecrease/onrisereasonsononehandontheotherhand扩写句子扩写句子Showchangefall/increasefromtoAsisshownfromthetablegreatchangeshavetakenplacetheexpensesonfood,drinkandclothingfellfrom40%to25%Theexpensesontransportandrecreation,educationandhousinghavebeenonriseondecrease/onrisereasonsononehandontheotherhandThereasonsareasfollowsPeopleslivingstandardhasbeenimprovedpeopleattachedmuchmoreimportancetoeducationandlivingconditions.连句成篇连句成篇Asisshownfromthetable,greatchanges_inpeoplesexpensesfrom1998to2007.Theexpensesonfood,drinkandclothing_from40%in1998_25%in2007.Onthecontrary,theexpensesontransportandrecreation,educationandhousinghavebeen_.Fortheformer,only10%wasspentonitin1998,buttherate_in2007.Thesamealsogoesforthelatter.Therate_from30%in1998_40%in2007.Fromtheabove,wecanseethatpeopleslivinglevelhasbeenrisinggreatlyinthepast10years.Thereasonsareasfollows:ononehand,peopleslivingstandardhasbeenimproved.ontheotherhand,peoplepaidmuchmoreimportancetoeducationandlivingconditions.Asisshownfromthetable,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinpeoplesexpensesfrom1998to2007.Theexpensesonfood,drinkandclothingfellfrom40%in1998to25%in2007.Onthecontrary,theexpensesontransportandrecreation,educationandhousinghavebeenonrise.Fortheformer,only10%wasspentonitin1998,buttheratedoubledin2007.Thesamealsogoesforthelatter.Theraterosefrom30%in1998to40%in2007.Fromtheabove,wecanseethatpeopleslivinglevelhasbeenrisinggreatlyinthepast10years.Thereasonsareasfollows:ononehand,peopleslivingstandardhasbeenimproved.ontheotherhand,peoplepaidmuchmoreimportancetoeducationandlivingconditions.第一步：第一步：点明主题点明主题第二步：观察图表中数据的第二步：观察图表中数据的 增减总趋势，分类式阐明增减总趋势，分类式阐明第三步：说明原因，第三步：说明原因，得出结论得出结论.一、开头一、开头 简要描述图表，点明主题简要描述图表，点明主题 Describing二、正文二、正文 分析数据分析数据 Analyzing 三、结尾三、结尾 说明原因，得出结论说明原因，得出结论 Coming to a conclusion Step 3 总结规律总结规律 图表式作文写作分图表式作文写作分三步三步：A recent survey shows that in todays society,Chinese young peoples life goals have become more diverse than before.When young people are asked what they will struggle for,more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.In addition,some people,about 44%,describe their life goal as improving their life quality or to be a rich person while 23.9%of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.As for how to achieve their life goals,more than 70%prefer to realize their dreams by working hard.The survey shows that peoples life goals have become more and more practical.第一节基础写作（共第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分小题，满分15分）分）请根据以下内容为学校英语报写一篇报道。最近，我国教育专家对我国中学生所喜爱的节日进行了一项调查，北京和广州的1000多名中学生接受了调查。结果表明，80%的中学生知道我国的春节等传统节日，50%的学生最喜爱的节日是春节，学生对其他节日的喜欢情况如下：【写作内容】1调查的时间、对象和调查内容；2调查的主要数据；3调查结果表明：80%以上的学生知道我国的春节等传统节日；年青人也很重视洋节日。【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。Recently some Chinese educational experts did a survey among more than 1000 students from Beijing and Guangzhou on their favorite festivals.About half of the respondents choose the Spring Festival as their most favorite.Next comes Christmas Day and Mothers/Fathers Day,with 20%and 10%respectively.However,Mid-Autumn Day accounts for less than 10%.From the survey,we can see although over 80%of the students are familiar with our traditional festivals,like the Spring Festival,more and more young people favor the foreign festivals.写作步骤写作步骤ProcessWriting1.罗列关键词罗列关键词(Listing)2.展开关键词展开关键词(Developing)3.打草稿打草稿(Drafting)4.修正稿修正稿(Revising)5.定稿定稿(Editing)开头常用句型：开头常用句型：1.Asisshowninthechart,.2.Thegraph/chart/tableaboveshowsthat3.Fromtheabovegraph/chart,itcanbeseenthat.