高级英语景物描写省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。5 basic traits of scenic description 1.Multiple perspectives2.Sensory description3.Dynamic and Static description4.Rhetorical description5.Containing Sentiment in Scenery第1页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。1.Multiple perspectives第2页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。It was early in the morning.The sun was just rising out of the eastern horizon and golden red was going out of the clouds and across the sky.The lakes,the trees and the bamboos looked as ifthey were all gilded.The ground was covered with young grasses and some little water drops stood on their tip with sunshine.The subjectsfrom the far to nearfrom top to bottomfrom broad to narrow第3页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。The Sunshine Rock is the highest place on the island,so it has become the symbol of Gulangyu.Standing at the top of the Sunshine Rock,one can see the landscape of the whole Xiamen ands other small islands.The sky and the sea meet on the horizon.Its said that people can see clearly the Jinmen Island through telescope when the sun is shining.There are gentle waves on the sea and lots of people are swimming.At the foot of the Sunshine Rock is Shuzhang Garden with its picturesque scenery.The Forty-four Bridge spans over the water like a white dragon.What a beautiful picture!From top to bottom第4页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。In the center stands the Monument to the Peoples Heroes.On the east is the Museum of Chinese Revolution and Chinese History and on the west the Great Hall of the People.The Qianmen Gate and Chairman Mao Memorial Hall sit in the south,with Tiananmen Tower in the north.Different direction第5页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。2.Sensory description第6页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Visual description Ex:It was dark and a giant moon lit the road so brightly you could see the landscape clearly.天黑了，一轮巨大月亮把道路照得通明，周围景物能够看得一清二楚。Tactile description Ex:The moss was soft and furry to the touch.苔藓柔软而且摸起来像绒毛。Taste description Ex:A sweet and fresh spring is flowing by the hillside.一股清甜泉水在山边流淌着。第7页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Olfactory descriptionEx:By degrees,the light became impregnated with the perfume of the flowers.夜色里渐渐地充满了馥郁花香。Auditory descriptionEx:Above the noise of the crickets,cicadas and frogs,water babbled and gurgled nearby.在一片蟋蟀、知了、青蛙发出噪音中，潺潺流水在附近流淌。第8页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。3.Dynamic and Static第9页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Dynamic StaticIt was early in the morning.The sun was just creeping(爬)out of the eastern horizon(地平线)and golden red was penetrating(穿透)through the white clouds and across the sky.A gentle breeze came up,wrinkling(使起皱)the surface of the lake.Static Dynamic The spring morning is so quiet.Only birds sing cheerfully and restlessly.第10页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Static StaticThe lakes,the trees and the bamboos looked as if they were all gilded.The ground was covered with tender grass,on whose blades some dew drops were glistening(晶莹剔透)under the sunshine.第11页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Dynamic StaticAfter rained in the empty valley,It become cold as it is Fall,Clear and bright moon cast its light on the pine woods,while creeks flow above the stones.空山新雨后,天气晚来秋。明月松间照,清泉石上流。第12页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。4.Rhetorical description第13页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Alliteration The fair breeze blew,the white foam flewThe furrow followed free.和风吹荡，水花四溅，船儿破浪前进。AssonanceThe curfew tolls the knell of parting day,The lowing herd wind slowly oer the lea.晚钟殷殷响，夕阳已西沉；群羊呼叫归，迂回走草径。第14页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。OnomatopoeiaThe chimneys rank on rank,Cut the clear sky.明净天空被一排排烟囱切割得支离破碎。Ecphonesis(Ecphonema)Never did sun more beautifully steep,In his first splendour valley,rock or hill;Neer saw I,never felt,a calm so deep!晨曦映射金光万道，普照幽谷、岩、山岗；如斯静谧从未感到！第15页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。SimileThe ground is as hard as stone after the drought.长久干旱之后土地硬得就像石头一样。MetaphorInside,the crimson room bloomed with light.那红色房间里灯火辉煌。Transferred EpithetThe white silence seemed to sneer,and a great fear came upon him.寂静茫茫雪野好像在冷笑，一阵恐惧朝他袭来。第16页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。PersonificationRough wind,that moanestGrief sad for song嚎啕大哭粗鲁风，悲痛得失去了声音SynaesthesiaThe gigantic snow-capped mountains were set off by the blue sky;several clouds cast their silver grey shadows on the white snow in the sun.蓝天衬着巨大雪峰，在太阳下，几块白云在皑皑雪峰间投下银灰云影。第17页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。HyperboleThe winds from the east go tearing round the mountains like forty thousand devils.从东方吹来风如同百万个恶魔在山周围狂奔而过。OxymoronAn atmosphere of dangerous calm could be felt throughout the mining region.全矿区都能够感受到一个危险平静气氛。第18页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。ParodyThis little island!This little gem set in a silver sea!这座小岛！这个镶嵌在银色海水中小宝石！(Famous quotations from Shakespeare:This precious stone in the silver sea.)ParallelismEverything has suddenly gone quiet.Birds do not chip.Leaves do not rustle.Insects do not sing.刹那间，万物都突然寂静无声，鸟儿不再鸣叫，树叶不再作响，昆虫也停顿了欢唱。第19页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。5.Containing Sentiment in Scenery第20页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Containing sentiment in scenery and blending sentiment with scenery（寓情于景）（寓情于景）combines emotions in a particular natural scenery or life scene,and expresses emotion by tracing the natural scenery or scenes.“all words of scenes are all words of sensations.”/“strong emotions are hidden in writing”一切景语皆情语Scenery is objective,and the author is sentient第21页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。To foil a sad mood with happy sceneryTo foil a happy mood with sad sceneryTo foil a happy mood with happy sceneryTo foil a sad mood with sad scenery The scenery with subjective color is more vivid.The authors are not merely to describe the scenery,but to express their emotions.第22页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。A Heptasyllabic Quatrain Du FuTwo yellow orioles sing in the green willows;A flock of white egrets surge up the blue sky.In my window is framed the snow-capped peak of Mount West.Close by my door are moored boats from faraway Wu.The first two:The beautiful scenery of springcheerful moodThe last two:The fresh sceneryinner complex emotion第23页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Ode to the Humble Abode-Liu YuxiIt doesnt matter if a mountain is high,It would be famous if a deity being in there.It doesnt matter if a lake is deep,It would be charmed if a dragon being in it.My house is humble,But my morality is noble.The overgrown moss turns the stone steps green,The green grass reflects the rooms blue.There are all the great scholars who I talk with.There are not the ignorant who I associate with.quiet environmentindifferent to fame,enjoy,leisurely 第24页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Thanks第25页