短文改错二轮复习市公开课一等奖百校联赛获奖课件.pptx

Yesterday afternoon,I took the No.6 bus to go home.It was crowded on the bus,and I had listened to music by my earphones.Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off,so I got off the bus in hurry.When I arrived home,I realized that I had left my bag on the bus.My ID card and ten books were in the bag.I was worried and eager to finding it,so I went to the bus companies for help.Fortunate,at the Lost and Found,I see my bag.I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag,and the staff there said the person hadnt left his name.How a good man.findcompanyFortunatelysawbutwhatawithwhere第1页第2页Teaching objectives1).To help students learn about the trend of correction in 1).To help students learn about the trend of correction in NEMT;NEMT;2).To let students grasp some skills of finding mistakes;2).To let students grasp some skills of finding mistakes;3).to get students to identify and correct the mistakes in a 3).to get students to identify and correct the mistakes in a compositioncomposition.第3页短文改错并不是单纯检测语法知识，而是检测语篇处理能力短文改错并不是单纯检测语法知识，而是检测语篇处理能力和特定语境中对语言使用进行评价能力。所以，面对改错中和特定语境中对语言使用进行评价能力。所以，面对改错中错误及包括到语法或词汇错误，考生需要依据短文整体语境错误及包括到语法或词汇错误，考生需要依据短文整体语境来进行判断。来进行判断。A brief introduction of proof-readingA brief introduction of proof-reading短文改错选取材料短文改错选取材料结构简单结构简单，句子浅显易懂；，句子浅显易懂；内容贴近内容贴近学生实际生活学生实际生活，谈论都是和学生学习和生活相关话题。，谈论都是和学生学习和生活相关话题。第4页动词形，名词数，动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；还要注意形和副；非谓语，细区分，非谓语，细区分，习惯用语要记住；习惯用语要记住；句子成份多分析，句子成份多分析，逻辑错误需关注；逻辑错误需关注；冠词连词常光临。冠词连词常光临。口诀口诀Skills of doing proof-readingSkills of doing proof-reading第5页1.动词形动词形By the end of last year,my collection has grown to 3,000 words.It was turned out to be her own cup,which she had left on the shelf by mistake.Starting a collection of stamps are easy.The old building,along with many other similar ones,are going to be pulled down.hadisis语态错误语态错误时态错误时态错误主谓一致错误主谓一致错误第6页1.动词形动词形时态错误时态错误语态错误语态错误主谓一致错误主谓一致错误高考链接高考链接lWhen I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said“Thats it.No more toys for you.(课标课标)lThe findings will be use as materials for our research (重庆重庆)lYou,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life （浙江）（浙江）areusedtore第7页绝对不可数名词绝对不可数名词2.2.名词数名词数lChina Daily is very popular among high school student.lMaybe the following advices can help you.students advice名词单复数错误名词单复数错误不可数名词错误不可数名词错误advice,baggage,luggage,furniture,fun,information,news,progress,room(空间空间)lChina Daily is very popular among high school student.lMaybe the following advices can help you.lChina Daily is very popular among high school student.lMaybe the following advices can help you.第8页lI am pleased to hear that you had a greatly time working in a fast-food restaurant.lWhat he said sounded quite perfectly.lUnfortunate,I missed the early train,so I was late.lHis new apartment is much big than before.3.还要注意形和副还要注意形和副greatperfectUnfortunately bigger注意形容词副词比较级和最高级错误注意形容词副词比较级和最高级错误副词修饰动词，副词形容词及整个句子副词修饰动词，副词形容词及整个句子形容词修饰名词，形容词修饰名词，bebe动词，系动词动词，系动词第9页We were growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost.（新课标）新课标）My uncle immediate jumped up and shot their arrows at the bird.(陕西陕西)To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with my younger sister.(浙江浙江)wonderfulimmediatelyworselIt felt very strange to travel without any luggages.（课标）（课标）lThere are two girls from our course and I plan to make friend with them.(宁夏宁夏)3.3.还要注意形和副还要注意形和副luggagefriends2.2.名词数名词数第10页4.