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第七讲　精研提纲材料，轻松驾驭提纲作文

(2021·唐山模拟)作为一名高三同学的你，明年即将毕业。现在校报征稿，请依据以下要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的体会和建议。
1．对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢；2.向与自己发生过冲突的同学表达歉意；3.努力学习，实现人生幻想；4.对学弟、学妹的建议。

1．作为一名高三同学，不久就毕业了，现在我有很多事情与同学们共享。
(一般表达)I’m a student in Senior 3 and I’ll graduate soon.Now，I have a lot of things and I’ll share with my fellow students.
(高级表达)(介词短语＋固定句式＋不定式作定语)________a Senior 3 student，____________________I graduate.Now，I have much________my fellow students.
答案：As；it won’t be long before；to share with
2．首先，我想向那些始终支持我，给我挂念和关爱的老师、父母、伴侣表示感谢。假如没有他们的挂念和建议，我的生活就会与现在不一样。
(一般表达)At the beginning，I would like to show my appreciation of help from those who are standing by me all the way，teachers，parents，including friends.If there were no their help and advice，my life would be different.
(高级表达)(过渡语＋分词作定语＋虚拟语气)_______，I would like to show my appreciation of help from ________________ by me all the way，teachers，parents，and ________________.________________，my life would be different.
答案：Firstly；those standing；friends included；Without their help and advice
3．其次，到了向我损害或误会过的同学赔礼的时间了。沟通和微笑充当友情的桥梁。
(一般表达)Then，it’s high time that I should say sorry to my classmates.I hurt or misunderstood them.Communication and smiles are used as bridges to friendship.
(高级表达)(过渡语＋固定句式＋定语从句) ________，________________say sorry to my classmates________________I hurt or misunderstood.Communication and smiles________bridges to friendship.
答案：Secondly；it’s high time to；whom；act as
4．尤其重要的是，我已经下定决心努力学习，由于我信任，努力学习是成功的钥匙，正如古代谚语说的“不劳无获”。
(一般表达)Importantly，I’ve decided to make every effort to study.I believe hard work is the key to success，like the old saying，“No pains，no gains.”
(高级表达)(过渡语＋高级词汇＋缘由状语从句)________________________________to make every effort to study，________I believe hard work is the key to success.________________________，“No pains，no gains.”
答案：Above all，I’ve made up my mind；for；Just as the old saying goes

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One possible version：
High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life.As a Senior 3 student，it won’t be long before I graduate. Now，I have much to share with my fellow students.
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents，and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different.Secondly，it’s high time to say sorry to my classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood.Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all，I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study，for I believe hard work is the key to success.Just as the old saying goes，“No pains，no gains.”
Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no men.
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