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CET-4第1页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved2第一部分 写作分值及评分标准介绍;第二部分 写作步骤;厘清思绪,把握文章结构 注意表示,用亮点词句得高分第三部分 写作模板第四部分 热点话题及平时练习第2页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved3第一部分第一部分 写作写作写作介绍:1.分值 15%2.考试时长 30分钟 3.考试时间 9:10-9:40(假如有可能,尽可能在9:35分监考老师提醒时完成初稿,并填到答题卡一上,给听力预留5分钟时间)4.纲领要求:选取考生所熟悉题材,要求考生依据所提供信息及提醒(如:提要,情景,图片或图表等)写出一篇短文,四级120-180词;第3页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved4第一部分第一部分 写作写作5.评分标准第4页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved5第一部分第一部分 写作写作漂漂亮亮(14分)，清清爽爽（11分），马马虎虎（8分），糊里糊涂（5分），一塌糊涂（2分）第5页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved6第一部分第一部分 写作写作写作练习:一.厘清思绪二.注意表示 (1)换词 (2)套句 (3)背篇三.主要考查三种题型第6页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved7第一部分第一部分 写作写作第一步:厘清思绪,把握文章结构!3*9第7页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved8第一部分第一部分 写作写作第一步:厘清思绪,把握文章结构!eg.Bicycles are very popular in China.Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.During the rush hour,you can see that thousands of people-man and woman,old and young-ride their bicycles to work and study.That is why China is called the kindom of bicycles.总-分-总格式第8页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved9第一部分第一部分 写作写作第二步:注意表示,用亮点词句得高分!换词 popular(adj.)-popularity(n.)years(n.)-decade(n.)the young(n.)-youngsters(n.)people(n.)-citizen(n.)idea/opinion(n.)-concept(n.)in the modern times-in the contemporary society in the present-day society in this day and age 第9页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved10第一部分第一部分 写作写作换形容词形容词good=conducive=beneficial=advantageousbad=detrimental=baneful=undesirable surprising=amazing=extraordinary=miraculousbeautiful=attractive=gorgeous=eye-catching poor=needy=impoverished=poverty-stricken rich=wealthy=affluent=well-to-do=well-off top=excellent=eminent=outstanding 第10页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved11第一部分第一部分 写作写作 换动词动词 improve=enhance=promote=strengthen=optimize cause=trigger=endanger solve=resolve=address=tackle=cope with=deal with destroy=tear down=knock down=eradicate develop=cultivate=foster=nurture=nourish encourage=motivate=stimulate=spur think=assert=hold=claim=argue complete=fulfill=accomplish=achieve keep=preserve=retain=hold=maintain=sustain destroy=impair=undermine=jeopardize=ruin reduce=ease=alleviate=relieve =lighten第11页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved12第一部分第一部分 写作写作换名词名词(1)influence=impact danger=perils=hazard pollution=contaminationhuman beings=mankind=human raceold people=the old=the elderly=the aged=senior citizenshappiness=cheerfulness=well-being eachers=instructors=educators=lecturers education=schooling=family parenting family parenting =upbringing第12页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved13第一部分第一部分 写作写作换名词名词(2)young people=youngsters=youths=adolescentsadvantage=merits=superiority=virtueresponsibility=obligation=duty=liabilityability=capacity=power=skill job=career=employment=profession enjoyment=pastimes=recreation=entertainment children=offspring=descendant=kid第13页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved14第一部分第一部分 写作写作换短语短语be filled with=be awash with=be inundate with=be saturated withstruggle for=aspire after=strive for=spare no efforts for embark on=take up=set about=go in for=engage in in contemporary society=in present-day society=in this day and age a host of=a multitude of=a vast number of =a vast amount of第14页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved15第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句eg.Bicycles are very popular in China.Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.During the rush hour,you can see that thousands of people-man and woman,old and young-ride their bicycles to work and study.That is why China is called the kindom of bicycles.第15页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved16第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句Bicycles are very popular in China.此句为主旨句,起总起全文作用可套用此句型,把主语按照要求进行改变即可,如 Online shopping is very popular in China.Watching movie is very popular in Wuhan Hubei Province,China.第16页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved17第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句Bicycles are very popular in China.In China,bicycles have gained great/wired popularity among Chinese people.第17页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved18第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句-06:现在网上购物已成为一个时尚-06:如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写-12:建设绿色校园很主要-06:越来越多博物馆无偿对外开放目标是为何?-12:一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 -06:娱乐活动各种多样第18页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved19第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句-06:现在网上购物已成为一个时尚In the recent decade,online shopping has gained wide popularity among youngsters.