高考英语求助信公开课课件.pptx

高考英语求助信公开课课件Lead-inWhat did Harry Potter say when he asked for help?Before writing:假定您就是李华。请您给笔友假定您就是李华。请您给笔友Peter写封信写封信,告诉她您告诉她您叔叔李明将去她所在城市开会叔叔李明将去她所在城市开会,询问她就是否可以接询问她就是否可以接机。信中需涉及如下内容机。信中需涉及如下内容:1、航班号航班号:CA9852、到达到达:8月月6日上午日上午11:303、李明得外貌特征李明得外貌特征4、李华托李明带了一副李华托李明带了一副Peter想要得中国画给她想要得中国画给她注意注意:1、词数词数100左右左右;2、可以适当增加细节可以适当增加细节,以使以使行文连贯行文连贯;3、开头语与结束语已为您写好。开头语与结束语已为您写好。DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?_Lookingforwardtoyourreply、YoursLiHua1、我就是李华。我就是李华。2、我写信告诉您我写信告诉您3、我叔叔李明将去您得城市开会。我叔叔李明将去您得城市开会。4、您能否去接机您能否去接机?5、航班号就是航班号就是CA985(flightnumber)6、她她8月月6日上午日上午11:30到。到。7、李明得外貌特征李明得外貌特征8、我已经让叔叔带了您想要得中国我已经让叔叔带了您想要得中国画给您画给您。(Chinesepainting)attend a meetingpick sb up at the airport1.1.I am Li HuaI am Li Hua、2.2.Im writing to tell you thatIm writing to tell you that3.3.My uncle Li Ming is going to/will go My uncle Li Ming is going to/will go to your city to attend a conferenceto your city to attend a conference、4.4.Can you go to meet my uncle at the Can you go to meet my uncle at the airport?airport?5.5.He will arrive at 11:30am August 6He will arrive at 11:30am August 6、6.6.The flight number is CA985The flight number is CA985、8 8、I have asked my uncle to bring you I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting(that/which)you the Chinese painting(that/which)you wantwant、请注意时态及人称与数得统一请注意时态及人称与数得统一While writing Para 1:Purpose:asking for help Para 2:Body:situation Para 3:Conclusion:express your hope and appreciation1、Paragraph:2、Linking words or sentences:3、Politeness:并列并列:besides,in addition,whats more转折转折:However,On the contrary,but顺序顺序:First of all,First/Second/FinallyPoliteness:1、Send me the book、2、Could you please send me the book?3、I hope you can send me the book as soon as possible、4、I would appreciate it if you could send me the book、5、You should send me the book、7、I wonder if you could send me the book、8、Would you do me a favor to send me the book?(I am Li Hua、)Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to/will go to your city to attend a conference、Would you do me a favor to pick up my uncle at the airport?He will arrive at 11:30am August 6 and his flight number is CA985、He is tall and he has long hair、By the way,I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting(that/which)you want、I would appreciate it if you could help me、polish the passage 1 1、plex sentences(attributive plex sentences(attributive clause,adverbial clause,clause,adverbial clause,nonfinite verb and so on)nonfinite verb and so on)e、g、IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepainting(that/which)youwant、2 2、advanced vocabularyadvanced vocabularye e、g g、:want be fond of:want be fond of3 3、invent some realistic and invent some realistic and reasonable information:ask reasonable information:ask yourself some questions according yourself some questions according to the passageto the passagee、g、HowtomakePeterfindmyuncleeasily?uI will send you the picture of my uncle、uMy uncle will wear a red hat that day、Attention:Its unnecessary to write too much、If you cant make it reasonable and realistic,dont write it down、Check your passage:检查检查单词拼写、时态语态、名词单词拼写、时态语态、名词单复数、标点符号单复数、标点符号等。等。检查检查要点要点就是否遗漏。就是否遗漏。检查检查句子结构句子结构就是否正确。就是否正确。估计估计字数字数就是否符合要求。就是否符合要求。Post-writing大家学习辛苦了，还是要坚持继续保持安静继续保持安静 How to write a good letter for help?Summary四四个个步步骤骤Step 1 Identify overall requirements and list the key points(审题列要点列要点)Step 2 Form a passageStep3、Polish the passage(成文成文润色色)Conclusion:Step4、Check the passage三段法模式三段法模式 第一段第一段:Purpose:Asking for help 第二段第二段:Body:Situation 第三段第三段:Conclusion:Express your appreciation and hope常用句型常用句型:1、写作目得写作目得:Im writing to tell you that2、求助得句型求助得句型:I wonder if you could If it is convenient to you,would you please?Would you do me a favor to?3、表达期待或谢意。表达期待或谢意。Looking forward to(receiving)your early reply、I would appreciate it if you could help me、(I am Li Hua、)Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to/will go to your city to attend a conference、Would you do me a favor to pick up my uncle at the airport?He will arrive at 11:30am August 6 and his flight number is CA985、He is tall and he has long hair、By the way,I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting(that/which)you want、I would appreciate it if you could help me、