分析数据常用句型：分析数据常用句型：1.Therewasagreat/slightincrease/risein2.Itdecreased/fell/increasedfromto3.Thenumber/ratehasnearlydoubled,说明原因常用句型：说明原因常用句型：1.Thereasonforisthat2.Thereasonsareasfollows:3.Thereareseveralcausesforthechange:Firstofall,.besides,whatsmore.请根据对某校请根据对某校2004-2007年这段时间学生中拥有年这段时间学生中拥有QQ号人数的调查写一篇文章，要求描述变化并号人数的调查写一篇文章，要求描述变化并得出结论，词数得出结论，词数100左右。左右。Step3实战演练实战演练Asisshowninthechart,therateofstudentswhoownQQsincreasedinthepastfouryearsfrom2004to2007.Backin2004,only20%ofthemhaveQQs;oneyearlater,theratebecomestwicelarger;comparedwithabout50%in2006,theratein2007roseto60%.Clearly,itistendingtoincrease.Thereasonsareasfollows:foronething,thewidespreaduseoftheInternetmakesitconvenientforstudentstocommunicatewitheachother.Foranother,QQprovidesallkindsofentertainments,suchasplayinggamesandenjoyingmusic.Whatsmore,QQhasgraduallybecomethemainmeansforthepublictoknowthelatestnews.Personally,studentsshouldmakeproperuseofandnotbeaddictedtoQQ,andonlysocanitserveitspurposebeautifully.根据下面所给两幅图根据下面所给两幅图,完成完成100词左右的一篇短文词左右的一篇短文(首句已首句已给出给出).参考词汇参考词汇:expenses(n.)支出，费用支出，费用25%housing 18%food&drink22%food&drink32%housingotherother (a)Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 1997 (b)Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 2002 The Average Family Expenses The average family income in the u.s.has increased._Step4课后练习课后练习 The Average Family Expenses The average family income in the U.S.has increased.The way the average family spends its income has also changed.In 1997,25 percents of the income was spent on housing and 18%on food and drink.57%was used to meeting other expenses.In 2002,32%was spent on housing,a big increase.Food and drink consumed 22%.The remained expenses amount to 46%.Its clean from the charts that as incomes increase people can afford to live more comfortably and eat much.The Average Family Expenses The average family income in the U.S.has increased.The way the average family spends its income has also changed.In 1997,25 percents of the income was spent on housing and 18%on food and drink.57%used to meet other expenses.In 2002,32%was spent on house,a big increase.Food or drink consumed 22%.The remained expenses amount to 46%.Its clear from the charts that with incomes increase people can not afford to live more comfortably and eat much.1_2_3_4_5_6_7_8_9_10_itspercentwashousingandremainingasmorenot浙江省浙江省2010届高三第一次高考调研考试试题届高三第一次高考调研考试试题下面的柱状图（barchart）显示了不同年龄段孩子与父母谈心的情况。根据上图信息，请以“Heart-to-HeartTalkswithParents”为题，用英语写一篇100120个词的短文。要求如下：1.简要描述图中信息；2.说明原因（如忙于学习或工作、缺少共同话题）；3.谈谈你的看法。注意：文章的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）。Heart-to-HeartTalkswithParentsAsisshowninthebarchart,_三三.新题领航新题领航Heart-to-HeartTalkswithParentsAsisshowninthebarchart,childrenspendlesstimehavingheart-to-hearttalkswiththeirparentswhentheygrowolder.Forexample,whilethe7-9agegroupspendsasmanyas6hoursperweekonaverage,the16-18agegroupspendsonlyhalfthetime.Therearetwomajorreasonsforthis:bothparentsandchildrenaretoobusyworkingorstudying,andtherearentmanytopicsofcommoninterestforthemtotalkabout.Inmyopinion,childrenshouldlettheirparentsknowmoreaboutwhattheyareinterestedin.Atthesametime,parentsshouldspendmoretimetalkingwiththeirchildrenandsharingopinionswiththem.Onlyinthiswaycantheybetterunderstandeachother.第一步第一步，开门见山点明本图表所反映的开门见山点明本图表所反映的主题主题并结合图表并结合图表举例举例说明。说明。第二步第二步，分析本图表所反映的主题所产生的分析本图表所反映的主题所产生的原因原因。