非谓语，细辨析非谓语，细辨析lTake a part-time job is a good kind of social practice.lA sad film can contribute to comfort a sad person more than a pleasant one.lThere is a kind of language calling Web language.lIn order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment,China Daily is planning a knowledge contest.Taking 动名词错误动名词错误comfortingcalledattach分词错误分词错误不定式错误不定式错误“to+doing”惯用短语惯用短语contribute to lead to stick to be/get used to devote oneself to get down to look forward to Pay attention to When it comes to第11页4.非谓语，细辨析非谓语，细辨析动名词错误动名词错误分词错误分词错误不定式错误不定式错误高考链接高考链接lShe used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.(新课标新课标)lI also shared with my friends many photos taking in Beijing.(陕西陕西)lAfter think for some time,I let her copy my answers.(四川四川)holdtakenthinking第12页5.习惯用语要记住习惯用语要记住lIm often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes.lI have to ask you a three-day leave.lLuckily,there was no one in the building when the fire break out in.make搭配错误搭配错误for少词少词多词多词第13页5.习惯用语要记住习惯用语要记住搭配错误搭配错误 少词少词多词多词高考链接高考链接lThen everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket.(浙江浙江)lWe can lie on the grass or sit by the lake listening music.(新课标新课标2)lHis beard turned from black toward gray over the years.(新课标新课标)forto to/into第14页6.句子成份多分析句子成份多分析lNews came as Angel had got blood cancer.lAs is known to us that we students of today have to fix our attention on our lessons.lI will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store.thatIt which名词性从句连接代词错误名词性从句连接代词错误名词性从句名词性从句it作形式主语错误作形式主语错误定语从句关系代词错误定语从句关系代词错误第15页高考链接高考链接6.句子成份多分析句子成份多分析名词性从句连接代词错误名词性从句连接代词错误名词性从句名词性从句it作形式主语错误作形式主语错误定语从句关系代词错误定语从句关系代词错误lBut before long they began to see which was happening.(新课标新课标)lHaving tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that might not be served until 8 oclock at night.（新课标）（新课标）whatwhich第16页7.7.逻辑关系需关注逻辑关系需关注lA teacher noticed a boy trying to press a door-bell,but the doorbell was too high for her to reach.lBefore waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatient.him称谓不一致错误称谓不一致错误After前后逻辑错误前后逻辑错误第17页8.冠词连词常光临冠词连词常光临l Watching sad films can make getting over a negative mood a easier job.l China Daily is planning a knowledge contest.A contest starts on October 14th and ends on 31st.lIt took quite a long time to get to the downtown area.Therefore,Mr.Li doesnt seem to worry about the long distance.anThe However 冠词错误冠词错误连词错误连词错误第18页8.8.冠词连词常光临冠词连词常光临It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel.（陕西）（陕西）Although we allow potato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but they have never had any disease.（新课标）新课标）When I was child,you always held me in your arms.（重庆）（重庆）soalI was happy when the toys worked,but when went wrong,I got angry and broke it.(新课标新课标)7.7.逻辑关系需关注逻辑关系需关注them第19页How to correct a composition DosDos 标点符号不改。标点符号不改。大小写不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改词序错误不改（不是不改，而是按错词少词来改（不是不改，而是按错词少词来改)单词拼写错误不改。单词拼写错误不改。Donts 忠实原文标准忠实原文标准（不改变原文原意）；（不改变原文原意）；错误以改动最少为标准。错误以改动最少为标准。Read the passage for the third time,check the answers and correct the difficult ones Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakesGo through the whole passage to get a general idea;Dos and dontsThe steps第20页 It was our English teachers birthday yesterday.I like my English teacher,and so are my classmates.She is nice to us and always tell us stories of the days when she was in twenties.Sometimes she stays at school to help students making up their lessons.However,she always encourages us and tells us to do our best.We are gratefully to her,so yesterday we bought a cake and a gift from her.We even made a big card for her,and on it we wrote all our name.Seeing these,she was moving and had had a big smile on her face.tellshermakedoBesides/Moreover/Furthermore/Additionallygratefulfornamesmoved第21页第22页