第19页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved20第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句-06:如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写In China,English learning has gained wide popularity among students.However,.第20页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved21第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句-12:建设绿色校园很主要In the contemporary society,the concept of green campuses has gained wide popularity among universities or colleges.第21页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved22第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句-06:越来越多博物馆无偿对外开放目标是为何?In the present-day society,free admission to museums is engjoying great popularity among Chinese citizens.第22页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved23第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句 -12:一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用During the past decades,disposable plastic baged gained wide popularity among people in the whole world.第23页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved24第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句 -06:娱乐活动各种多样In this day and age,a variety of recreational activities have gained wide popularity among individuals.第24页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved25第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句 试着翻译一句歌词:你在我眼里是最美!eg.In my eyes,you are the most beautiful.In my eyes,no one is more beautiful than you.第25页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved26第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句 句型提炼:No is/are more than .原句:Bicycles are very popular in China.In China,no means of transport is more popular and important than bicycles.第26页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved27第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句再试着翻译一句歌词:我能想到最浪漫事,就是和你一起慢慢变老!I can think the most romantic thing is growing old with you!In my eyes,no romance is more romantic than aging with you minute by minute,year by year and millennium by millennium.第27页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved28第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇四级作文主要考查几个形式为:议论文议论文(对比选择对比选择,现象解释现象解释,问题处理及原问题处理及原因解释因解释)-陈说现象陈说现象,解释现象解释现象,总结现象总结现象;图表题图表题-陈说图表所表示现实状况陈说图表所表示现实状况,解释原解释原因因,总结总结;信件题信件题-注意信件格式注意信件格式;第28页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved29第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇议论文模版(一)When it comes to the issue of ,different people have different opinions.(深入介绍这种现象或观点).Some people think that .They hold this opinion because(they think).Others,however,take a negative/positive attitude to .(Others,nevertheless,are more pessimistic/optimistic about it).From their point of view,.Besides,.第29页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved30第一部分第一部分 写作写作 In my opinion/Personally/From my point view/If asked my attitude,I am more in favor of .I stand in/hold this attitude/opinion/view because .Its true that ,but it doesnt mean that .Therefore/In a word/In short,.Instead,we should .第30页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved31第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇议论文模版(二)In recent years,（描写现实状况或趋势）.This has caused a lot of problems.First,（结果1）.For example,（细节，说明结果1）.Second,（结果2）.（细节，说明结果2）.Finally,（结果3）.（细节，说明结果3）.Since is such a serious problem,we should take effective measures to .First,we should （办法1）.Besides,（办法2）.And finally,（办法3）.第31页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved32第一部分第一部分 写作写作Try to write a passage according to the template 2 given above.Dear Andy-How are you?Your mother and I are fine.We both miss you and hope you are doing well.We look forward to seeing you again the next time you computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat.Love,Mom and Dad.第32页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved33第一部分第一部分 写作写作 In recent years/In this day and age/In the contemporary society,computer using/Internet/surfing online has gained a wide popularity among youngsters.Most people consider it as convenient.Though this has caused/triggered a lot of problems/issues.第一段第一段 总起总起,讲述现象讲述现象 第33页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved34第一部分第一部分 写作写作 First/Firstly/First of all,electronic communication is less direct than face-to-face communication.For example,if you type on your computer to discuss an issue with your friend,it would cost you more time than just saying it to him or her face to face.Words can never convey the full message,and instant messages usually cause misunderstanding.Second/Secondly/Further more,we are not robots,sometimes we just need to talk to a real human being rather than only a picture on the computer.Only when we talk face to face with gestures,can we express our fellings completely.In fact,face-to-face communication but not electronic communication makes us feel connected.