1、CompositionfriendMyfriendfaceLongroundsquaresmalleyesbigsmallroundbrightsmillingnoseBigsmalllongshortstraightlooksBeautifulprettyfatcutelovelysmartbigstraightfatlong.MrBoismyfriend,hehasaroundfaceandbigeyes.heisntverytall.HisshorthairmakeshimlooksmartHeishardworkingandstrictwithhimself.whatsmore,hei
2、spaitient,OnceIfailedtheexamandIdidntknowhowtodealwithit.hetalkedwithmethewholeeveningandmadealotofadviceonhowtoimprovemygrades.Withhishelp,ImadelargeprogressImsothankfultohimforhishelpthatIhopewearefriendsforever.What about your friend?MainbodyConclusion结尾开头IntroductionMainbodyConclusion结尾开头Introdu
3、ctionMainbodyConclusion结尾开头IntroductionMainbody主体Conclusion结尾开头IntroductionPart 1 Introduction 开头开头初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束,你的朋友陪伴你度过了三年宝贵的时光。请你用一段话把你的朋友介绍给大家。一,外貌一,外貌1,你的朋友姓名2,写出人物的外貌LookandsayTheyareasblackascoalcoalblackTheyarelikecoalSheisaslovelyasMickeyMouseSheislikeMickeyMouseSheisasbeautifulasaflowerS
4、heislikeaflowerHeisasfatasBaymaxHeislikeBaymax写作技巧写作技巧1:巧用比喻修辞:巧用比喻修辞BelikeAs.as.像。一样像。一样 be like the sun as pure as snow Lets read loudly as clear as crystal as weak as water be like the bee 像蜜蜂像蜜蜂像太阳像太阳像雪一样纯净像雪一样纯净清如水晶清如水晶软弱如水软弱如水Practise1,Thisbasketis_big_thatone.(镇江中考)(A)asthenB)soasC)asasD)noth
5、an-Whodiditbetter,KateorLily?-IthinkKatedidjust_Lily.A.aswellasB.asgoodasC.asbetterasD.asbadlythan(新疆中考)Theclassroomis_clean_ours.(常州中考)A.so;asB.asasC.asthanD.so;than英语和汉语一样重要。(南京中考)Englishis_Chinese.asimportantasPart 1 Introduction 开头开头 一,外貌一,外貌1,你的朋友姓名2,写出人物的外貌MrBoismyfriend,hehasaroundfaceandbige
6、yes.heisntverytall.HisshorthairmakeshimlooksmartPart 2:Main body包括以下内容包括以下内容1、学习努力,严格要求自己、学习努力,严格要求自己2、耐心,帮助我在学习上取得了很大进步、耐心,帮助我在学习上取得了很大进步SheishardworkingandhelpfulSheisnotonlyhardworkingbutalsohelpful写作技巧写作技巧2:连词不再用:连词不再用and增补增补 not onlybut also不仅,而且不仅,而且进阶进阶 whats more而且而且 此外此外 更有甚者更有甚者 whats wors
7、e 更糟的是更糟的是转折转折 while,however 然而然而translation1,Sheisnotonlybeautifulbutalsopolite她不仅漂亮而且有礼貌。她不仅漂亮而且有礼貌。2,Heplaysnotonlythepianobutalsotheviolin.他不仅弹钢琴,还拉小提琴他不仅弹钢琴,还拉小提琴3,sheisagoodteather.whatsmore,sheisagoodmother她是一位好老师,而且她还是一位好妈妈她是一位好老师,而且她还是一位好妈妈4,hefailedtheexam.whatisworse,hisfatherknew.他考试不及格,
8、更糟的是,他父亲知道了他考试不及格,更糟的是,他父亲知道了5,Somepeoplewastefoodwhilehehasntenough.有些人浪费食物,但他却吃不饱PlayagameBlowPingpongWhatsyourfeeling?Itmakesmefeel_thatIplayedthegame.interestedexcitedIwasvery_thatIplayedthegame.happybored写作技巧写作技巧3:事情到感情:事情到感情句型句型It makes sb.feel that It makes me feel happy that.I was very happy
9、 that.同义句转换1,ItmakesmefeelsadthatmyfriendcouldntgoforatripwithmeIwasvery_that_2,IwasveryexcitedthatmyfatherbroughtmearabbitItmakesmefeel_that_sadmyfriendcouldntgoforatripwithmeexcitedmyfatherbroughtmearabbitPart 2:Main body包括以下内容1、学习努力,严格要求自己2、耐心,帮助我在学习上取得了很大进步Heishardworkingandstrictwithhimself.wha
10、tsmore,heispaitient,OnceIfailedtheexamandIdidntknowhowtodealwithit.hetalkedwithmethewholeeveningandmadealotofadviceonhowtoimprovemygrades.Withhishelp,ImadelargeprogressPart 3:Conclusion抒发对朋友的感激之情Im so thankful to him for his help that Ihopewewillbefriendsforever.Composition初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束,你的朋友陪伴你度过了三
11、年宝贵的时光。请你用一段话把你的朋友介绍给大家。2,表现学习努力严格要求自己分享我的快乐保守秘密耐心帮助我学习取得了进步HardworkingpatientbestrictwithsbSharemyjoykeepsecretHelpmemakeprogressinstudy1,外貌描写3,表达感激Howtouse?1,Kateisatallgirl.icantalktoheraboutangthing.Shecankeep_forme.(新疆中考)secret2,healways_(信任)hisfriendsandtellsthemeverything.(镇江中考)trust3_goodsen
12、seofhumourliyonghas.(泰州)AwhataBhowaCwhatDhowA4,Thefilmisntinterestingatall.soifeelb_(郑州)5,thispairofshoes_(适合)meverywelllastyear.(盐城)fitsoredMrBoismyfriend,hehasaroundfaceandbigeyes.heisntverytall.Hisshorthairmakeshimlooksmart.Heishardworkingandstrictwithhimself.whatsmore,heispaitient,OnceIfailedthe
13、examandIdidntknowhowtodealwithit.hetalkedwithmethewholeeveningandmadealotofadviceonhowtoimprovemygrades.Withhishelp,ImadelargeprogressinlearningImsothankfultohimforhishelpthatIhopewearefriendsforever.Myfriend1,外貌描写2,表现学习努力严格要求自己分享我的快乐保守秘密耐心帮助我学习取得了进步 Be friendly to others,you will get more new friends.Get in touch with old friends,you will get more help.Send short messages,write letters,tell your daily stories to your old friends.How colorful your life will be!Homework Write your own letter to your favorite teacher/friends.The endThank you