第三步第三步，归纳归纳总结总结或发表或发表评论评论（个人看法）（个人看法）（如果有必要）（如果有必要）图表式作文总体思路（图表式作文总体思路（视命题要求而定视命题要求而定）Heart-to-HeartTalkswithParentsAsisshowninthebarchart,childrenspendlesstimehavingheart-to-hearttalkswiththeirparentswhentheygrowolder.Forexample,whilethe7-9agegroupspendsasmanyas6hoursperweekonaverage,the16-18agegroupspendsonlyhalfthetime.Therearetwomajorreasonsforthis:bothparentsandchildrenaretoobusyworkingorstudying,andtherearentmanytopicsofcommoninterestforthemtotalkabout.Inmyopinion,childrenshouldlettheirparentsknowmoreaboutwhattheyareinterestedin.Atthesametime,parentsshouldspendmoretimetalkingwiththeirchildrenandsharingopinionswiththem.Onlyinthiswaycantheybetterunderstandeachother.AsisshowninthebarchartTherearetwomajorreasonsforthis:Inmyopinion,Forexample,andAtthesametime,whileOnlyinthiswaycantheybetterunderstandeachother.Asisshowninthebarchart(thetable/graph/picture),goesup/increases/drops/decreasesfrom_in_to_in_.Therearetwomajorreasonsforthis(accountingfor_):.,and(Ononehand,_._.Ontheotherhand,_._)Inmyopinion,(AsfarasIamconcerned,)Onlyinthiswaycan.(Soitisnecessary/beneficial/importantthat)下面是我国1985至2008年，学龄儿童就学百分率分布图。说请根据图上所显示的数据以“School-agedChildrensAttendingSchool”为题用英语写一篇100120个词的短文。要求如下：1.简要说明近年来我国儿童受教育情况的变化。2.说明原因（如经济发展、政府对教育更加重视）；3.谈谈你的看法。四四.即学即练即学即练Asisshowninthebarchart,thepercentageofschool-agedchildrenattendingschoolhasbeenincreasingfrom1985to2008.In1985therewereabout96%school-agedchildrenattendingschoolwhilethepercentagereachedmorethan99%in2008.Whyhavethesechangestakenplace?Tobeginwith,theincreasingeconomymakesthegovernmentputmoreattentiontoeducation,moremoneyhasbeenusedtoimprovetheeducationconditions,especiallytosomeruralareaswheretherearestillchildrenthathavedroppedoutofschool.Personally,itsgoingwithoutsasyingthat五五.课后巩固课后巩固 根据所给图表,写一篇题为“Film and TVFilm and TV”的短文。（词数120左右）短文须包括以下要求:1.简要描述图中信息；2.说明原因（如方便、经济、选择范围多）；3.谈谈你的看法。参考词汇参考词汇:film goer/TV watcher:film goer/TV watcher电影电影/电视观众电视观众Number of People(in thousands)(A):Number of TV watchers(B):Number of film goersABFromthetable,wecanseethatfilmisgivingwaytoTVinourcity.Forexample,in1992,therewerelessthan10thousandTVwatchers,morethan80thousandfilmgoers,whilein2002,wehadabout1millionTVwatchersbutonlyabout10thousandfilmgoers.ThenumberoffilmgoersisdecreasingandthatofTVwatchersisincreasing.TelevisionsarequitecommonnowadaysandsomoreandmorepeopleturntoTVbecauseitisconvenientandcheapandwatchershaveawiderangeofprogramsforthemtochoosefrom.AsfarasIamconcerned,IstillpreferfilmsbecauseIliketheatmosphereinthecinemaaswellastheentertainment.Lastweek,weconductedasurveyamong2,600studentsonthetopic“Whoisyouridol?.ThesurveyshowsthathalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsasidols,while48%oftheboysprefersportsstars.Asthedatashows,“parents”ranksthesecondforthegirls,butthefourthfortheboys.However,thepercentageoftheboyschoosing“greatfigures”isthesameasthatofthegirls.Asformyself,“ThomasEdisonismyidolbecausehisinventionshavegeeatlychangedourlife.Deareditor,ImastudentinSeniorThree.Wehavemadeasurvey”Whomdoyouturntowhenintrouble?”Herearetheresults.Accordingtooursurvey,abouthalfofthestudentswillgototheirclassmatesorfriendswhenintrouble.Becausetheyrealmostofthesameage,theyhavealotincommonandunderstandeachothereasily.Aquarterofstudentswilltelltheirteachersorparentsabouttheirtroublesandaskthemforhelp,holdingthatteachersandparentsaretrustworthy,haverichexperienceandalwayslovethem.Thosewhoprefertoseekhelpfromsocietyaccountforaboutonefifthofthetotalnumber,becausetheybelievethesocietyisfarmoreresourcefulinhandlingtheirproblems.Comparedwiththeabove,onlytenpercentofthestudentsprefertosolvetheirproblemsallbythemselvesastheyarereluctanttocommunicatewithothersandcantgetonwellwithothers.Inmyopinion,whenintroublewedbetteraskourteachers,parents,friendsorclassmatesforhelp.