第二段第二段 表示对此现象了解表示对此现象了解,并给出原因并给出原因第34页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved35第一部分第一部分 写作写作 Since indulging in/addicting to computer is such a serious problem,we should take effective measures to prevent the youngsters from addicting.We shouldnt spend too much time online rather than relating to people in the real world.第三段第三段 总结总结,表明自己态度表明自己态度,希望或方向希望或方向第35页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved36第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇议论文模版(三)Nowadays,great importance has been attached to （当前现象及存在问题）.Many ways can contribute to (要处理问题),but the following ones may be effective.First of all,（方法1）.Besides,（方法2）.Finally,（方法3）.In conclusion/To sum up,the ways I have mentioned above should never be separated from each other.（希望）.第36页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved37第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇议论文模版(四)Recently there has been a tremendous growth in （指出第一次数据改变）.What amazes us most is （第二次数据改变）.It is true that （点明改变趋势）.There are many reasons explaining .The main reason is .Whats more,.Thirdly,.As a result,.Considering all this,I believe （指出大学生在使用计算机中有困难和问题）.For one thing,(困难一）.For another,（困难二）.In conclusion,（提 出提议）.第37页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved38第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇议论文模版(五)Date Dear.,I am very glad to hear that you want to seek some suggestions about_ in order to .From my point of view,.Also,to you,I highly recommend that .On one hand,.On the other hand,.Besides,it is unnecessary for you to .Consequently,I believe that .I hope that my opinions are of help to yo,and please feel free to contact with me for more questions.Sincerely Yours,.第38页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved39第一部分第一部分 写作写作四种最常见话题分类一.教育 1.大学开设专业应该由谁决定 2.大学生应该怎样面对刚入学困难 3.实践课是否应该取代文化课 4.学生是否应该为小区作义工 5.学生是住校好还是与父母同住好 6.大学是理科主要还是文科主要 7.怎样对待年轻人喜欢购物现象第39页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved40第一部分第一部分 写作写作四种最常见话题分类二.社会生活 1.博物馆功效 2.尊重老年人 3.人们怎样做善事 4.是否只有政府能够解 决住房问题 5.政府是否应该支持运动员 6.年轻人失业问题 7.是否应该勉励老年人退休 8.企业是否应该提供医 疗服务 9.青少年犯罪问题 10.老年人数量增加 问题 11.缴税 12.时尚第40页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved41第一部分第一部分 写作写作四种最常见题型分类三.科技影响 1.图书是否被电脑所取代2.外来媒体影响3.手机对人们生活影响4.电脑能够翻译外文,所以不需要学习外语5.监视器广泛使用6.电视机使家人关系疏远7.使用机器人利弊8.航空运输是否应该被限制9.登月是否对日常生活有影响第41页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved42第一部分第一部分 写作写作四种最常见题型分类四.文化传统1.国际旅游利弊2.房屋建筑格调3.文化融合是否促进城市发展4.学习语言是否应该了解其文化5.是否应该勉励穿传统服装6.移民后人们是否应该接收新文化,还是组成自己小圈子第42页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved43第一部分第一部分 写作写作三种其它类型话题一.生物与环境1.提升燃料价格与环境问题关系2.动物试验是否该禁止3.我们应该怎样对待动物4.我们怎样对待垃圾社会 问题第43页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved44第一部分第一部分 写作写作三种其它类型话题二.男女平同等1.男女领导管理格调2.女子是否应该被指定作高层3.学校是否应该招收同等数量男女生第44页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved45第一部分第一部分 写作写作三种其它类型话题三.政府及抽象话题1.历史能否帮助我们2.幸福是由什么决定3.富国是否应该给穷国帮助4.政府是否应该花钱购置武器第45页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved46第一部分第一部分 写作写作平时练习（brain storm）1.以话题为中心词进行拓展 hardworking tired money experience exercise good habit ability wide view optimistic stress pressure load waste study time speaking ability practicing ability happy make friedns improvement confident solve problem gain knowledge communicationpart-time job第46页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved47第一部分第一部分 写作写作平时练习（brain storm）2.以单词为中心，展开写句子 Hardworking is very hard for me.I often get tired.But I can earn money from that.Except for this,there are also lots of advantages about part-time job.I can get lots of expericen about working and it can also exercise myself.part-time job第47页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved48第一部分第一部分 写作写作平时练习（brain storm）3.以句子为支撑，梳理文章结构 Nowadays,more and more college students are taking part-time jobs.On this phenomenon,different people hold different viewpoints.In my opinions,part-time job cut both ways.As for me,hardwording is very hard.I often get tired.But I can earn money from part-time job.part-time job第48页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved49第一部分第一部分 写作写作I can think the most romantic thing is growing old with you!1.直译,不符合英文表示习惯;2.old 有年长且无用之意;Euphemism:old people=senior citizen die=pass away go to the toilet=go to the restroom=powder ones face第49页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved50第一部分第一部分 写作写作Bicycles are very popular in China.此句为主旨句,起总起全文作用可套用此句型,把主语按照要求进行改变即可,如 Online shopping is very popular in China.Watching movie is very popular in Wuhan,China.第50页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved51第一部分第一部分 写作写作 That is why China is called the kindom of bicycles.此句为总结句,起总结以上内容作用.但注意此句中有一个小错误:当表示专有名词时,首尾单词首字母需大写,专有名词中实义词首字线需大写(名词,动词,形容词,副词,代词及数词),虚词首字线不用大写(介词,冠词及连词),所以应为The Kindom of Bicycles,为免犯错,也可全写成大写字母,如THE KINDOM OF BICYCLES第51页/10/10copyright All Rights Reserved52Good Luck!第52页