1求助信+建议信.doc

高考英语满分写作总复习冲刺演练
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（求助信+建议信）
专练一 求助信
【试题在线】
假如你是李华，乘飞机从北京到伦敦旅行。到达目的地取行李时发现行李箱破损，部分物品遗失。你与相关人员交涉无果，于是向航空公司写一封投诉信。内容主要包括：1. 说明个人相关信息（航线：航班MMY2577，时间：August28）；2.反映情况；3. 希望尽快得到解决。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文点拨】
Dear Madam/Sir,
I'm a Chinese passenger who took your Flight MMYZ 577 from Beijing to London on April 28. I' m writing to complain for the following reasons, hoping for your timely solving. (开门见山，经典句式）
My luggage bag was broken when I got it at the airport. And some of the articles were lost, among which was a pair of precious sports shoes. What was worse, I reported it to some of the staff on duty but no satisfying dealing, with which I've been so unhappy . (复杂句式，提升档次) I just can't imagine how a company with a good reputation can do such a thing! I do hope you' 11 take it seriously and get it settled as soon as possible. (分条陈述，条理清晰)
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. (语气得体，句式经典)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【必背句型】
1. I' m writing to complain about the cellphone I bought from
your store on May 9.
2. This letter is a complaint concerning the actions of one of
your salespersons.
3. Worse still, no lunch was provided and therefore I had to go
to the nearest restaurant, which was 30 minutes away.
4. When we opened the package, much to our surprise, the
back cover had been cracked and the screen had been
scratched.
5. Unless I receive a positive reply within the next three
weeks. I intend to take further action.
6. This incident shows there' s still room for improvement
concerning your customer service.
7. I'd like you to give back my money as soon as possible.
8. Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking
forward to your reply.
9. I sincerely hope that you will replace this computer as soon
as possible.
10. I hope you will give due attention to this matter.
专练二 建议信
【试题在线】
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信咨询如何才能学好中文。请根据下列要点写封回信。要点：1. 参加中文学习班；2. 看中文书刊、电视；3. 学唱中文歌曲；4. 交中国朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文点拨】
Dear Peter，
I' m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. ( 开门见山，点明主题) Here are a few suggestions for your reference. (过渡句承上启下)
First, it is important to take a Chinese course , as you' ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. ( 建议一，理由解释 ) Then, it also helps if you watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. (建议二，补充细节) Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.（建议三，细节支撑) In addition, you can make more Chinese friends. (建议四) I am quite sure that they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. ( 补充理由)
Why not try and write me in Chinese next time? (鼓励尝试)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【必背句式】
1. I' m sorry to hear that it is not easy for you to fit in with the
new class.
2. Here are my suggestions, which I hope can be helpful to you.
3. It is advisable that you join in some activities to make more
friends.
4. It is suggested that you take part in more activities to
develop friendship.
5. Personally speaking, you' d better improve your spoken
English first.
6. As far as I' m concerned, it' s a good idea to improve your
oral English first.
7. Turn to your teacher for help if necessary.
8. Why not listen to music in your spare time?
9. How about listening to music in your spare time?
10. I hope my suggestions can be of help to you.